Civilized Cultivation Record
by Nian Si Kong
About This Novel
A passionate young man, a failed mission, and a magical crystal, let's see how he takes civilization to travel across all realms, reverse time and space, conquer dimensions, and create an immortal legend! ! Ps: The original name of the novel is "Beyond Dimensions", also known as "Journey Through the Heavens", also known as..., There is no way, there is too much content to express, but there is only one name allowed! Ps: The background of the story world is grand, and there is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. It is a slow-burning type, but it will be more powerful in the later stage! Ps: The novel will mention some cultivation techniques and theories, please do not practice them at will! Ps: There's so much I want to say, but due to the word limit, I'll stop here! ! !
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Official(7)Scraped 21d ago
The strength of the protagonist.
I feel that your ability to write the protagonist fluctuates greatly. In Chapter 8, killing dozens of horse boys can cause a big fuss. During the fight in Chapter 11, he looked so fierce that he could even leave a long crack in the floor. It takes so much effort to just kill dozens of horse boys. Just hitting the head with dozens of stones would be OK. Don't tell me that he was not strong enough to kill people with stones at that time. And you focus on his perception ability in the book. With his skill at using darts, I don't believe that killing dozens of people requires close combat. That's bullshit. And as a killer, when he killed two ordinary horsemen, he would let the corpses fall to the ground to make noise. And even if it makes some noise. You can also use darts to kill Ma Zai before he sees it and shouts. After all. Ma Zai came over and saw the situation and yelled. With the protagonist's ability, it is impossible for them to come over and react after shouting. After all, his perception range is dozens of meters. Even if it is for the sake of the subsequent plot, there is no need to make such a stupid mistake.
The content is good.
good book
Unexpectedly, after searching for so long, I finally found a book as good as mine! Needless to say, here's the five-star review!
good book
This book looks good, you can take a look.
About the plot
The preliminary preparations have been completed and the plot is about to unfold. Keep all fellow Taoists waiting!
The story is wonderful, well conceived and written, and it's beautiful to read.
new book
New book, please support, thank you!
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 21d ago
The strength of the protagonist.
I feel that your ability to write the protagonist fluctuates greatly. In Chapter 8, killing dozens of horse boys can cause a big fuss. During the fight in Chapter 11, he looked so fierce that he could even leave a long crack in the floor. It takes so much effort to just kill dozens of horse boys. Just hitting the head with dozens of stones would be OK. Don't tell me that he was not strong enough to kill people with stones at that time. And you focus on his perception ability in the book. With his skill at using darts, I don't believe that killing dozens of people requires close combat. That's bullshit. And as a killer, when he killed two ordinary horsemen, he would let the corpses fall to the ground to make noise. And even if it makes some noise. You can also use darts to kill Ma Zai before he sees it and shouts. After all. Ma Zai came over and saw the situation and yelled. With the protagonist's ability, it is impossible for them to come over and react after shouting. After all, his perception range is dozens of meters. Even if it is for the sake of the subsequent plot, there is no need to make such a stupid mistake.
The content is good.
good book
Unexpectedly, after searching for so long, I finally found a book as good as mine! Needless to say, here's the five-star review!
good book
This book looks good, you can take a look.
About the plot
The preliminary preparations have been completed and the plot is about to unfold. Keep all fellow Taoists waiting!
The story is wonderful, well conceived and written, and it's beautiful to read.
new book
New book, please support, thank you!
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