
The Wonderful Fourth Fleet of the Universe
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The content of the novel is purely funny, do not substitute all science from reality.
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Some suggestions for this book
The characters in the book can have some descriptions of their expressions, but the storyline should not be too fast, as this will easily make people confused. The characters also need some psychological description, and the characterization of the characters is also very important. There is a lot of room for expansion in the plot of this book. In addition, the battle scenes should not be passed over in passing, because this situation can better reflect the image of each character. The negotiation scenes can be simpler, but the key points must be emphasized, because this can give readers an overview of the situation and changes. Come on.
Come on come on
Trying to write better stories to enrich my second issue (Dog Head)
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
Some suggestions for this book
The characters in the book can have some descriptions of their expressions, but the storyline should not be too fast, as this will easily make people confused. The characters also need some psychological description, and the characterization of the characters is also very important. There is a lot of room for expansion in the plot of this book. In addition, the battle scenes should not be passed over in passing, because this situation can better reflect the image of each character. The negotiation scenes can be simpler, but the key points must be emphasized, because this can give readers an overview of the situation and changes. Come on.
Come on come on
Trying to write better stories to enrich my second issue (Dog Head)















