Angel Heart of the Heroic Company

Has anyone seen my queen? I can't find her

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The article is too popular and unrealistic. Is protecting the earth what an angel should do? And you are an aborigine. It has been 30,000 years, and you are still so naive. As a protagonist, if you don't have the attitude of the protagonist, your level is not good.

Some people said I was handsome. I stood on the balcony and thought about it all night. Who leaked the news? It was said that when I was born, my father cried hoarsely for half a month. He would not believe to death that I was the child who inherited his chromosomes. Later, in order to prove her innocence, the mother took her father to the hospital for a paternity test. The doctor opened the quilt and cried after just one look. He wiped his nose and said, go back, this is not your son and it is not anyone else's. It is impossible for human beings to give birth to such a handsome child. A little intern nurse walked by. He came and found a box of red ink pad, printed my fingerprints, and spread out his coiled hair, and murmured to me: I will keep my long hair for you, and I promise not to marry you in this life. I will not cut my long hair. But when I was in kindergarten, I didn't dare to go after half a day. Teachers and ministers all over the country went crazy, and my face was so swollen that it turned into a watermelon from being kissed by the little girl. The CCTV Focus Interview Program team interviewed me. The beautiful woman who was in charge of interviewing me fainted three times. The little girl who was in charge of taking notes could not help but write Chinese into Italian and Spanish. United Nations funding provided me with a shelter built for me on the top of Mount Everest in the Himalayas. I figured out that true purity and the blue sky are so close to me that God is literally within my reach. Although I was clean, I was also extremely depressed. I stood on the top and shouted loudly: I am not handsome! Suddenly, God's voice came from the sky: "No, you lied!

Who is the heroine? I personally like Kesha.

The protagonist is not a time traveler and has no sense of immersion.

Two more (≧㉨≦)

Overall quality acceptable The character's personality is basically not broken, and he can barely control it, but the idea of rebellion in the article is reversed too quickly, and he completely doesn't want to create the character he wanted to create before. The change was so fast, just like I took the postgraduate entrance examination in a hurry and regretted it after I passed the exam. The part about drinking in the Sun Star in the article was too dramatic, and the language of many characters made it difficult for me to relate to them, and I had a poor sense of empathy. There are many situations in the article where I read it several times and don't know what you want to write. I obviously know every word, but when they are put together, they become unfamiliar. As for the punctuation marks in the text, I'm confused about how to use them. I remember there was a passage, it should be more than a dozen sentences, except for saying hello, it was full stop. I should have already talked about the points in the second year of high school, right? You should listen to more Chinese classes. As for the plot where the protagonist and Hexi establish their relationship, it is really too poisonous. The following words will bring my subjective thoughts. You said you are a sophomore in high school and just a high school student. I would like to ask how you ensure updates. If you don't update every day, why update a few photos a week? Do you think you can get recommendations? Without recommendations, how many people do you think will read your book? How many readers do you think you have now? If you plan to put it on the shelves, according to the general ratio of ten to one, how many dozen subscriptions can you have? A few years ago, I had no opinion on high school students writing novels. If you dare to write, I will read it. If the writing is not good, I will say goodbye. If the writing is good, I will collect it. But I cut all the ones I came across. The most popular one said that he was going to take the college entrance examination, so he would stop for half a year. After the college entrance examination was over, he updated a few more, but the writing was bullshit, and then followed in the footsteps of other seniors. If you want to update every day, what should you do if you study? If you say that you are someone else's child, I have nothing to say. Even if you set aside two or three hours a day, it won't affect you. If you are your kind and don't learn at all, I won't say anything. It's just for fun anyway, it doesn't matter. But why don't you delete the book as soon as possible and wait until college to reissue it.

The writing is good, and there is some interest in it, but the ending is terrible. The climax is cut off in the middle, and there is no point in watching it.

Angels did not have divine bodies or gods at the beginning. Gods and divine bodies were brought by the Kamigawa civilization. Angels only established diplomatic relations with the Kamigawa civilization during the Three Kings era. Fan fiction can be changed, but some settings cannot be changed randomly, especially the protagonist is not a time traveler. The protagonist cannot predict the future and it would be bad if the settings are changed randomly.