
Unparalleled Thoughts Across the Universe
About This Novel
When Yang Zijiang first gained the telepathy space, he just wanted to be a wealthy man quietly. Unexpectedly, with the growth of telepathy space, the earth has begun to be unable to accommodate him! The future of mankind lies in the sea of stars! The key is who takes the first step! Walking into the sea of stars is just the beginning, traveling across the universe is not the end...
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Official(27)Scraped 25d ago
Never pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger
Because pretending to be a pig for a long time can easily turn you into a pig.
Settings are OK
The main character felt like a fool to me. Just super strength. A large amount of extensive learning and strong learning ability have no effect on the growth of IQ. If you don't have relevant knowledge, don't write science fiction. Isn't it possible to explore the universe by one person? Take 100,000 people to explore. The idea was to hide his identity so as not to cause trouble to his family on Earth, but when he put it into practice, he didn't hide it at all: he parked the spaceship near his island and blatantly brought his family into the spaceship.
The novel is poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, you are so poisonous!
It's okay, the protagonist's mentality can't keep up
The mentality of the protagonist needs to be polished, and his morality is not suitable. The mentality of a person from the bottom of society who suddenly became rich overnight is a bit arrogant.
What the hell
Isn't it great to show off when you have some ability, and then steal other people's money and go around pretending to be cool? I don't know how to develop in a low-key manner, my character is too bad,
The power of thought can cover the earth.
He also said that he was not strong enough and was really a coward. He pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger, but ended up becoming a pig! Can't stand it anymore
Don't like Hail Mary
I don't like the Hail Mary, I don't like the Hail Mary
The first three must appear
Women will definitely appear in the first three pictures, and 99% of them are the same old tricks, slap in the face and pretend to be cool, harem scum!
It's really silly to write
The idea is very good, but the writing is stupid. There are many shortcomings in the country's current construction. You can enter these industries, such as agriculture, and where the treasures are written. I am really speechless. There is no surveillance in the place where a minister works. There are also things like satellites. Wouldn't psychologists and the like not know about it? This kind of increased risk of exposure will definitely be of paranormal phenomena. Don't ask why. So many emperors have been asking immortals for alchemy and the like. There will only be more of this in modern times. After all, you have given them some clues. With a little search of modern manpower and material resources, plus the protagonist's sudden wealth or awesomeness, you can find out in a few months. So what I said is that your writing is too naive and makes people uncomfortable. The human heart is not worth testing.
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Community(0)
Official(27)Scraped 25d ago
Never pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger
Because pretending to be a pig for a long time can easily turn you into a pig.
Settings are OK
The main character felt like a fool to me. Just super strength. A large amount of extensive learning and strong learning ability have no effect on the growth of IQ. If you don't have relevant knowledge, don't write science fiction. Isn't it possible to explore the universe by one person? Take 100,000 people to explore. The idea was to hide his identity so as not to cause trouble to his family on Earth, but when he put it into practice, he didn't hide it at all: he parked the spaceship near his island and blatantly brought his family into the spaceship.
The novel is poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, you are so poisonous!
It's okay, the protagonist's mentality can't keep up
The mentality of the protagonist needs to be polished, and his morality is not suitable. The mentality of a person from the bottom of society who suddenly became rich overnight is a bit arrogant.
What the hell
Isn't it great to show off when you have some ability, and then steal other people's money and go around pretending to be cool? I don't know how to develop in a low-key manner, my character is too bad,
The power of thought can cover the earth.
He also said that he was not strong enough and was really a coward. He pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger, but ended up becoming a pig! Can't stand it anymore
Don't like Hail Mary
I don't like the Hail Mary, I don't like the Hail Mary
The first three must appear
Women will definitely appear in the first three pictures, and 99% of them are the same old tricks, slap in the face and pretend to be cool, harem scum!
It's really silly to write
The idea is very good, but the writing is stupid. There are many shortcomings in the country's current construction. You can enter these industries, such as agriculture, and where the treasures are written. I am really speechless. There is no surveillance in the place where a minister works. There are also things like satellites. Wouldn't psychologists and the like not know about it? This kind of increased risk of exposure will definitely be of paranormal phenomena. Don't ask why. So many emperors have been asking immortals for alchemy and the like. There will only be more of this in modern times. After all, you have given them some clues. With a little search of modern manpower and material resources, plus the protagonist's sudden wealth or awesomeness, you can find out in a few months. So what I said is that your writing is too naive and makes people uncomfortable. The human heart is not worth testing.










