
Across the Stars to Collect Scrap Metal
by Bamarulong
About This Novel
Captured by aliens, his body was turned into an immortal liquid robot, and he formed a fleet to travel across the stars.
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Official(16)Scraped 24d ago
It looks so confusing, messy, and a bit out of context.
Needs to be improved
Many people like to read sci-fi space hegemony novels, but unfortunately few people write them. This book is really messy. The writing style is not what we are used to. It jumps very fast and it is difficult to follow the rhythm. There are also many names, which are changed too fast at once, which often makes people confused. The map is also too casual without clear instructions, and the spaceship is also. Although it is distinguished by combat power, there is no difference between the 100,000 and the 500,000. It does not show the powerful combat power of different spaceships. I can't read it halfway.
chaos
To be honest, after reading so many chapters in this book, I felt that every word was confusing. Sometimes I could just write it off in one sentence but I had to explain it clearly. Some places needed to be detailed, but the result was no beginning or end! Give up! It feels like a running account!
This book was fine at first, but it started to fall apart after about 90 chapters! The worldview gets bigger and bigger as he writes about it, but the author simply can't grasp it! Modern or not, ancient or ancient, neither fish nor fowl, and the plot of a small character, Chen Qiang, is too deliberate. Such an obvious drag on the plot is really disgusting! The writing is relatively good, it may only have emotional drama, and it is easy to take in the girl, not artificial, not pretentious, not bloody!
The heroine of this book is too intentional.
There are so many degrees in everything, five, six, six or seven, I still remember this name. We have done twenty, thirty-three, forty, and I can't even remember their names. Is it interesting for the heroine to arrange so many? It is normal and understandable to have about 10 people in the harem. But if there are too many, then it will be passed, unforgettable, and boring. If it's a stallion story, it's understandable, because it's understandable that he just wants to have more children, it's understandable, it doesn't matter whether the woman is there or not, but it doesn't matter. Are creatures like stallions very common in Chinese history? Like those emperors, they all wanted children, but there were also emperors who fell in love with her. In the Ming Dynasty, they would marry one wife for the rest of their lives. As a result, there was only one son, and that person had not yet given birth to a child before he became emperor.
After reading Chapter 11, are you collecting scrap metal? ? ?
If you don't absorb so much scrap metal and throw it into the sea, what is the title of your book? ? ? When you write a book, can you give your book title some suitable content?
Holy shit, I have the same name as the main character, this is outrageous.
It was the first time I saw that the main character had the same name as me
mess
I've read a few chapters, and it's a mess. If you don't believe in evil, you can give it a try.
first three
How many coincidences did the author see? It would be more natural to take the woman away.
Very pretty,
Keep at it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I think this is good! Come on, just stop being a eunuch!
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Official(16)Scraped 24d ago
It looks so confusing, messy, and a bit out of context.
Needs to be improved
Many people like to read sci-fi space hegemony novels, but unfortunately few people write them. This book is really messy. The writing style is not what we are used to. It jumps very fast and it is difficult to follow the rhythm. There are also many names, which are changed too fast at once, which often makes people confused. The map is also too casual without clear instructions, and the spaceship is also. Although it is distinguished by combat power, there is no difference between the 100,000 and the 500,000. It does not show the powerful combat power of different spaceships. I can't read it halfway.
chaos
To be honest, after reading so many chapters in this book, I felt that every word was confusing. Sometimes I could just write it off in one sentence but I had to explain it clearly. Some places needed to be detailed, but the result was no beginning or end! Give up! It feels like a running account!
This book was fine at first, but it started to fall apart after about 90 chapters! The worldview gets bigger and bigger as he writes about it, but the author simply can't grasp it! Modern or not, ancient or ancient, neither fish nor fowl, and the plot of a small character, Chen Qiang, is too deliberate. Such an obvious drag on the plot is really disgusting! The writing is relatively good, it may only have emotional drama, and it is easy to take in the girl, not artificial, not pretentious, not bloody!
The heroine of this book is too intentional.
There are so many degrees in everything, five, six, six or seven, I still remember this name. We have done twenty, thirty-three, forty, and I can't even remember their names. Is it interesting for the heroine to arrange so many? It is normal and understandable to have about 10 people in the harem. But if there are too many, then it will be passed, unforgettable, and boring. If it's a stallion story, it's understandable, because it's understandable that he just wants to have more children, it's understandable, it doesn't matter whether the woman is there or not, but it doesn't matter. Are creatures like stallions very common in Chinese history? Like those emperors, they all wanted children, but there were also emperors who fell in love with her. In the Ming Dynasty, they would marry one wife for the rest of their lives. As a result, there was only one son, and that person had not yet given birth to a child before he became emperor.
After reading Chapter 11, are you collecting scrap metal? ? ?
If you don't absorb so much scrap metal and throw it into the sea, what is the title of your book? ? ? When you write a book, can you give your book title some suitable content?
Holy shit, I have the same name as the main character, this is outrageous.
It was the first time I saw that the main character had the same name as me
mess
I've read a few chapters, and it's a mess. If you don't believe in evil, you can give it a try.
first three
How many coincidences did the author see? It would be more natural to take the woman away.
Very pretty,
Keep at it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I think this is good! Come on, just stop being a eunuch!









