The Portal Leads to History, I Report it to the Country
by Lin Zhi
About This Novel
I once sat on the top of the Himalayas, looking at the snowy peaks of the mountains, eating spicy hot pot. I have also been in the depths of the Sahara Desert, drinking ice Coke while exploring ancient historical relics. I can jump from the top of the mountain without wearing any equipment. At the moment when I am about to touch the ground, I open the door and let myself go from falling to rising, and then return to the mountainside again. He also dared to drive a canoe across the entire Pacific Ocean, galloping in wind, rain and thunder. But now, I have opened a door to a new world. From the Qin and Han Dynasties, to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, through the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, until the Opium War, and even... I saw all history
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Official(34)Scraped 5d ago
The author of Tamo has never seen a woman in his life. Four of the first ten chapters are about a woman who can be replaced at any time. She is a classic woman with a high degree of education and she is as beautiful as a fairy. But the company only cares about her appearance, and she even relies on her face to do business. The female boss is jealous of her because he wears small shoes for her, and the male boss covets her beauty and eats her with a filthy face.
The original idea was quite good, but the more I watched it, the more wrong it became. The layout was too small, and I didn't even know what the author was doing. It was like watching a live broadcast and eating melon. It was boring to death.
The little one has read the book, and the big one will comment on it.
This kind of world fusion plot itself. Necessary details must be explained, politics, military, culture, economy, and perspectives from all sides need to be explained. This is all called water and I am convinced. The plot is actually well arranged, but the problem lies in the author's description method. The author's writing method is more like creating the plot in the form of a TV series and then describing it in words. However, most people are obviously more concerned with advancing the plot and regard the description of the environment, details, appearance and actions of the characters as watershed. For example, the author spent five or six chapters explaining how several slaves in the Warring States Period gradually transformed into modern people. From the perspective of the story structure, this kind of plot is essential, but it obviously does not meet the taste of some readers who pursue fast-paced and refreshing plots. In a book like this, the proportion of the protagonist's role will definitely decrease in the later stages. The focus will be on describing the all-round changes brought about by the collision and exchange of several worlds. It certainly cannot be described from the perspective of the protagonist alone. I don't think this is irrigation
What are you writing about? I was writing about various plans for the national portal in the past, which was boring, and then all the nonsense about girls ruined the situation. Are you schizophrenic?
In the pre-Qin era, it was obvious that the author regarded himself as a common person. But the author's actual class is Qianshou. The princes, generals and ministers were really distinguished in that era.
After handing it over to the country, don't you know that the country has a think tank to make suggestions? After reading a few chapters, I can't understand what the author wrote about.
Chapter 38 will be released soon. The food looks too ugly.
This book is really the best among idiots. Do you understand how the state machinery works? When you write down your IQ, it's like a child playing house.
A lump The writing of a good subject is a piece of shit. National events are like playing house. The whole China plays house with the protagonist and even does a live broadcast. Haha, funny.
Too many private goods
The plot is novel and the description is also sophisticated. But there are too many personal items, and sometimes a whole chapter is just a discussion of ideas, so I can only skip ordering.
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Official(34)Scraped 5d ago
The author of Tamo has never seen a woman in his life. Four of the first ten chapters are about a woman who can be replaced at any time. She is a classic woman with a high degree of education and she is as beautiful as a fairy. But the company only cares about her appearance, and she even relies on her face to do business. The female boss is jealous of her because he wears small shoes for her, and the male boss covets her beauty and eats her with a filthy face.
The original idea was quite good, but the more I watched it, the more wrong it became. The layout was too small, and I didn't even know what the author was doing. It was like watching a live broadcast and eating melon. It was boring to death.
The little one has read the book, and the big one will comment on it.
