
Acting as a Guard for Kong Jie with a Bright Sword
by 574981
About This Novel
The new book "Siheyuan, the whole family was defeated at the beginning" has been uploaded. I hope new and old readers will support it! Huang Yu, a special soldier, traveled to the world of "Bright Sword" and became a guard of Kong Jie. From then on: a different Kong Jie, a different "Bright Sword", presented to everyone...
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Official(95)Scraped 20d ago
I don't approve of the author's Li Yunlong
I feel that the author is trying to promote Kong Jie and belittle Li Yunlong. I think that Li Yunlong has no overall view. It's not that he really has no overall view, but because of the situation at the time, each unit is short of weapons, ammunition, and food. Li Yunlong wants to reduce the death of his soldiers and keep his soldiers fed and clothed (such as crossing the grassland, Li Yunlong marches to grab food). From the perspective of the regiment leader, Li Yunlong loves his soldiers like his son. But if you look at it from the perspective of the brigade commander, you understand Li Yunlong's approach, but stick to the brigade commander's own ideas. Every time Li Yunlong fishes for oil and water, the brigade commander takes the small head, and Li Yunlong takes the big head (the cavalry battalion said otherwise, people can't eat enough. What kind of food does Li Yunlong use to feed hundreds of horses?) Summary: In the eyes of soldiers, Li Yunlong is a good regiment leader. In the eyes of the brigade commander, Li Yunlong has many clever ideas. He is a good fighter. In the eyes of the chief. Li Yunlong is a brave general. Not suitable for being handsome.
I think Li Yunlong is not good enough as a general. Your own soldiers are treasures, and the other soldiers in the Eighth Route Army are your stepmothers? A strong overall force is truly strong. No matter how well-equipped a regiment is, it will not liberate the whole of China.
Reason for two stars
Read Chapter 80 Too much poison, 1Author, are you writing about Kong Jie or the protagonist? Disgusting or not 2. If you are not a platoon leader, you will be promoted if you are a squad leader. How much credit have you made? What are you pretending to be? 3. The protagonist has the ability to lead the team by himself, but he still wants to follow him. You might as well become Kong Jie's chief of staff. 4. Kong Jie is written as being too stupid, and the equipment that his troops fought hard to get back, Turning it in is discipline, no problem, give it to Li, Quan said, and give half of the equipment back. It's not a shame to have a chief officer like **. . . If the author doesn't accept it, come and criticize me.
The dozens of chapters I have written so far are better and more logical than other Liangjian fans! The only drawback is that Li Yunlong is written as a bit childish to win favor? It's better to give a golden finger to the war era. Don't make it too big, just give the protagonist the ability to protect himself! Otherwise, I always feel that just any special soldier can liberate the whole country by traveling through the past, and the Japanese are not stupid!
I have read three books by the author, so I won't read the new book now. Support
I have read three of the author's books, so I won't read the new one now. Support
The writing is very good, and Kong Jie's writing is also very true, but Li Yunlong's writing is not very good, and it is too derogatory.
...Updates are too slow
Six words one by one one by one one by one
There is no system, is it fake? Where is the system?
Even Okamura Neji didn't get rid of the bad reviews! ! !
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Community(0)
Official(95)Scraped 20d ago
I don't approve of the author's Li Yunlong
I feel that the author is trying to promote Kong Jie and belittle Li Yunlong. I think that Li Yunlong has no overall view. It's not that he really has no overall view, but because of the situation at the time, each unit is short of weapons, ammunition, and food. Li Yunlong wants to reduce the death of his soldiers and keep his soldiers fed and clothed (such as crossing the grassland, Li Yunlong marches to grab food). From the perspective of the regiment leader, Li Yunlong loves his soldiers like his son. But if you look at it from the perspective of the brigade commander, you understand Li Yunlong's approach, but stick to the brigade commander's own ideas. Every time Li Yunlong fishes for oil and water, the brigade commander takes the small head, and Li Yunlong takes the big head (the cavalry battalion said otherwise, people can't eat enough. What kind of food does Li Yunlong use to feed hundreds of horses?) Summary: In the eyes of soldiers, Li Yunlong is a good regiment leader. In the eyes of the brigade commander, Li Yunlong has many clever ideas. He is a good fighter. In the eyes of the chief. Li Yunlong is a brave general. Not suitable for being handsome.
I think Li Yunlong is not good enough as a general. Your own soldiers are treasures, and the other soldiers in the Eighth Route Army are your stepmothers? A strong overall force is truly strong. No matter how well-equipped a regiment is, it will not liberate the whole of China.
Reason for two stars
Read Chapter 80 Too much poison, 1Author, are you writing about Kong Jie or the protagonist? Disgusting or not 2. If you are not a platoon leader, you will be promoted if you are a squad leader. How much credit have you made? What are you pretending to be? 3. The protagonist has the ability to lead the team by himself, but he still wants to follow him. You might as well become Kong Jie's chief of staff. 4. Kong Jie is written as being too stupid, and the equipment that his troops fought hard to get back, Turning it in is discipline, no problem, give it to Li, Quan said, and give half of the equipment back. It's not a shame to have a chief officer like **. . . If the author doesn't accept it, come and criticize me.
The dozens of chapters I have written so far are better and more logical than other Liangjian fans! The only drawback is that Li Yunlong is written as a bit childish to win favor? It's better to give a golden finger to the war era. Don't make it too big, just give the protagonist the ability to protect himself! Otherwise, I always feel that just any special soldier can liberate the whole country by traveling through the past, and the Japanese are not stupid!
I have read three books by the author, so I won't read the new book now. Support
I have read three of the author's books, so I won't read the new one now. Support
The writing is very good, and Kong Jie's writing is also very true, but Li Yunlong's writing is not very good, and it is too derogatory.
...Updates are too slow
Six words one by one one by one one by one
There is no system, is it fake? Where is the system?
Even Okamura Neji didn't get rid of the bad reviews! ! !










