I Build a Base in a Wild World
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Travel through the mountains, into the vast ocean depths, and into the dark underworld. My name is Lin Xiu, I am a survivor and an explorer. Lin Xiu: "Look, there is a demon worm ahead. It is very dangerous. We just need to remove its head..."
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Official(4)Scraped 17d ago
some problems
Personally, I think there are some points in your book that I can't understand. 1. You appeared in the desert at the beginning, right? Why didn't you build a wall around the place where you live? Who dares to sleep in a desert forest without a wall? You yourself said that monsters broke into your thatched hut. 2. Why do those big monsters come to donate blood? There is still a rush, and the protagonist is quite capable. He is not afraid of death and has to rush in. 3. That ball can fly! When it comes to the bear-man, the protagonist knows the danger, but why does he jump in front of the ball and fight the bear-man? This is not protection, it is courting death. Why turn science fiction novels into fantasy and invincible novels?
Science fiction becomes fantasy!
It was normal at the beginning, with some mention of technology, but gradually the direction deviated from the theme. From the moment it was transformed by the blood pool, the train of thought became distorted! Superpowers, demigods, and magical skills have all appeared. Let's discuss it with the author and change it into a fantasy novel!
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The book was a little flat at the beginning, but then it started to turn around around chapter 20.
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Official(4)Scraped 17d ago
some problems
Personally, I think there are some points in your book that I can't understand. 1. You appeared in the desert at the beginning, right? Why didn't you build a wall around the place where you live? Who dares to sleep in a desert forest without a wall? You yourself said that monsters broke into your thatched hut. 2. Why do those big monsters come to donate blood? There is still a rush, and the protagonist is quite capable. He is not afraid of death and has to rush in. 3. That ball can fly! When it comes to the bear-man, the protagonist knows the danger, but why does he jump in front of the ball and fight the bear-man? This is not protection, it is courting death. Why turn science fiction novels into fantasy and invincible novels?
Science fiction becomes fantasy!
It was normal at the beginning, with some mention of technology, but gradually the direction deviated from the theme. From the moment it was transformed by the blood pool, the train of thought became distorted! Superpowers, demigods, and magical skills have all appeared. Let's discuss it with the author and change it into a fantasy novel!
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The book was a little flat at the beginning, but then it started to turn around around chapter 20.
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