Across the Heavens: Hunting for Illegal Crossing
About This Novel
In all the worlds, there are always stowaways taking the system across other worlds, destroying the balance of the world, and destroying the world and its foundation. For this reason, the consciousness of the heavens chooses a spokesperson in a certain world to help them deal with the stowaways. But is it really that simple? Obviously they have the ability to deal with stowaways, why do they choose a spokesperson?
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Official(4)Scraped 9d ago
The subject matter is quite good.
The subject matter of this book is quite good, but I think you should rewrite it. The male protagonist looks like a male dog, and the female protagonist seems to have no brains. Regarding the relationship between the male and female protagonists, you should read some love books. The ones about the male and female protagonists there are better. You can't stand this at all. So goodbye.
When you were writing your book, did you ever read the long sections you wrote?
If you have read your book, you will know how to change it. You have not read your book.
Regarding the issue of male and female protagonists.
I have read Chapter 16 now, and there are already five female protagonists. I feel that they are almost there. If there are more, it will develop into a harem style. It may happen in the future that the feeling will change. Now let's organize the feeling of a male dog in heat. Go to a woman when you see her. It feels like I have never seen a woman before.
When speaking, write less "dao" before and after. When it sounds uncomfortable to watch,
I feel like a primary school student writing an essay. Oops, the protagonist's emotional experience is too fast.
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Official(4)Scraped 9d ago
The subject matter is quite good.
The subject matter of this book is quite good, but I think you should rewrite it. The male protagonist looks like a male dog, and the female protagonist seems to have no brains. Regarding the relationship between the male and female protagonists, you should read some love books. The ones about the male and female protagonists there are better. You can't stand this at all. So goodbye.
When you were writing your book, did you ever read the long sections you wrote?
If you have read your book, you will know how to change it. You have not read your book.
Regarding the issue of male and female protagonists.
I have read Chapter 16 now, and there are already five female protagonists. I feel that they are almost there. If there are more, it will develop into a harem style. It may happen in the future that the feeling will change. Now let's organize the feeling of a male dog in heat. Go to a woman when you see her. It feels like I have never seen a woman before.
When speaking, write less "dao" before and after. When it sounds uncomfortable to watch,
I feel like a primary school student writing an essay. Oops, the protagonist's emotional experience is too fast.
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