Peasant Girl Jumping over the Dragon Gate
by Yan Xiaoshu
About This Novel
Due to the involvement of his maternal grandfather's family, his father, who was an official, was demoted by the emperor and sent away. In anger, his father abandoned his mother in his hometown in the countryside and ignored her ever since. Once she travels through time, she becomes an abandoned daughter of a peasant family. It doesn't matter, she will fight for her own country and create her own career. Wouldn't it be nice to take your mother and brother into business and farming to make a fortune? What? The scumbag father thinks that his twin twins are going to be successful, so he wants to take her back to the capital? If this kind of scumbag dad doesn't kick him, will he still be celebrating the New Year?
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Official(23)Scraped 20d ago
The writing is pretty good
The author's writing style and ability to tell stories are both good, but you have to know that what you are writing is a web article. What is the core of the web article? It's fast-paced, exciting, and immersive! Your work has a sense of immersion, but the pace is too slow and not exciting enough! This is the fundamental reason why your work is almost a million words long, but the results are as tepid as the rhythm of your story.
The author is a bit greedy
One moment, he travels back to ancient times and slowly makes a fortune, and the other moment, there is martial arts content like the Poisonous Saint. Mixing these two types together is a bit embarrassing.
A good article about farming has turned into a battle between rivers and lakes😨
It looks good. I hope the author can update it more. Thank you for your support! [Emot=default,22/]
The prefect is the fourth grade and the county magistrate is the seventh grade. The county magistrate cannot be promoted from the seventh grade to the fourth grade all at once. Also, the prefect is the prefect, and different titles are different in different dynasties.
The heroine learned martial arts, medicine and poison. Don't know what it is used for. Apart from working hard to make some money, I feel like everything I learn is of little use. After so many years of studying, medical, and martial arts, isn't it delicious? This auntie can't help a child with a knife and needs to be reminded by others.
What can I say about the heroine? She's quite a saint. Her mother had a very difficult time when she first brought them here. After the heroine came back from time travel, she worked hard to please the elders in the village and brought benefits to the village, which made her life easier. However, it was obvious that the people in the village had a better attitude towards them because of the benefits. The heroine The master helped them so much and led the villagers to get rich, but as soon as the heroine had something to do, they immediately put aside the relationship. When the heroine made money again, they came to fawn over again, and the heroine relented again. The cycle went on and on. I really don't understand what the heroine was thinking. The villagers didn't know how to be grateful at all, and the heroine didn't know how to be grateful at all. If they can't do it well, they can't do well by themselves if they give them business. The first thing they do is come to trouble the heroine. The heroine deserves to be owed to them, but there's no way. Our heroine is soft-hearted. Even if they come to cause trouble, the heroine will still help them solve it. Just solved it, the heroine's business partner When the companion comes, the first thing he does is to poach the heroine and pry her business partner away. Although it doesn't end well, this approach is too disgusting. To say that he has turned against the other person is an understatement. The whole thing is a wolf-hearted thing, but the heroine still continues to help, and I can't stand it anymore.
The content is quite good, but there are some typos and sometimes people's names are mixed up.
Is the heroine called Yingxiu or Huanong? Confused
It's so ugly and infuriating to watch. The heroine is really speechless.
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 20d ago
The writing is pretty good
The author's writing style and ability to tell stories are both good, but you have to know that what you are writing is a web article. What is the core of the web article? It's fast-paced, exciting, and immersive! Your work has a sense of immersion, but the pace is too slow and not exciting enough! This is the fundamental reason why your work is almost a million words long, but the results are as tepid as the rhythm of your story.
The author is a bit greedy
One moment, he travels back to ancient times and slowly makes a fortune, and the other moment, there is martial arts content like the Poisonous Saint. Mixing these two types together is a bit embarrassing.
A good article about farming has turned into a battle between rivers and lakes😨
It looks good. I hope the author can update it more. Thank you for your support! [Emot=default,22/]
The prefect is the fourth grade and the county magistrate is the seventh grade. The county magistrate cannot be promoted from the seventh grade to the fourth grade all at once. Also, the prefect is the prefect, and different titles are different in different dynasties.
The heroine learned martial arts, medicine and poison. Don't know what it is used for. Apart from working hard to make some money, I feel like everything I learn is of little use. After so many years of studying, medical, and martial arts, isn't it delicious? This auntie can't help a child with a knife and needs to be reminded by others.
What can I say about the heroine? She's quite a saint. Her mother had a very difficult time when she first brought them here. After the heroine came back from time travel, she worked hard to please the elders in the village and brought benefits to the village, which made her life easier. However, it was obvious that the people in the village had a better attitude towards them because of the benefits. The heroine The master helped them so much and led the villagers to get rich, but as soon as the heroine had something to do, they immediately put aside the relationship. When the heroine made money again, they came to fawn over again, and the heroine relented again. The cycle went on and on. I really don't understand what the heroine was thinking. The villagers didn't know how to be grateful at all, and the heroine didn't know how to be grateful at all. If they can't do it well, they can't do well by themselves if they give them business. The first thing they do is come to trouble the heroine. The heroine deserves to be owed to them, but there's no way. Our heroine is soft-hearted. Even if they come to cause trouble, the heroine will still help them solve it. Just solved it, the heroine's business partner When the companion comes, the first thing he does is to poach the heroine and pry her business partner away. Although it doesn't end well, this approach is too disgusting. To say that he has turned against the other person is an understatement. The whole thing is a wolf-hearted thing, but the heroine still continues to help, and I can't stand it anymore.
The content is quite good, but there are some typos and sometimes people's names are mixed up.
Is the heroine called Yingxiu or Huanong? Confused
It's so ugly and infuriating to watch. The heroine is really speechless.
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