This kind of world fusion plot itself. Necessary details must be explained, politics, military, culture, economy, and perspectives from all sides need to be explained. This is all called water and I am convinced. The plot is actually well arranged, but the problem lies in the author's description method. The author's writing method is more like creating the plot in the form of a TV series and then describing it in words. However, most people are obviously more concerned with advancing the plot and regard the description of the environment, details, appearance and actions of the characters as watershed. For example, the author spent five or six chapters explaining how several slaves in the Warring States Period gradually transformed into modern people. From the perspective of the story structure, this kind of plot is essential, but it obviously does not meet the taste of some readers who pursue fast-paced and refreshing plots. In a book like this, the proportion of the protagonist's role will definitely decrease in the later stages. The focus will be on describing the all-round changes brought about by the collision and exchange of several worlds. It certainly cannot be described from the perspective of the protagonist alone. I don't think this is irrigation
What are you writing about? I was writing about various plans for the national portal in the past, which was boring, and then all the nonsense about girls ruined the situation. Are you schizophrenic?
In the pre-Qin era, it was obvious that the author regarded himself as a common person. But the author's actual class is Qianshou. The princes, generals and ministers were really distinguished in that era.
After handing it over to the country, don't you know that the country has a think tank to make suggestions? After reading a few chapters, I can't understand what the author wrote about.
Chapter 38 will be released soon. The food looks too ugly.
This book is really the best among idiots. Do you understand how the state machinery works? When you write down your IQ, it's like a child playing house.
A lump The writing of a good subject is a piece of shit. National events are like playing house. The whole China plays house with the protagonist and even does a live broadcast. Haha, funny.
Too many private goods
The plot is novel and the description is also sophisticated. But there are too many personal items, and sometimes a whole chapter is just a discussion of ideas, so I can only skip ordering.
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Seedling. It's a relatively relaxed, joyful and interesting article. Except for the beginning of Su Lili's bit of a bloody routine, the rest is quite interesting. I wrote about a protagonist who has the superpower to open doors and travel wherever he wants. He is invincible, but ends up traveling through time and space to the Warring States Period and Qin State. He reports to the country. When he goes to Qin State, Jing Ke happens to assassinate Qin. He takes Ying Zheng and his ministers on a one-day trip to modern times. This is all for now. Tags: daily writing, time and space gate Introduction: I once sat on the top of the Himalayas, looking at the snowy peaks of the mountains, and eating spicy hot pot. I have also been in the depths of the Sahara Desert, drinking ice Coke while exploring ancient historical relics. I can jump from the top of the mountain without wearing any equipment. At the moment when I am about to touch the ground, I open the door and let myself go from falling to rising, and return to the mountainside again. He also dared to drive a canoe across the entire Pacific Ocean, galloping in wind, rain and thunder. But now, I have opened a door to a new world. From the Qin and Han Dynasties, to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, through the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, until the Opium War, and even... I saw all history
I once sat on the top of the Himalayas, looking at the snowy peaks of the mountains, eating spicy hot pot. I have also been in the depths of the Sahara Desert, drinking ice Coke while exploring ancient historical relics. I can jump from the top of the mountain without wearing any equipment. At the moment when I am about to touch the ground, I open the door and let myself go from falling to rising, and then return to the mountainside again. He also dared to drive a canoe across the entire Pacific Ocean, galloping in wind, rain and thunder. But now, I have opened a door to a new world. From the Qin and Han Dynasties, to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, through the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, until the Opium War, and even... I saw all history
Seedling. It's a relatively relaxed, joyful and interesting article. Except for the beginning of Su Lili's bit of a bloody routine, the rest is quite interesting. I am writing about a protagonist who has the superpower to open doors and travel to wherever he wants, but ends up traveling through time and space to the Warring States and Qin Kingdom. He reports to the country. When he goes to the Qin Kingdom, Jing Ke happens to assassinate the Qin Dynasty. He takes Yingzheng and his ministers on a one-day trip to modern times. That's all for now. Tags: daily writing, time and space gate Introduction: I once sat on the top of the Himalayas, looking at the snowy peaks of the mountains, and eating spicy hot pot. I have also been in the depths of the Sahara Desert, drinking ice Coke while exploring ancient historical relics. I can jump from the top of the mountain without wearing any equipment. At the moment when I am about to touch the ground, I open the door and let myself go from falling to rising, and return to the mountainside again. He also dared to drive a canoe across the entire Pacific Ocean, galloping in wind, rain and thunder. But now, I have opened a door to a new world. From the Qin and Han Dynasties, to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, through the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, until the Opium War, and even... I saw all history
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