
Shi Erlang of Red Mansion
by Sacrifice Elixir Extraordinary
About This Novel
"On June 26th, stars fell from the sky, and Erlang Shen appeared in the Shi's Mansion." "Shi Erlang from the east of the city, God's Eyes Que Tingwen, the imperial capital has a gatekeeper." Two nursery rhymes reveal the two lives of Shi Wenlin who traveled through time.
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Official(18)Scraped 21d ago
Why do so many people like to use other people's poems to show off?
Isn't it good to be original? Is it necessary to write poetry in ancient times?
It looks fantasy but not fantasy. What are you writing about?
Write a novel? It looks boring. Do you still need to make money? Write words about cultivating immortality. , Just write an invincible article. The girl grinds and chirps.
It's hard to understand that a reborn person who is younger than yourself needs maternal love
The protagonist was 20 years old in his previous life, and his reborn mother was probably not 20 years old when she gave birth to him, right? It's hard for me to understand how to ask her for maternal love. I'll be embarrassed, okay?
I can't stand it anymore, I'm destined to fall into the street.,,,,,,. . Pull the soil, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no.
A pure idiot, plus a scumbag. This idiot has the nerve to look down on Jia Baoyu. He is worthless and has nothing, yet he dares to let others elope with you. What the hell are you doing? Women in this era cannot accept it, let alone in ancient times. Zhuo Wenjun is very romantic, but his mother Zhuo Wenjun was abandoned. I was in my 20s in the dormitory, and lived for more than ten years after that, adding up to my 30s. In my heart, I really am not a fucking idiot. No matter how you look at it, it's disgusting. The character of the main character is so rubbish.
I don't know what I'm writing, please don't touch Porcelain Dream of Red Mansions, okay?
The low-magic novel is forced to be written as an industrial novel. Why do you think you imposed a forehead tattoo? Why write about The Red Mansion? If you can't cover this set well, why don't you just open a new book?
The various logics don't add up. It feels like I haven't traveled through time to the Red Mansions, but just to the Republic of China era.
This book was really disappointing. When I first read it, I thought it was okay, but for some reason, the further I read, the more I felt that the bull's head and the horse's mouth didn't fit. Well, I just kept reading patiently until I had no choice but to jump and read. It really made me unable to open my eyes. And when you get all kinds of modern weapons later, even if you have the level of smelting, what about refining them? What materials are you looking for? The other is that a descendant of an upstart takes a barbarian. Let me not talk about whether it is allowed by feudal etiquette. The second is that the family will never allow this to happen. It is okay if you are a concubine, but it is absolutely impossible for you to be a wife. There are also all kinds of methods you handed over. The emperor has long been worried that your great achievements will shock the master. After all, the emperor is very suspicious and ill. Even if the emperor is tolerant and generous, those ministers will never allow it. They can still tell which one is better, a living saint or a dead one. Unless you are particularly strong and have military power, please refer to the scholar-bureaucrats in the late Ming Dynasty. And were those modern equipment really so easy to research in ancient times? Especially those guns. To be honest, the thinking of that era was limited, and the industrial level did not allow it. You do it as if they can make it as soon as you tell them. You can even make hand-cranked Gatling guns. You are also a god. Another thing is that the monk appeared with extraordinary elixirs, which shows that there is extraordinary power in the world of Red Mansions. You said you changed the fate of the Twelve Golden Hairpins, did they really not stop you? Or do you think that the fate of the Twelve Golden Hairpins has changed since then? Except for the beginning of this book, which is okay, the rest of the book is wrong and has no logical relationship. I just write whatever comes to my mind. But forget it, someone who can write more than 500 pieces is still considered a good person. But not in the right direction
It's really exciting. I've watched this for 10 minutes and can't stand it anymore.
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Official(18)Scraped 21d ago
Why do so many people like to use other people's poems to show off?
Isn't it good to be original? Is it necessary to write poetry in ancient times?
It looks fantasy but not fantasy. What are you writing about?
Write a novel? It looks boring. Do you still need to make money? Write words about cultivating immortality. , Just write an invincible article. The girl grinds and chirps.
It's hard to understand that a reborn person who is younger than yourself needs maternal love
The protagonist was 20 years old in his previous life, and his reborn mother was probably not 20 years old when she gave birth to him, right? It's hard for me to understand how to ask her for maternal love. I'll be embarrassed, okay?
I can't stand it anymore, I'm destined to fall into the street.,,,,,,. . Pull the soil, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no.
A pure idiot, plus a scumbag. This idiot has the nerve to look down on Jia Baoyu. He is worthless and has nothing, yet he dares to let others elope with you. What the hell are you doing? Women in this era cannot accept it, let alone in ancient times. Zhuo Wenjun is very romantic, but his mother Zhuo Wenjun was abandoned. I was in my 20s in the dormitory, and lived for more than ten years after that, adding up to my 30s. In my heart, I really am not a fucking idiot. No matter how you look at it, it's disgusting. The character of the main character is so rubbish.
I don't know what I'm writing, please don't touch Porcelain Dream of Red Mansions, okay?
The low-magic novel is forced to be written as an industrial novel. Why do you think you imposed a forehead tattoo? Why write about The Red Mansion? If you can't cover this set well, why don't you just open a new book?
The various logics don't add up. It feels like I haven't traveled through time to the Red Mansions, but just to the Republic of China era.
This book was really disappointing. When I first read it, I thought it was okay, but for some reason, the further I read, the more I felt that the bull's head and the horse's mouth didn't fit. Well, I just kept reading patiently until I had no choice but to jump and read. It really made me unable to open my eyes. And when you get all kinds of modern weapons later, even if you have the level of smelting, what about refining them? What materials are you looking for? The other is that a descendant of an upstart takes a barbarian. Let me not talk about whether it is allowed by feudal etiquette. The second is that the family will never allow this to happen. It is okay if you are a concubine, but it is absolutely impossible for you to be a wife. There are also all kinds of methods you handed over. The emperor has long been worried that your great achievements will shock the master. After all, the emperor is very suspicious and ill. Even if the emperor is tolerant and generous, those ministers will never allow it. They can still tell which one is better, a living saint or a dead one. Unless you are particularly strong and have military power, please refer to the scholar-bureaucrats in the late Ming Dynasty. And were those modern equipment really so easy to research in ancient times? Especially those guns. To be honest, the thinking of that era was limited, and the industrial level did not allow it. You do it as if they can make it as soon as you tell them. You can even make hand-cranked Gatling guns. You are also a god. Another thing is that the monk appeared with extraordinary elixirs, which shows that there is extraordinary power in the world of Red Mansions. You said you changed the fate of the Twelve Golden Hairpins, did they really not stop you? Or do you think that the fate of the Twelve Golden Hairpins has changed since then? Except for the beginning of this book, which is okay, the rest of the book is wrong and has no logical relationship. I just write whatever comes to my mind. But forget it, someone who can write more than 500 pieces is still considered a good person. But not in the right direction
It's really exciting. I've watched this for 10 minutes and can't stand it anymore.










