
There's Something Terribly Wrong with My Hogwarts
by Big Sea Ship
About This Novel
The new book "Just a Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor" has been released. Everyone is welcome to support it! ... "Happy education is not advisable." "Studying is bound to be boring." "They in the future will thank themselves for working hard now." "We will add morning and evening self-study for students in grades three to six, and supervise their daily practice of mantra recitation and dictating the theory of mantras." "Even wizards must ensure that they have qualified physical fitness. They should add inter-class exercises after the second class every morning." "It is too simple for the school to only hold one Quidditch game every year. It should add a track and field meeting once a year." "Bala, bala..." "..." The spiritual leader of wizards in the new era, the advocate of professional wizards, the founder of the Wizards' Federation, the pioneer of magical civilization, the reformer, the destroyer of the country, the scythe-wielding man, the blood relative of the Demon King, the first president of the reorganized student union of Hogwarts... Lynn Belloc persuaded Dumbledore with such earnest words.
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It's inexplicable, maybe it's the author's bad taste, right? In fact, this is really meaningless. It is very embarrassing and does not affect the plot. It is purely for the author's own enjoyment and makes people make fun of him. It really makes him want to rush into the street.
Lin En was guarding an empty house by herself, feeling a little sorry for the child. Her parents passed away when she was very young, and her adoptive father had always taken care of her. No wonder you are so sensible at such a young age.
When I saw Chapter 259, I already didn't want to read it anymore, I was disgusted.
If you have to make a fateful counterattack, you are just kidding. But he is either joking, and you are just like the yin and yang balance in Jackie Chan's world, which is disgusting. When I watched those Jackie Chan events, I couldn't stand a single one. The protagonist worked hard and finally improved his strength, while the protagonist group suddenly jumped up. Why is it because of the so-called balance of yin and yang, which is as disgusting as it is. No matter how strong the protagonist becomes, the protagonist group can catch up with them easily, so why does the protagonist work so hard to become stronger? Your novel is even more ridiculous. I prefer invincibility or ease. It would be best if both are there. If I could only choose one of the two, I would choose easy. When I read novels, I just want to read a light-hearted one. I don't want to read something about bitterness and hatred, and that's where your thing goes. I really don't understand what you think. Just change it. What will happen if you finish writing this book easily? I think you The quality readers have all come up, and I think I can try it out again. I read it to death, right? ***The beginning of the second volume gave the readers a lot of shit, and then sold it out and ended it in a hurry. After finally recovering, the *** started again, right?
I didn't expect Lin En to be a time traveler. This was a bit surprising, but it was really a trap because he couldn't swim. Maybe Hermione's appearance didn't affect Lynn at all, but there was something called the butterfly effect. Lynn and Hermione bonded as soon as they met.
The setting of the protagonist as a time traveler is a failure
To be honest, I have seen that many protagonists in fan fiction are time travellers, and they were all adults before time travel. After time travel, I really wrote like a child. The physical age has become younger, but the mental age and cognition are the time before and after the time travel, and he is at least an adult in his 30s and 40s. Even if he has to pretend to be young and act in public, it does not mean that he has really become a child mentally. Otherwise, how would the time traveler and cognitive advantages come into play? If they cannot come into play, the setting would be very inconsistent. Among so many fans, few can write this clearly.
Haha, but now Lin En has also made new friends. This may be a new beginning for Lin En. Everything is moving in a good direction. The intersection of Xiao Yugan will affect Hermione and Lin En for the rest of their lives.
It started out interestingly, but then it got messed up.
I found this book after reading The Savior first. It has an interesting beginning, constantly adding new elements and then overturning them one by one: 1. Muggle orphan starts with Slytherin-Grindelwald pure blood 2. Hermione Neighbors is raised in the next year - enters school a year earlier and has nothing to do with the first half 3. Add some talent points to the system panel - it doesn't take long for the data to be full and only the task prompt function is left. 4. Cedric's original trio of werewolf protagonists-really just friends 5. Not following the protagonist - Volume 2: Voldemort attacks and Harry Potter is no longer the protagonist. There are also many shortcomings. Except for Old Dengtou and the first Defense Against the Dark Arts professor, the other professors have all been brushed aside. The protagonist is invincible too quickly but never changes shape. Hermione is more like a tool who likes the protagonist, and is not as good as the protagonist's mother and friend Yelena who likes the protagonist. Suddenly, a plot was designed to pretend to be Professor Lockhart's Defense Against the Dark Arts class. In that school year, Cedric the Werewolf, a trio of best friends, changed from an important supporting role to a supporting role. In the finale, he was still playing a supporting role. The story unfolded inexplicably.
I saw that more than 200 chapters have been discarded. The author's writing is quite good, but I simply don't like this kind of invincibility style. The protagonist ends his second year, captures Voldemort, and then inherits six million galleons and various industries. When reading it, it feels like there is no goal at all, and the first generation is still the uncle of the protagonist. The rest of the content will probably be related to rectifying the shape of the magic world, so I'm not very interested. I'll read it again in Shuhuang someday.
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Official(110)Scraped 18d ago
Author's view
It's inexplicable, maybe it's the author's bad taste, right? In fact, this is really meaningless. It is very embarrassing and does not affect the plot. It is purely for the author's own enjoyment and makes people make fun of him. It really makes him want to rush into the street.
Lin En was guarding an empty house by herself, feeling a little sorry for the child. Her parents passed away when she was very young, and her adoptive father had always taken care of her. No wonder you are so sensible at such a young age.
When I saw Chapter 259, I already didn't want to read it anymore, I was disgusted.
