Take the World with You

In fact, there is no need to divide it at all. Just like a virtual game, there is just one more clone. If you divide it up like this, it may be a bit awkward, and it will test the author's writing style even more. It feels uncomfortable to divide one of your beloved things into three pieces. You are mainly a fantasy novel and you are right to write it this way, but it will test your writing skills. I hope you can write it well. This is just my opinion. It just feels so awkward to watch

Although I prefer the type of god, the author's writing style makes people feel embarrassed. This god has no sense of mystery at all. Many things need to be explained to you by your own race of faith. They all have threads of faith. If you don't understand, you can't directly read the memory.

Thinking about it carefully, I feel that there may be something wrong with the protagonist's outlook on life. If he goes to the old American place and you rob things, it would be a bit awkward if you kill people casually. Because I feel like you want to write the kind of protagonist who kills decisively and smartly, but the way you write it is very awkward. In Chapter 36, you asked him to rob things again, acting like a bandit. Of course, it may be a kind of foreshadowing, because if you want to write a foreshadowing, he is the protagonist, no longer the protagonist. According to a normal person, he will not kill people casually, so you may want to make a big reversal. If you say that you have no foreshadowing, but the idea I gave you can be said to be a reminder and suggestion, then give me a thumbs up! Don't say it again, I'll do it next time! Secondly, he went to the United States to shoot something. You didn't write it in detail. This kind of detail can be explained in two pages, hehe😁!