Pick up Attribute Martial Arts

There is actually only a thin line between beasts and beasts!

How should I put it? This book was very enjoyable when I first read it, but after reading more than 60 pages, I found that in addition to picking up attributes, I also found ways to pick up attributes. As for the blood, there seems to be no blood, because there is no blood to talk about because they are all crushed? The background really looks like a starry sky! What kind of warrior level? What kind of level and what kind of king level? Isn't this the level drawn in Swallowing Starry Sky? I didn't think so at first, anyway, the setting of this kind of article is usually like this, and then the spiritual master appeared, and I vomited and returned it to Luo Feng. Forget about the good spiritual master, you have another original energy, and then the six major forces include martial arts schools, the military, and technology groups. Isn't it just like the background of Swallowing Starry Sky? It's a cool novel. The first 20 or 30 pictures look cool, but if they are too cool, they give people a feeling of being old-fashioned and not innovative. Everyone who studies Chinese knows the three elements of a novel: characters, plot, and environment. First of all, the characters are not fleshed out enough. The point is, after reading it for a long time, I didn't even get to portray a decent girl. I have always believed that the heroine is the lubricant of the novel. Without it, the novel would lose its flavor. After reading for a long time, there were a few rough guys talking about it, and there were no rough guys at all. The character descriptions were relatively hollow and lacked fullness. I am also not a great writer. I think the character of Admiral Buntora in the light novel was relatively full-bodied, with flesh and blood, making it look like a real person with a soul. The second plot, the plot is flat. Moreover, you have written more than 60 pieces in just three or four days. There are no ups and downs. I don't know how to write novels. Maybe as someone who has read novels for more than ten years, I will comment on one sentence. It is also what Tathagata Buddha said: How can the world be leveled by a wave of injustice? You have already achieved great martial arts and leveled the world, so there is no peak, you know! For example, if you ask a driver who is very energetic to drive on a straight road with fields as far as the eye can see, he will fall asleep while driving. A tired driver may not be able to sleep if he is asked to drive on a mountain road. The third point is environmental description. When writing novels and articles, most people describe the environment first, because the environment can (1) explain the background of the story and lay the foundation for plot development (2) hint and highlight the character's mood (3) set off the character's activities and make the character's image vivid (4) reveal the character's personality (5) contrast the character's image (6) increase the authenticity of the novel (7) exaggerate the atmosphere (8) promote the development of the storyline (Don't say that the sixth point is nonsense. For novel writers, when you write a descriptive novel, you think the world you describe is false. How can you give readers a good sense of involvement? So writing novels is like playing a virtual game. The readers you want to write can't distinguish between reality and truth. This is what we call obsession. Only by becoming your fans can you read the story.) Let's make the final summary! What is a novel? Novel is a literary style that focuses on portraying characters and reflects social life through complete storylines and specific environmental descriptions. Social life here refers to the world you build.

I've read 50 pictures and I can't remember any of the supporting characters' names except for the protagonist. The character descriptions are so poor that there's no sense of immersion at all, and they're too watery. Each picture lists system abilities. Each picture introduces which abilities have improved and which have new attributes. Even the ordinary strength, physique, and speed +1 are all listed. It's too watery.

If there are fewer explosions, we will have to find another one. Please don't disappoint us fans🙏

The author has a loophole. The ants attacking the city more than 200 chapters later cost at least 100 million. If you fight off the ant colony alone, it will cost at least tens of millions. As a result, your blank attribute is only a little over 90,000? The power of evolution too, are you kidding me?

Just now QQ Reading told me "Hey, it's up to you to maintain world peace." I thought it was an opportunity, That's it?

I hope the author can publish a book with an apocalyptic theme

The ancients said: Comments have produced talents since ancient times. Come and let me see, right? See if the ancients deceived me.

Is it possible to get an automatic absorption system to make it embarrassing for those who keep picking it up?

Hurry up and put it on the shelves Breaking news Still need to make up the number of words