Traveling Through the Mountains

Why do so many people abandon the novels of Heaven and Earth after reading half of them? The first one is that you have magic power, but you travel to martial arts. Occasionally, forget it. However, some novels are frequent and are not at the same level at all. They can actually be greatly improved in martial arts. It is unrealistic. It would be better to just keep writing about cultivating immortals, and occasionally mix in some other types of worlds. (Second) The final result of traveling through the heavens is immortality. Traveling through Marvel in the early and middle stages is understandable, but I can't figure out some novels traveling through wilderness disasters, such as Jura and other animal worlds. (Third), there should be fewer unpopular planes, because most readers do not know about the unpopular planes, but the author did not give comprehensive information when writing about that plane, because he was afraid that readers would miss the word count, and the author did not want to write in such detail. (Fourth), many readers like Dou Po, Douluo, Perfect and other novel worlds, but many novels are set in the prehistoric world, and the ability to achieve immortality and create a new way of heaven is finally completed. However, many novel planes are not suitable to be written into novels. For example, Douluo is not suitable at all. At least novels that cover the sky and master the way are suitable. Unsuitable novel planes cannot be added because of certain abilities in the novel or following the trend. (5) It is good to have ideas, and you can write novel things, but some things are ingrained ideas in people's minds and are difficult to change. However, when writing novels, you must break these ideas of readers. Not only will this not make readers like it, but it will also cause a large number of readers to abandon the book. This is also the main reason why readers abandon the book (although the above points are not detailed, you can think of what I want to say)

I dare not read this book. The protagonist has no humanity at all. All he has is the indifference, cold-bloodedness and indifference of the gods. I am afraid that if I continue reading, I will become like the protagonist. At least I still have some conscience.

This novel is like a bowl of water, colorless and tasteless. Ordinary is not ordinary. It has a lifeless style. It is a good subject matter, but it can be ruined by the author's writing style. It is tasteless and suitable for hermits or monks who have no desires or pursuits. I hope all book friends will be cautious when entering this trap. The poor will withdraw!

This novel is really cold-blooded. Although I don't like to read The Virgin, I really can't watch this one. Not to mention robbing the origin of the way of heaven, practicing cultivation is against heaven. Every time you go to a world where people are slaughtered and bald, why are you still cultivating immortality? Why do you still cultivate immortality if you don't stop cultivating immortality? Especially in the world of Hua Qiangu, which actually trains Hua Qiangu, who is only a teenager, to practice adult elixirs. You are not cultivating immortality. You are possessed by a demon and have drifted away. Those who say his writing is good, are you just water? The protagonist is also a human being. Does cultivating immortals mean he is ruthless and cold-blooded? I laughed because Heaven is ruthless, but he is also impartial. I have read so many novels and have never seen anything like this. It would be nice to take the power of the ancient world and train living people into human elixirs. My own apprentice is going to trick him too. He's hopeless and he's not convinced yet.

I hope the author won't write messy limericks

I have a habit of meditating and practicing Qi for an hour every night. At 12 o'clock sharp, I opened the computer as usual and entered the words "Asuka Qigong" and other words. I opened the content and started to practice Qi while reading. Suddenly I felt a clear stream in my Dantian spiraling up and down, and then my body slowly rose. As if his soul was out of his body, an inexplicable and indescribable thing suddenly rushed out of his dantian and flew forward quickly, landing on Hao Yingjie who was sleeping with his girlfriend/to borrow the name of my classmate, he lives next door to me/it happened to land in an indescribable place where his girlfriend was. Hao Yingjie suddenly became so angry that he fainted. Opening my eyes, I saw all kinds of ancient objects in front of me. Who am I? Where am I? Am I still Hao Yingjie? Is there anyone? Is there anyone? Hao Yingjie opened his mouth and called. Only the echoes came over and over again. Hao Yingjie thought to himself, have I traveled through time to see if there is a system master with a golden finger? Grandpa? Jin Da Da? Didn't Hao Yingjie think to himself, maybe I need to shed my blood to recognize the master? But I only have a set of ancient clothes on me! The more Hao Yingjie thought about it, the more helpless he became, sitting silently on the ancient wooden bed. The sky outside the house is getting darker and darker, the red, yellow and orange light is crushing the light bit by bit, and it is getting dark. Hao Yingjie was startled, his heart palpitating, and he became more and more uneasy. Putting aside the current situation, he should first consider how to survive in this place. Hao Yingjie stood up, found his shoes and put them on. There was a small hole in the woolen shoes. He sighed, hey, let's go explore outside the house first! Gurgling, his stomach made a sound, and he also fell down. When he woke up again, he found that it was bright and the sun was burning on Hao Yingjie's body like fire. Hao Yingjie touched the pocket of his old coarse clothes without giving up, but it was empty... What the hell, those who promised to time travel were all rich and powerful, where were the children of the promised time travel family, and where was the golden finger of the grandfather who promised to travel through the system? There is no way to go out and get something to eat first! Hao Yingjie thought to himself. When I walked out of the ancient house, I saw an antique scene in front of me. The women's clothes were chest-length and exposed to the shoulders. Could it be that they were in the Tang Dynasty? But where to get food? If you want to touch porcelain, find a rich and powerful person to touch and get some food first. You won't be beaten to death! Hao Yingjie thought to himself. No, just find a pretty girl to faint on him, and the girl can't be too old, right, right, that's it, a genius like me, Hao Yingjie? You can also use the girl's words to figure out what dynasty we are in now, and I will write about it for everyone next time! I don't know how my classmates felt when they saw it.

I had high expectations for this novel at the beginning. It feels like the author has changed since the beginning of the mythical world. The protagonist always likes to complain like a string. Many of the words are very vulgar and there are more and more flaws.

I clicked in several times but couldn't help but quit. I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is too pretentious. Why not go to heaven?

You didn't write it in the beginning, but you imposed it later! Don't look at garbage

Invisible pretense throughout the whole process, no slap in the face A poem describing the main character in the content Look at me, I'm suffering from embarrassment The Condor has been here for so long? Will it last a lifetime?