Red Kite Fleet

First of all, the author is Xiaobai, so I won't give it two stars. Now let's analyze the plot. First of all, the feminist theory of the Red Toan Team is unreasonable at first (as well as the Men's Rights Association later). If an army has gender discrimination, then the existence of this army is unreasonable, including the Chiyuan Team recruiting male cleaners instead of using machine cleaners that are several times better than human cleaners. This is unreasonable. Speaking of which, I have to mention that the female officer said in her heart that she paid the most, had the most achievements and the best results, and had the least funds. This is certain. Senior leaders all pay attention to one word: interests. If the Red Kite team destroys an important base at a fraction of the cost. That's for sure. You have to give these soldiers a lot of money to train well, but you are doing it with human lives, and the casualties even outweigh those achievements. That is, I want you to be destroyed quickly. Who is willing to injure the enemy a thousand times a day and lose eight hundred to himself? Women's rights also reflect the lack of funding. Isn't it obvious? Most of the leaders must be men, because except for the Red Kite, the majority of the other armies are men, and the proportion is certain.

The author stepped on a lot of mistakes when writing a book for the first time... Let's not talk about Xiao Lei. Let's talk about the bigger misunderstandings. The first point is women's rights. This is a sensitive topic. Writing a book itself must be avoided and reduce the impact. As a result, the author not only does not avoid it, but expands it and completely develops women's rights into female boxing and feminism. The second point is character setting. This step is even more common, including double standards and discrimination. The author's success lies in (After thinking for a long time, it seems inappropriate to talk about women's rights and women's boxing. This is expressed in the context of the first Lei I mentioned) Carrying forward, the character setting is not pleasing, at least in Chapter 10. The third point is that there is no change in the military posture of the military training. There is nothing wrong with weakening the male and highlighting the female. It is a normal writing technique, but the author, please go to the author's backend first and see if your book is published on the male channel or the female channel. Appropriate weakening is no problem. If you write them as five who don't have dignity, it is too...--------- In case someone takes advantage of the second article, let me explain in detail where the double standard discrimination is. Double standard, bloodshed occurred while going out to fight, and the inner drama after returning, I will copy it (note, there are all soldiers present). They only saw their glorious side, but they know that behind this glory, how many sisters' lives did the Red Kite Fleet pay for it? How much did they sacrifice for this victory? Do they know? ! Discrimination 1 But this sentence does not seem to apply to Fang Zhou and the others. When Huo Yuan glanced at Fang Zhou and others, his eyes were full of indifference, and his eyes wanted to turn into a broom and sweep them away. Discrimination 2 (Tell me here, what is this feminism? Is it condescending? I only see this) Fatty continued: "The Red Kite Fleet has a tradition of recruiting some men to be the lowest level cleaners on the ship to demonstrate their "feminism." So even though other fleets have already used automation and cleaning robots to ensure fleet hygiene, the Red Kite Fleet still maintains the tradition of recruiting male cleaners."

First of all, at the beginning, I felt that the protagonist had no role to play. Then in the middle, it felt very messy. The introduction mentioned deck cleaners, but there was no related cleaning? ? ? Moreover, it is stated that he is Akari Yuan's cleaner, but as a result, there is very little content about the fleet. Later, the protagonist directly leaves the fleet and becomes a shadow, working alone. Since it is talking about the fleet, there should be a description of the protagonist and the fleet working together! Just like some Azur Lane fan fiction or Honzo fan fiction. I was confused when I saw this. . . The intuitive feeling is that the author did not handle it well, and some things are missing. Secondly, the plot processing can be further improved. Finally, how many Bengsan fans were deceived by the cover? ? ? I was fooled into it by the cover and introduction.

What can I say about this book? The subject matter is relatively good and attractive, but I saw that most of the ratings in the comment area are very low. It took me about ten hours to finish reading this book, and I summarized the problems. In fact, when I first started reading it, I didn't really want to read it, because as others said, the beginning was confusing. Later I saw the author's chapter description. The author also explained some of the previous problems and promised to correct them later. This gave me the motivation to continue reading. After reading it, I still said the same thing. The subject matter is not attractive in the early stage, but it is powerful in the later stage. However, it is because the early stage is not good that it leads to most negative reviews and readers are unwilling to read. The same is true for many books. This book has a very big feature in the early stage, which is the second grade. Many people have also felt it. Later, it is relatively stable, but there are still some problems, which can be seen in many book reviews. I am not very good at describing them. It probably means that the logic is not strong and some places are very unreasonable. Then I saw that most of the authors in the comment area have participated, which is relatively rare. I can't say it's good or bad. It feels similar and easy for collaborators to get close to. But if there are too many, it will give people a feeling that it is not that special. Because if the author participates, it is usually more prominent, and most people will go to see it. Few people will see the back, and there will basically be no comments after it. The situation of this book is already like this, and it is difficult to change, but there are still some people who like this kind of book, and those who think it is good after reading it, are waiting for the author's big update, so it is still necessary to write it down, and then I will say here that those who don't like reading it can get out of here. Every time I see you say it is not good or bad, and you give negative reviews on everything, do you have any shame? Is it easy for someone else to write a book? If you don't look good, you can go away and don't bother others here. Even if you think it doesn't look good and don't recommend others to see it, can't you make it clear? Is it okay to give it five stars and then say no? Don't be fooling around. In the end, I personally think that this book is indeed more toxic in the early stage. There are still more interesting points in the later stage and it is more exciting. The logic in the early stage is not very clear, and the main line in the later stage is not clear, so I recommend it. Children with obsessive-compulsive disorder should not read it. Although most readers are like me and read it without thinking, other than that, it is still highly recommended. (Those who are still dissatisfied are welcome to complain. Zu'an literati have never been timid.) (The worst case scenario is that I'll change my account, it's a small one anyway.) (Finally, here are a few pictures of the town building.)

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I've been reading this book for so long, and you ended it in such a hurry? I have so many things I want to say but can't say them out. I can only say that I have a melancholy feeling, just like a child growing up and confused. I have been chasing this book for so long and it is over so soon? Forget it, stop talking, come on, author! Ten miles of spring breeze, I like you

All I can say is, come on! Come on! Come on, work hard! If you dare to break the watch, I'll cut off your penis and drink it!

One person writes in blood, praying for renewal. (Blade warning)

The protagonist is too benevolent, but the author wants to turn him into a murderous god. This kind of content about being slowly forced to become a murderous god is too irritating and not at all exciting. It basically makes Goldfinger finish pretending to be 13.

If there are any shortcomings about me or those areas that can be improved, everyone can mention them. I will read every one of them carefully. Thank you everyone (bow).