Man is a Super God and Opens up the Heavens

The writing style of the novel is fine, but I personally don't like such a protagonist. Generally speaking, the protagonists in novels about Xiongbinglianchao Seminary should have their own unique character, or have a selfish personality and thoughts. If the protagonist is weak at the beginning, he should be aggressive. Instead of getting together with the Angel Civilization, Super Theological Academy, Lieyang Civilization, etc. From the beginning, the protagonist should not completely rely on the golden finger as a slave of power. He should learn the technology of the super divine universe and study the power of his own fingers. If he can travel through the heavens, he should also learn the technological systems of different worlds. Don't be like a reckless, foolish child who uses and eats what others give him. The protagonist of the novel in this article got involved with Angel Yan at the beginning, and told the angel the story of the world background where his power system came from. He also said that his power source system in the Quiba world was like a fool, allowing the angel civilization to take advantage of and analyze the protagonist.

The super monkey is not worthy of being called Sun Wukong, because according to the historical process, there was no help during the Anti-Japanese War, and as a result, after coming out of the Taotie Period, he didn't know where he went, just like traveling.

After listening to three chapters, I don't even know what you are talking about. What is your purpose? You have to give me a reason to stay here and listen to the book. Anyway, let's set a goal first. After three pictures, I stopped and didn't understand anything. I didn't even know what the protagonist was going to do. I just felt like I was done. And can a super-godful angel compare to Ultraman? What is Ultraman? More saint than living saint, angel, so arrogant

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What can I say? The writing is too naive and the character of the protagonist is not very good.

When I saw the Master of FATE, Black Ni Tun Totoban, etc., I commented that the traces of flowing literature were very strong, and I could feel the main line, but the narrative was straightforward and lacked transitions. It has just reached the lower limit of cool writing that does not use brains. The poisonous point is also in the writing style of straightforward narrative. After reading half of the chapter, I can basically think of the following content, and this problem appears in the Kuiba world to a small extent, and to a large extent in the Fate world. I hope the author can pay attention to it. Generally speaking, the poison point exceeds the reading point, and it belongs to a quantum superposition state that swings up and down between being able to see and being unable to see.

Now that Kevin is here, is it necessary to include female characters from the world of Chao Seminary?

I repeat here, the tree of imaginary numbers is not a tree. Again, it is not a tree. The quantum sea is not a sea, nor is it a sea.

Super God + All Heavens + Honkai Impact, if you like these three themes, you can rush it without thinking!

Author, you wrote several elements that are good, but the writing style is too poor.