If you have to make a fateful counterattack, you are just kidding. But he is either joking, and you are just like the yin and yang balance in Jackie Chan's world, which is disgusting. When I watched those Jackie Chan events, I couldn't stand a single one. The protagonist worked hard and finally improved his strength, while the protagonist group suddenly jumped up. Why is it because of the so-called balance of yin and yang, which is as disgusting as it is. No matter how strong the protagonist becomes, the protagonist group can catch up with them easily, so why does the protagonist work so hard to become stronger? Your novel is even more ridiculous. I prefer invincibility or ease. It would be best if both are there. If I could only choose one of the two, I would choose easy. When I read novels, I just want to read a light-hearted one. I don't want to read something about bitterness and hatred, and that's where your thing goes. I really don't understand what you think. Just change it. What will happen if you finish writing this book easily? I think you The quality readers have all come up, and I think I can try it out again. I read it to death, right? ***The beginning of the second volume gave the readers a lot of shit, and then sold it out and ended it in a hurry. After finally recovering, the *** started again, right?
I didn't expect Lin En to be a time traveler. This was a bit surprising, but it was really a trap because he couldn't swim. Maybe Hermione's appearance didn't affect Lynn at all, but there was something called the butterfly effect. Lynn and Hermione bonded as soon as they met.
The setting of the protagonist as a time traveler is a failure
To be honest, I have seen that many protagonists in fan fiction are time travellers, and they were all adults before time travel. After time travel, I really wrote like a child. The physical age has become younger, but the mental age and cognition are the time before and after the time travel, and he is at least an adult in his 30s and 40s. Even if he has to pretend to be young and act in public, it does not mean that he has really become a child mentally. Otherwise, how would the time traveler and cognitive advantages come into play? If they cannot come into play, the setting would be very inconsistent. Among so many fans, few can write this clearly.
Haha, but now Lin En has also made new friends. This may be a new beginning for Lin En. Everything is moving in a good direction. The intersection of Xiao Yugan will affect Hermione and Lin En for the rest of their lives.
It started out interestingly, but then it got messed up.
I found this book after reading The Savior first. It has an interesting beginning, constantly adding new elements and then overturning them one by one: 1. Muggle orphan starts with Slytherin-Grindelwald pure blood 2. Hermione Neighbors is raised in the next year - enters school a year earlier and has nothing to do with the first half 3. Add some talent points to the system panel - it doesn't take long for the data to be full and only the task prompt function is left. 4. Cedric's original trio of werewolf protagonists-really just friends 5. Not following the protagonist - Volume 2: Voldemort attacks and Harry Potter is no longer the protagonist. There are also many shortcomings. Except for Old Dengtou and the first Defense Against the Dark Arts professor, the other professors have all been brushed aside. The protagonist is invincible too quickly but never changes shape. Hermione is more like a tool who likes the protagonist, and is not as good as the protagonist's mother and friend Yelena who likes the protagonist. Suddenly, a plot was designed to pretend to be Professor Lockhart's Defense Against the Dark Arts class. In that school year, Cedric the Werewolf, a trio of best friends, changed from an important supporting role to a supporting role. In the finale, he was still playing a supporting role. The story unfolded inexplicably.
I saw that more than 200 chapters have been discarded. The author's writing is quite good, but I simply don't like this kind of invincibility style. The protagonist ends his second year, captures Voldemort, and then inherits six million galleons and various industries. When reading it, it feels like there is no goal at all, and the first generation is still the uncle of the protagonist. The rest of the content will probably be related to rectifying the shape of the magic world, so I'm not very interested. I'll read it again in Shuhuang someday.
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Magical world, travel to other worlds, system writing, humorous complaints This is a very interesting HP (Harry Potter) world travel novel. The protagonist dies accidentally in an accident, and his soul happens to be transported to a Muggle in the world of Harry Potter. The story begins when the protagonist receives an invitation from the Magic Academy. The author's writing style is good, and the description of the original characters in the Harry Potter world is lifelike and very close to the original work. For example, the arrogant and talkative Hermione, the old fox Professor Fox, and all kinds of characters... The portrayal of the protagonist is also very good. He understands the plot of the Harry Potter world and often improves himself through logical actions. The protagonist has a system, and the system plays a big role in the novel, and it does not improve the protagonist in the slightest, so the novel can be said to be a system novel. Of course, events and difficulties still require the protagonist to work hard to solve them. The worldview of this book is well constructed and the details are handled well. It shows that the author is very knowledgeable about the magical world. He must be an HP fan and has done detailed research before. All in all, I recommend this book. Whether you are a HP fan or a "Muggle" who doesn't know much about the magical world, this book is not to be missed.



Current ranking of the book list: Not ranked (will be removed in the next update) Readability score: 4 Reading experience score: 3.5 Plot-rich score: 3 Characterization score: 2.5 End of story score: 2 Number of reads: 1 Total score: 15 Other comments: The author's idea of radically changing the plot of the original work is good, but his writing skills are not good enough and he is not careful enough. Not to mention the fact that there are many small bugs in the text that may seem jarring but are actually harmless, nor the author's understanding of certain settings of the original work and the roughness of his creation. The crotch pulling plot in the last volume alone is enough to destroy the good reputation accumulated in the first half of the work. Fortunately, I personally had a strong resistance to poison when I read it for the first time, which made it eligible to be added to the list.




I just finished reading a HP fanfic. It has an online IQ and good logic. It is one level higher than Harry. It does not follow the plot. The author has his own ideas. I personally think it is a masterpiece among HP fanfics. If you like HP, you can read it.




Harry Potter fanfic, heroine Hermione, very good

















