What Should You Do If You Are Kidnapped by a Diva?

I watched more than 400 pictures and couldn't stand it any longer. I thought it would be better later on, but it didn't. I just couldn't help but complain. The first point: It's so brainless. He was over 30 years old before the time travel, plus the memory of the original owner for more than 20 years after the time travel, which is equivalent to sixty years of experience. However, what did the protagonist do when something happened? You just don't understand anything, but everyone else understands it. The main character is always confused or in a daze. You can be confused once or twice, but you are confused every time when something happens. What do you mean? Absolutely no brains, just a fool The second point: system flow. How do you say it? Is there a similar system to the system you wrote? You can forget about the system just by looking at it. Moreover, the system does not reflect its due value and has no characteristics at all. The third point: It's just songs. Even if you have too many songs, you don't have to give them to anyone who can sing them, right? The entertainment industry written about is too clean. There is also the fact that the feelings of the friends around the protagonist are not written out. They are all for the songs. If there are no songs, they will not bubble up. The more I read, the more annoying it becomes. Another point is that the protagonist has written so many songs, all of which are S and lyricist level. But what about your money? Money, money earned. I wrote dozens of songs, and Doutema hit number one on the charts. You can't afford to pay back a villa? Besides writing songs, what is the value of songs? Why do you do charity work and have no money? The fourth point: Emotional scenes are nothing. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is completely invisible. Moreover, the hero is too humble. He can tremble when he meets the heroine. He trembles when he encounters something and is afraid that his wife will be angry. This is not pampering, but a licking of a dog. Besides, the heroine is always working except singing and has not seen much of the hero. Another point is that the heroine's agent has not written a song for the heroine for a long time and actually scolded the heroine. And the heroine? I'm a coward and don't speak, and then I apologize obediently and write a song. Haha, it's hilarious. Apart from writing a character who likes to sing, what else does the heroine have? Apart from singing, I just sang. I didn't think about the male protagonist at all. She kept a cold face. The female protagonist gave me the feeling that if the male protagonist is exhausted, the female protagonist will leave the male protagonist. The writing of the female protagonist is such a failure. It's okay to be cold-faced outside, but at home with the male protagonist, it's still cold. Can't you write a more lively and cute contrast? The male protagonist and the female protagonist. The male protagonist is talented and needs to spread the earth's culture, and the female protagonist happens to sing. It gives people the feeling that if she doesn't sing, she will die. And the two of them happen to be together. It feels like they have no emotion at all. They are just each other's tools. The emotional drama is a failure. The writing is super sweet. You are so boring. Point 5: There is too much singing, I feel numb watching it, and most of it is sung by others. After singing, it will hit the charts, and after finishing the charts, it will continue to be bad or write songs. Why write so many songs? Are you in a hurry to reincarnate in a variety show? Movie? Let's do a love variety show. Take the heroine with you. Don't just broadcast it all day long. It will be broadcast directly and it will take a month. Take your time. Don't go over it in one stroke. Write in detail. It's enough to describe the relationship between the hero and heroine. It's sweet and sweet. It can also relax the overall article. You can just keep singing here and there is no other content. After watching too much, I can guess what it is without using my brain. And writing songs all the time is too lackluster. Another flaw is using a novice as an assistant manager? You're so bad that you don't go to variety shows, so you arrange songs and find a supporter. You've already found the main character yourself. Why did you write this as an assistant manager? It's no use writing it to make the female lead agent pregnant? I really don't know what to say. Since it's such a mess and you won't accept music offers from others, what are you doing as an assistant manager? Except for getting the heroine's agent pregnant, it didn't show any value. Point 6: The protagonist is terrible and has no motivation. But how to promote the plot? The heroine. However, the heroine cannot do it alone. She starts to get a title. Hey, what can you do? If you can take concubines, then the question is, how to make the male protagonist motivated? More female protagonists, more female protagonists, just more female protagonists. Love, is it so difficult to write about love? One is because of love at first sight, the other is because the protagonist wrote a poem and then fell in love with it. Nonsense, but I have to say one thing. They all want to stay with the male protagonist, but the female protagonist is not at all. One can cook. But what is this? I can't remember the character at all. For example, the heroine is cold on the surface but is very naughty and funny when alone with the hero. It's a contrast. The other Zhao Ji is more charming. She is dignified and elegant on the outside. When alone with the hero, she can seduce the hero. But the hero is completely helpless. She is a complete goblin. This kind of big contrast in personality often makes people feel involved in what you wrote. Apart from Leng and Mei, I see no other characters at all. It's too bland. After writing this, I forgot about it. It turns out there is such a heroine. I can't even pronounce her name, which makes people unable to remember. Seventh point: Don't worry about this. Let's talk about the set map. What is the Ming Dynasty? It is a large area. There is a city in a large area. It is a closed area. There is an emperor and a queen. I just want to say what these are. It is too complicated to write. It is better to write about a parallel world on the earth. It is simple and easy to understand. You can even make a movie. Disney. What are you doing? The eighth point: Well, how do I put it? With the protagonist as the center, there are only a few tool people around who can only sing and then disappear. The whole article is a tool person plus the male protagonist. The characters are nothing special except singing. There are also few songs. They are basically songs for the male protagonist. I dare say that with the male protagonist's character, if there is no earth background and system, others will 100% abandon him, and the protagonist is completely a humble insect. The protagonist's character is too cowardly and humble, so he cannot write about major events. The male protagonist is responsible for major events. Is the heroine responsible for small things? The heroine listens to everything. The heroine can scare the male protagonist to the point of trembling just by saying she is a concubine. Fuck, sixty years of experience has been like this. I look down on the male protagonist. I look down on the male protagonist at all. What's the use of the heroine besides being able to make noises while singing? Completely useless I'm so frustrated. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. After reading more than 400 chapters, I can complain so much. I really don't know what will happen next. I really can't hold on anymore. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write or the first urban novel. In short, when you write, please make the characters more delicate, especially the personality, which can make people remember, and the emotions. Why write multiple female protagonists when writing emotions? It's just annoying to watch. I won't say it anymore. Generally speaking, I can't say it's bad. I can only say that the whole novel is okay. If I write according to the outline of this novel, I will intersperse the characters, emotions, don't sing all the time, and have some variety shows for desserts. There will also be other novel copyright fees, agents, and improvements that should be improved. It will definitely be better than this. After Tema finished speaking, he found that this novel has too much room for improvement. Phew, I won't say anymore.

Chapter 146, 391,000 words, but no book review?

Just like the title, I searched for songs while reading the novel. I couldn't resist it. 😂 There is a story about the songs mentioned in the novel, and they are all very good.

If this novel didn't have a harem, it would definitely be criticized, and if it did, some people would have objections, because there are too many supporting female characters, and they all have to be written with dignity and status.

The author came out to clean up the situation, which is very inconsistent!

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes

The King of Masked Singer part was a bit annoying. It was okay to wear costumes and sing love songs, but there was no sense of propriety in what I said on stage.

It's too cowardly, and it feels like a big licking dog plot.

The three golden chapters that were agreed upon have persuaded me to quit, and it is hard to agree with others. If you like it, you can read it.

Since you are writing a novel with a modern setting, you use a lot of ancient titles, such as "court" and "catcher", which sounds very awkward. It feels ancient and modern at times, which gives people an inaccurate first impression.