Drowning in Shenzhen and Hong Kong
by After Writing This, Write That
About This Novel
[Ancient style of writing + mad dog + chasing his wife in the crematorium + hating the sea and loving the sky + the heroine's perspective] The forbearing and strong little white flower × the dark and scheming dog (A mad dog is also a dog) - He Shuran met Cheng Jin in the club when he was at his poorest. "One hundred thousand a month to be my son's tutor." After arriving at the Cheng family, He Shuran would always have dreams about someone plotting against her. She prayed in fear every day not to have such a dream, but she never expected that it was not a dream at all. - Facing the uncertain young master, she had no bottom line and tolerated him. But I didn't expect that what I got in exchange was calculations again and again. A friend made her drink, Cheng Chishuo indulged her, and she became addicted to alcohol. Under Cheng Chishuo's instruction, she was locked out of the house on a winter night and had a fever for three days and three nights. Cheng Chishuo took away her manuscript and made her a person who would never see the light of day. Her video was circulated in every street and alley, and eventually she became a rat that everyone shouted to beat. And all this was because Cheng Chishuo regarded her as the daughter of the enemy who killed her mother. Cheng Chishuo, if possible, I would rather we never meet. - "That night wasn't a dream, right? You entered my room the night we first met, right..." "You stole my manuscript, you sent me to your father, and the video was played in your plan. Cheng Chishuo, what do you think of me!" "Cheng Chishuo, you really make me sick." - Teacher He, if you can't kill me, I will pester you to death.
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Damn, I think your writing style is really good and has its own characteristics. At first, it is difficult to distinguish between Dada and Dade. Some readers may think it is nothing, but some readers may feel that Dada is not strong enough and their writing is not good, leading them to give up on this article. But I really think Da Da's writing style is very good. He is not a novice, but at first glance he is a serious and dedicated author who has been writing for a long time. The noun followed by. For example, beautiful clothes should be followed by a verb, such as saying so and so lightly and glancing at it. The use of words here may be better, such as saying softly, walking slowly, and getting. If it is preceded by a verb or adjective, it depends on the state of the sentence, such as running fast or being terrifyingly quiet. Advantages: The writing style is really good. He is a mature writer with his own distinctive writing style. As long as he persists, he will definitely be able to publish + sell copyrights + have short plays. I feel that if I describe too much about the plot of Dada, I will always be afraid of being called AI. But after reading novels from a long time ago, I know that it is not too much description but the exquisite details that can advance the story. Now is a fast-paced era, but every reader likes it differently. Regarding the usage of what I said, I am also afraid that I will say something wrong. I checked online and what Dada said. I must insist on writing. You can buy paper novels and read more. Everyone's aesthetics are different, but I believe that you will always meet readers who like your novels. Happy New Year. I hope you can stand on the top of the mountain and overlook the whole world in the future! Above the green mountains, embrace the bright moon! I give it 4 out of 5 stars. The last star is that there is still room for improvement! Okay okay.
Last night I was reflecting on my writing
I found that the feeling of pulling was only pulling but not pulling () the writing power was really not enough, so an author friend advised me to make major changes, but I really don't like to change the text, especially overturning and rewriting... Just keep writing like this.
Very beautiful meow meow meow! ! !
The author's writing style is really good, and the male protagonist is also very well-written! ! It's so easy to grasp emotions🤏! I hope the author can work hard! ! ! ! It's really good to watch and the plot is very smooth! ! ! !
I wrote a total of fifteen chapters, and all three chapters were full of scraps. It was so life-like👋
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The author did not run away, stopped editing the article, and will come back in April to continue updating.
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Official(6)Scraped 4d ago
Do you prefer a more daily routine or a more compact plot? You can leave a message in the comment area (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
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Damn, I think your writing style is really good and has its own characteristics. At first, it is difficult to distinguish between Dada and Dade. Some readers may think it is nothing, but some readers may feel that Dada is not strong enough and their writing is not good, leading them to give up on this article. But I really think Da Da's writing style is very good. He is not a novice, but at first glance he is a serious and dedicated author who has been writing for a long time. The noun followed by. For example, beautiful clothes should be followed by a verb, such as saying so and so lightly and glancing at it. The use of words here may be better, such as saying softly, walking slowly, and getting. If it is preceded by a verb or adjective, it depends on the state of the sentence, such as running fast or being terrifyingly quiet. Advantages: The writing style is really good. He is a mature writer with his own distinctive writing style. As long as he persists, he will definitely be able to publish + sell copyrights + have short plays. I feel that if I describe too much about the plot of Dada, I will always be afraid of being called AI. But after reading novels from a long time ago, I know that it is not too much description but the exquisite details that can advance the story. Now is a fast-paced era, but every reader likes it differently. Regarding the usage of what I said, I am also afraid that I will say something wrong. I checked online and what Dada said. I must insist on writing. You can buy paper novels and read more. Everyone's aesthetics are different, but I believe that you will always meet readers who like your novels. Happy New Year. I hope you can stand on the top of the mountain and overlook the whole world in the future! Above the green mountains, embrace the bright moon! I give it 4 out of 5 stars. The last star is that there is still room for improvement! Okay okay.
Last night I was reflecting on my writing
I found that the feeling of pulling was only pulling but not pulling () the writing power was really not enough, so an author friend advised me to make major changes, but I really don't like to change the text, especially overturning and rewriting... Just keep writing like this.
Very beautiful meow meow meow! ! !
The author's writing style is really good, and the male protagonist is also very well-written! ! It's so easy to grasp emotions🤏! I hope the author can work hard! ! ! ! It's really good to watch and the plot is very smooth! ! ! !
I wrote a total of fifteen chapters, and all three chapters were full of scraps. It was so life-like👋
Stop editing text
The author did not run away, stopped editing the article, and will come back in April to continue updating.
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