Immortal from Another World

I hope the author will stop digging holes. I started reading your book a few years ago, and I had a few questions along the way. First, Feng Chuge was very strong in his first appearance. Didn't he say that he took the Po Immortal Pill and advanced to the Divine Lord? Why is he still a ninth-grade immortal? The second appearance was too weak. After all, it was the reincarnation of the Emperor of Heaven's clone, which was far worse than Yuqing. Secondly, Yuqing does not match the description of her first appearance. I remember the description: 'Looking extremely young, as if time has never stopped, a boy...'? In his second appearance, Yuqing calls himself 'Old Man'. A young man calling himself Old Man seems a bit...? . Thirdly, the Shaodian Heavenly Emperor was born in the demon race, and Qingluo Shenjun is the number one master under him. Is Qingluo Shenjun a human race or a demon race? Fourth, as mentioned earlier in this book, the Qingluo Realm has entered the Age of Ending Law after the War of the Gods and cannot bear the existence of the God Lord. The island-suppressing immortal weapon on the island in the Moon Lake, the Shuiyue Magic Mirror, is only of the eighth grade. However, when the protagonist comes overseas, there are too many high-level immortal weapons, Xuantian treasures and even creation treasures, and the number of high-level Immortal Lords is overwhelming. Fifth, Shui Ling, Zidian, Chaos, are these three gods or pseudo-gods? , Jin Qilin said before that the above three are just false gods, only a little stronger than the ninth-grade heavenly immortal? For the time being, it is defined as ancestor immortal. If it is a false god, Shui Ling's strength seems a bit too high. How can he be more powerful than the ancestors without gathering all the clones? Sixth, is the founding founder of Yuehu Zhongdao sect Shaodian's concubine? The island in the Moon Lake is connected to the Beiming Immortal Palace. Did he go down to the lower world with Yuqing? If not, how did his concubine get to the lower world? What does the lower world come from? Seventh, there are too many ostentatious characters in the book. Eighth, when the protagonist received the inheritance from Emperor Senluo, Emperor Senluo said that the Immortal Lord must fully master Yin and Yang, the Universe, the Five Elements, Life and Death, and Destiny before being able to advance to the Heavenly Emperor. So how did Shaodian, who only knew the Way of the Universe, advance to the Heavenly Emperor? Ninth, Emperor Senluo also said that Emperors who have not reached the ninth heaven cannot survive the catastrophe of disillusionment. So how did Yuqing know about the great disillusionment? The above points are the questions I have been pursuing this book for so long. They only represent some of my personal opinions. In fact, there are many more that I won't go into. Although there are some flaws, I still like this book very much, otherwise I would not have pursued it for so long. I hope the author can finish it.

First: the title of the book and the identity of the protagonist 1. I remember that the author changed the title of the book once before, and it took me a while to find the new title. Before the title was changed, it was called "The Immortal". At that time, I only read the book because of the title and the introduction. In fact, I still don't understand how the title and content of the book should match? In the early years, I didn't have any requirements for reading novels, but now that Internet literature is popular, there are countless novels of various types, like crucian carp crossing the river. The title and introduction of your book are important if you want to attract readers. 2. The author has set the identity of the protagonist as a time traveler, but there is nothing else except the identity of the time traveler. Unlike other authors who carry a golden finger or something, except for quoting the Taoist Nine-Character Mantra and the Eight Formations of the Wind Queen, there is nothing else. I am not saying this to ask the author to forcefully add a cheat to the protagonist. I just want to express that since he is a time traveler, the protagonist himself must either know something that people in this world cannot, or give up his identity as a time traveler. -Just my personal opinion, just read it to the author. Second: Time nodes of major events The battle between the six mythical beast families and the demons: It was described in the early stage that the Qingluo Continent was created by the creator god Qingluo Shenjun, but before Qingluo Shenjun came down from the fairy world, this land was ruled by the demons. In order to achieve the star core, Qingluo Shenjun came to the Qingluo world with the six mythical beast families, and experienced a life-and-death battle with the demons to seal the demons. During this period, the six mythical beast families and the demons fought fiercely to break the sky, and only then did Wa Mu mend the sky. Qingluo Shenjun's Road to the Heavenly Emperor: Qingluo Shenjun touched the gate of the Heavenly Emperor 180 million years ago. The entire process of the birth of the star core in the Qingluo world took 100 million years. However, when 80 million-year-old Shaodian and Qingluo Shenjun went to collect the star core, they were blocked by Hao Yi. Qingluo Shenjun was seriously injured and the seven-treasure Qingluo tree was damaged. Shaodian was afraid that Hao Yi would destroy the star core and used the Time Array to seal the Qingluo Realm. At this point, the Qingluo Realm's path to the sky was cut off. {So God Lord Qingluo did not get the star core at all, then Cang Gu, one of the three ancestors of the inland demon clan, said that Lord Qingluo got 80% of the star core. So how did this come about? } Battle of the Gods: The only clear explanation for the Battle of the Gods is that it took place in the 100 million years when the star core was born. After the Lord Qingluo sealed the demons, he returned to the fairy world. During this period, the human race rose up and defeated the six mythical beast families, and the six mythical beast families invited the avatar of Qingluo God Lord to come. But from what Feng Chuge said, Shui Ling, Zidian, and Chaos were originally unable to defeat the clone of Qingluo Divine Lord. It was Mr. Wuliu who secretly helped defeat the clone of Qingluo Divine Lord. Then the question is, the road to heaven was not sealed during the battle of the gods. Emperor Haotian descended the clone after the road to heaven was sealed. The timing here was seriously mismatched, and then Shaodian lowered his avatar to seriously injure Wu Liu, and so on. . . Jiuyin Immortal Mansion: According to Su Wu, Jiuyin Immortal Mansion first appeared one thousand two hundred years ago, but Leng Xuan also said that in the past ten thousand years, countless immortal kings have fallen on the island in Yue Lake in order to explore Jiuyin Immortal Mansion. The only explanation here is that the Jiuyin Immortal Palace was actually known to Yuehu Zhongdao ten thousand years ago. It is estimated that it was discovered later when there was too much movement to break the formation. Demon-Suppressing Ruins: At the beginning of the era, it was attached to the Qingluo Realm. Later, a space rift appeared and monsters appeared. Its leader was half-cultivated to step into the Heavenly Emperor, and was physically sealed by an ancestor from each of the eight sects. I don't want to say anything more, either that monster is too naive, or those eight ancestors are even more heaven-defying than the protagonist. As for the time, it should be after the War of the Gods, otherwise there would be nothing to do with the island in the Moon Lake. Summary: The early content is a bit weak, and the number of chapters is too few. Suggestion: Regarding the early content, it is recommended that the author revise it and revise the time points and content of some major events. It would be best to revise the word count of the chapters to retain the essence, so that I estimate more readers will like this book in the future. Of course, the premise is that the author has time. As a reader who really likes this book, I really hope that this book can become popular. That's all for today, there are many more to come back to next time when I have more time. The above are just my personal opinions and suggestions, just read the author's words. [Skull]

