Love in Heaven and Earth for Three Lives
About This Novel
Mo Qianchen has loved and been with Ling Xiuhan for 11 years. Not as good as his first love. Even getting married did not shake his love for his first love at all. Haha Why should I hang myself from your tree? I, the empress of Zisu Kingdom, have three thousand beauties in my harem. What kind of handsome man do you want? But fate was unwilling to do so. I didn't avoid meeting him in Zisu Country either. Who would have thought that Ling Xiuhan's first love would actually be Mo Qianchen's niece? I don't know where this evil fate will go or where it will stay.
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Official(1)Scraped 5d ago
Come on, my baby
The beginning of this article is actually good, but I still have to say that many of the descriptions in your article are not particularly detailed. For example, in the second paragraph of Chapter 1, if you think about it, shadows can't walk. Although they can understand what you want to express, this way of expressing it is incorrect. Also, it would be better if it was a shadow stretched by the setting sun. And later on, you have very little description of the character's emotions. This is very important. At the beginning of your entire article, you must first establish a good image of the protagonist, at least let people know the protagonist's personality characteristics. These must be reflected in the character's emotions. Of course, these are just personal thoughts, and your own thoughts are the most important. Come on baby.
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Official(1)Scraped 5d ago
Come on, my baby
The beginning of this article is actually good, but I still have to say that many of the descriptions in your article are not particularly detailed. For example, in the second paragraph of Chapter 1, if you think about it, shadows can't walk. Although they can understand what you want to express, this way of expressing it is incorrect. Also, it would be better if it was a shadow stretched by the setting sun. And later on, you have very little description of the character's emotions. This is very important. At the beginning of your entire article, you must first establish a good image of the protagonist, at least let people know the protagonist's personality characteristics. These must be reflected in the character's emotions. Of course, these are just personal thoughts, and your own thoughts are the most important. Come on baby.
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