Eldest Sister Traveled Through Time

In Chapter 14, when I saw the heroine digging out 24 copper plates that a 4 or 5-year-old boy had secretly hidden under a jujube tree and claiming them as her own, I immediately lost the motivation to continue reading. I felt sad for the little boy who was saving money. A man who knew how to make money at such a young age ended up making wedding clothes for others. That little boy is so pitiful...

I have to say what my elder sister said when I speak, and why do I have to put the three words Huang Yiyun in an awkward place? Doesn't it make sense if the author doesn't read the sentences himself after writing? I feel that the idea is very good, but the sentences have to force me to death, right?

There was a point where the eel cooked by the heroine was not processed when eaten, and was directly put into the pot and cooked alive. When eating, remove the internal organs with your hands and throw them away. Shouldn't the entrails be removed first and then boiled? How can you eat the fish first, then remove the entrails and throw them away before eating them? How disgusting the internal organs are! . You shouldn't just eviscerate first.

The writing is incomprehensible, and the lines and self-titles are so awkward! The author doesn't describe the details, he just writes them in one stroke, and will mention them later. Too many people will read it too confusingly. Many unreasonable places can be explained by plot needs, but you can't rub the reader's IQ to the ground!_(:_∠)_

It looks good. I really like it. I think it is very warm and has a family atmosphere. A big family is so good and it is so united even if there are no weirdos. I think this daily life is really warm and happy. I hope it will keep it up. Come on, Dada, and continue to update.

When you talk to yourself and call yourself by name, can't you just call "me"? Can you please instead of calling the Huang Li family, Huang Liu family, and Huang Jiang family, just call them "grandma, mother, aunt"?

Due to the drought and the gradual onset of autumn, the weather gradually became colder and less and less food could be found. In addition, after corrupt officials swallowed up the food distributed by the court, the people had no food to eat and fled to other cities. It turned out that Huang Yiyun's family were refugees fleeing famine and had been away from their hometown for a while. Then there was a dispute over a piece of sweet potato.

The author's writing style is really bad! After watching it for a long time, I doubt my own IQ. I am a scholar.

Suddenly, a childhood sweetheart from my previous life appeared, and things that happened at such a young age now made the heroine so excited, and suddenly she was no longer interested. Mainly because I didn't like this kind of love story, so I left.

The author also has to eat, clothe and pay the mortgage. If you don't like it after reading it, you can mention it in the review. Don't deliberately give one star, but respect the author's work.