My Old Bacon is Back!

I was very fascinated by this part. What is the relationship? It's too old-fashioned to write about so many things and betrayal directly. Then if you write it as a good couple who started over together and enjoyed happiness and tiredness together, it's better than this, honey hype. Divorce is a joke, what is the meaning of divorce, and how does it feel when the person you love most wants to divorce you when you are at your lowest point. The plot is like that of a primary school student, but the plot is also the same as for you. It seems like betrayal, silently working behind the scenes, and being misunderstood by the other party. When you write like this, you don't deny that there is a traffic problem only when there is a topic. It is because there is a problem with the settings you wrote. First, why should we divorce and what is its significance. Moreover, the male protagonist is indeed affected by the divorce. The male protagonist does not know Gu's thoughts and intentions behind it. Even though it was a shock, the family members didn't say anything. Secondly, what kind of things can only be done if you get divorced? What the hell is the setting of the male protagonist's money and the female protagonist's millions? I really don't know how you came up with this. Third, the family members know about it, but the protagonist is like a fool who knows nothing and pretends to be serious. This girl is so good. If he feels sorry for you, what will happen? Awkward or not. Fourth, when the male protagonist gets up, you jump out again, and then there is a variety show about divorced people and living together again. I forgot what it was called. Disgusting no. Later, there is a man chasing his wife in the crematorium. Who is the male protagonist? The writing is all about the same thing. Fifth, I think there's nothing wrong with the male protagonist's statement that I'm not worthy. It's written that the male protagonist regrets it, the female protagonist is justified, and Gu Siji keeps saying this and that. That's all. I'm tired of talking too much. I have the strength to persuade you to retreat. But I'm really begging you, don't wash your hands of your early settings, otherwise you'll have to break up and get back together. Forcibly promote the plot

I'm just going to tell you my opinion. The protagonist has had two lives. He was at the top when he debuted, and then fell to the bottom. Then we have a system and start to rise again, no problem. It's just a character, shouldn't you be more calm? In some places, it can be seen that the protagonist does not realize his own shortcomings at all, so where does he have confidence. In my previous life, I was a diaosi. In the first half of this life, my life was brilliant, and later I became a salty diaosi. Since there is a system, shouldn't there be a bit of a city? How can the written city have a strong sense of substitution from the side? The pace of the article is very fast, everything is involved, and the side highlights that the protagonist is very arrogant. What should I do in the later stage? This is not an early ending. I have been a bookworm for many years. When I read a book, I like to see the character of the protagonist. If the character has a crotch, it is boring. Just treat it as a cool article, no brainer. But I still hope that the author will create a character with a distinct personality. After all, you still have to have a dream and make your book popular. Among the sacred books on the market, the protagonist's character is not unique.

When I saw more than 50%, I saw the system at the beginning. I felt that it had nothing to do with the system later. The popularity setting at the beginning was useless?

Find a factory to drive screws. You can't handle writing a novel.

The key to your systematic writing is that your system will be gone after a hundred chapters? The emotional scenes of the protagonist are too vague and you feel like you're driving too fast. Your book starts off well and I feel like I can't control it after chapter fifty. After chapter one hundred, the system is completely fucked. Next time I write a book, I'll write an outline and table of contents. If you don't let yourself go, you should be able to write more than a thousand chapters of this book.

The writing style is very important, but the characters are also important. I have only read a few chapters. Let me talk about the problems after reading a few chapters. The character design is not good, the character of the protagonist is not written well, and the ex-wife is so well written. Why divorce? The ex-wife is the heroine? It's not that you want to create a harem when you write it like this. To be honest, not many people can write about harems nowadays. It's even more embarrassing to force YY. It's easiest to create a harem in entertainment stories, but it's very difficult to write well! There are also shows that I have participated in. I think I was famous before. What the hell do you think of the shows that you have participated in? Personally, I suggest you don't criticize me if you don't like them!

Can this kind of novel also be recommended with 5 stars?

Please don't insult me ​​by talking nonsense. You also say that there is too much nonsense. If you don't understand, don't talk nonsense.

The starting setting is pretty good, but the characters are overwhelming and the plot is rushed.

The writing is really good, very beautiful