Yunyang Scholars in Red Mansions

I plan to finish this book today. In fact, there are about ten chapters of content in my original manuscript, but after looking at it, most of them will overlap with the content mentioned at the beginning of the new book, and will even be mentioned in the new book. And then, I am basically thinking about the layout of Jiangnan in my mind, and I will write less carefully on the Kyoto side. So I tried to cut it down and condense it as much as possible. The specific details will be included in the new book as their memories. It also leaves some room for your imagination. As for the rest, I will explain it in my final remarks. Chapter 170 is the final chapter, but it is a big chapter and has no title. Chapter 85 is also a turning point in the book. This is my little bit of caution.

The sentences are not very fluent, and it's a bit tiring to read, but overall it's okay, so please give it a thumbs up from the author. I hope the author can put more effort into choosing words and sentences.

Me: Wang You, please tell me loudly if I am abusing you. Wang You:...... I smiled and nodded: You read through the Four Books and Five Classics, and think of the sentence in "Mencius": "Therefore, when Heaven is about to entrust a great responsibility to a person, he must first strain his mind, strain his muscles and bones, starve his body and skin, deplete his body, and disturb his actions, so he can move his heart and forbearance to gain what he can't do." Wang You: Are you God? Me: No, I am a human being just like you, but to you I am your god. Wang You: Does that mean you can change my life? Me: Yes. Wang You: Can you send me back to the real world? Me: Do you want to die? Wang You: I have already died once, so why should I be afraid again? Me:...... Wang You: Is it too difficult? Then let me change the question. Can you tell me whether I will choose the immortals from the world or the high scholars in the mountains in the future? Me: What do you think? Wang You: I don't know, so I want to ask you, who should I marry in the future? Me: Let's talk about the previous problem of returning to the real world. Wang You: Please tell me. Me: This world of red mansions is like a flower and a beautiful family. Assume that the two sisters are by your side in the future. Hey, pay attention to your image (don't drool). What I am talking about is if, if. Are you willing to go back to the real world? Wang You: (touching his face) It seems like it's pretty good here. Me: It smells so good? Wang You: Wang Jingze's theorem? Who are you? How do you know the word "really fragrant"? Me:......(Disconnected)

I spent 2 nights looking for the previous foreshadowing and looking at some unfilled holes. WPS contains the table of contents on the left, text in the middle, and comments on the right. It gave me a headache. The annotation started from the early morning of yesterday after finishing the writing. Especially starting from chapter 52 and continuing to chapter 143. May has the most events and is the most complicated, especially the dialogue between the Wang family and his son, which reflects the court situation, as well as private family affairs, etc. It shows some things about the Jia and Wang families around the life of Wang Xifeng, Jia Lian and his wife. When I was sorting it out with comments, I discovered some interesting things. This will be written in a later update, so it can be regarded as echoing the previous article (filling in the holes). Today's update will be written tonight, so I have to take a break.

One chapter is all about describing other people. It doesn't matter what the priority is. Who is the protagonist? Just describe the other person a little bit. That's awesome. Someone will do something in the future, and the author will stir up trouble again. . . . Water. Specifically Chapters 46-47.

Get up and continue typing. Before typing, review the 12th episode of 87 Dream of Red Mansions, and then listen to "The Burial Flower Song" to immerse yourself and accumulate feelings.

The author described the people in it as very mysterious and unpredictable. How old are Lin Xue and Lin Xue? They are all children. There is also the housewife. The protagonist thinks a lot in one sentence, and then all of them are incomprehensible. I saw where the protagonist was beaten by his father. All of them are riddlemen, all of them are enigmatic. Even the little girl Xue Baochai inexplicably told why the protagonist was beaten. Are we readers really confused? Brother, can you be more realistic? The protagonist's mother can also guess that her son will definitely be beaten, as if she knows what the protagonist is going to say to his father? You understand the situation so thoroughly that even a child under the age of ten is written like an adult of several decades (the emphasis should not be on the protagonist), but the reader is confused and doesn't know what you want to express?

Kavinka is so awesome, no matter how I write it, it's not to my liking. Since I can't even convince myself, I definitely can't convince you. I originally planned to write a request for leave, but then I thought about it and posted it directly to the book review circle. (2020, 11, 05)