I don't know what you know about Xianxia! But the content of this book is wonderful! Even the level of cultivating immortals is photographed particularly well! Why can't it be popular? Is it because the author didn't advertise it?

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This book is very good. After reading the introduction, I felt that it was very interesting. The author has coded a lot of words, so I can read it carefully now. It's really good! I really like your writing style. Wouldn't it be so beautiful? Well done to you, author! You are the best! Love you so much

If I work harder, stay up late, work overtime, and update 4,000 words twice a day, will more people read it? Will there be more recommendation votes? Give it a try in April. Although people in middle age are not as good as dogs, they cannot be compared with 10,000 words a day when they were young; However, I still want to try again!

This book is very well written by the author. After reading your book and falling in love with your book, it is a kind of fate. It was the author's efforts that moved me. Thank you author, I love you~

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The author is your mother. Is there such an appetizing thing as B? I will update a chapter in a few days. There is a death in your family and you are still in the hospital.

I still have a lot of doubts after reading the book, and I hope the author will answer them one by one. Race and power- 1. Last time I asked a question: Except for Shaodian, the five orthodox heavenly emperors in the immortal world, the other four were all from the human race. So why did the status of the human race in the immortal world fall so low? 2. Why didn't Hao Yi risk his life to kill the new emperor of the rebel clan? Is he specifically dealing with Qingluo Shenjun, who is about to be promoted as a human race, or is Qingluo Shenjun a traitor to the human race and colluding with Shaodian? I really want to know why Hao Yi is so hostile to Shaodian and Qing Luo. In order to prevent Qing Luo Shenjun from being promoted to the Emperor of Heaven, he sent his clone to the lower realm to find Qing Luo Zhu, so now he has lost a clone. 3. According to the book, the rebel tribe is not an enemy of the entire fairy world, but a hostile force that competes with the Northern Territory for resources or territory. I have a bold guess that the disappearance of Qingluo Shenjun should have started when the Northern Territory fought with the Ni clan and Shaodian was taken away by Hei Dian. The newly promoted Heavenly Emperor of the Rebel clan could not have been an unknown person before the Shenjun. Also, 90% of the Gods of the Rebel clan have fallen, but they still have the ability to create a Heavenly Emperor. It is amazing! So I suspect that the new emperor of the rebel clan is the Qingluo God. 4. Which force is Qingluo Shenjun? If it was Wanxing Pavilion, why would the Qingluo Pearl be placed in Beiming Immortal Palace and be stolen out? If it wasn't Shaodian from Beiming Immortal Palace, why did he help a human god to advance to the level of Emperor of Heaven? Aren't you afraid of threats to your rule of the Northern Territory? Or is it to fight against the rebel tribe? Today I have limited time to talk about this first. In fact, the author has overturned the previous foreshadowing since the protagonist entered the fairy world. It makes me, a person with severe obsessive-compulsive disorder, have to find fault with this.