
The Original Ancestor of Mankind, Join the Chat Group at the Beginning
About This Novel
He traveled to the star-devouring sky and became the original ancestor of the human race. Just when he was worried about how to survive and was at a loss, the chat group in the world sent out an invitation! Martial Arts Soul Emperor: Fighting energy turns into a horse, one step is ten meters. Huashan Gentleman: Yue stands upright and upright. Tomb Otaku Girl: E represents talent, silly and sweet. ...
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Official(34)Scraped 20d ago
It would be better to write that after the protagonist Yuanzu was suppressed, he joined the chat group
When you write about the original ancestor when he was a child, what do you find interesting? What can you do to help humans?
Destroy the update
It is indeed a bit slow, it would be better if it was updated twice a day.
Trumpet problem.
After the trumpet joined, it was already chaotic. You might as well change the title of the trumpet into a sign-in. They are all Wang Yuan, and they are all talking about the original ancestor. I don't even know that the original ancestor said that. Also, your theme is confusing. The trumpet came in as a guide, but I didn't see that.
I won't waste time by writing something else. Wang Yuan started with Wang Yuan, which reduced the original ancestor's strength to an extremely low point. Moreover, the original ancestor's talent was the best in the original universe, the first in the true sense. Luo Feng had no chance and would be crushed by the original ancestor and nothing would be left.
I already have an ending but I still can't write it well. I'm so depressed.
Can't we just go step by step according to the ending? ? ?
This thing will be finished sooner or later. Why do you push it to me?
This thing will be finished sooner or later. Why do you push it to me?
A bit bug
According to the original work, warriors only appeared after the Great Nirvana. The antibodies produced by the infection of the Rr virus activate human cells. There is a bug here. The pig's feet have the strength of an intermediate warrior from the beginning. The above is my personal opinion and is not meant to be offensive.
It's outrageous. Let me tell you. You just traveled through time and gave birth to a child. You already know that you are the famous original ancestor in the future. Are you the most outrageous of all? Is it because the predecessor of your body is called the original ancestor?
this book is very good
Why not update it? Why didn't the author write anymore?
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Official(34)Scraped 20d ago
It would be better to write that after the protagonist Yuanzu was suppressed, he joined the chat group
When you write about the original ancestor when he was a child, what do you find interesting? What can you do to help humans?
Destroy the update
It is indeed a bit slow, it would be better if it was updated twice a day.
Trumpet problem.
After the trumpet joined, it was already chaotic. You might as well change the title of the trumpet into a sign-in. They are all Wang Yuan, and they are all talking about the original ancestor. I don't even know that the original ancestor said that. Also, your theme is confusing. The trumpet came in as a guide, but I didn't see that.
I won't waste time by writing something else. Wang Yuan started with Wang Yuan, which reduced the original ancestor's strength to an extremely low point. Moreover, the original ancestor's talent was the best in the original universe, the first in the true sense. Luo Feng had no chance and would be crushed by the original ancestor and nothing would be left.
I already have an ending but I still can't write it well. I'm so depressed.
Can't we just go step by step according to the ending? ? ?
This thing will be finished sooner or later. Why do you push it to me?
This thing will be finished sooner or later. Why do you push it to me?
A bit bug
According to the original work, warriors only appeared after the Great Nirvana. The antibodies produced by the infection of the Rr virus activate human cells. There is a bug here. The pig's feet have the strength of an intermediate warrior from the beginning. The above is my personal opinion and is not meant to be offensive.
It's outrageous. Let me tell you. You just traveled through time and gave birth to a child. You already know that you are the famous original ancestor in the future. Are you the most outrageous of all? Is it because the predecessor of your body is called the original ancestor?
this book is very good
Why not update it? Why didn't the author write anymore?










