Spy War: I Was a Devil in the Republic of China

I've read more than 40 chapters, it's okay, but it's not fun enough. I have some space. Can you write a little more? A small pistol 🔫 What can a few throwing knives do? How big is the explosive package? It's not enough to go to a tavern with a pistol. I feel like it's better to use more explosives and the tavern can level it for him. I need a lot of machine guns. Isn't it good to use a machine gun? The caliber of the cannon should be large, and the cannon should be equipped with a large caliber. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to blast it with a big cannon? I have read a book called Zhutianwen before, but it was too short. Traveling to Conan and blasting DJ directly was so cool.

The author's design of the protagonist is too low. What is a devil? He kills without calculation, is unscrupulous, acts arbitrarily, and uses strong force to scare the enemy and stop children from crying at night. The big devil in this novel should be designed to be an image that scares the Japanese and traitors. They know that this person exists but cannot catch him, keeping them awake all night. And since the protagonist was once a demonic cultivator, why not design an armor spell for the protagonist, so that he is not afraid of assassination attacks and can ensure that the protagonist does not die? Then, he can also design an invisibility spell or shadow spell, which is conducive to the protagonist's stealth assassination and stealing intelligence. Later, he can Let's add a ground escape technique, or an attack-type wind blade technique. Wind blade technique kills people with a silent wind, and it does more damage and kills with one blow. It's not like the flying knife technique designed by the author, which is pure nonsense. A flying knife can kill with one blow but can't make a sound. How is that possible? You kill a chicken with a knife and cut its neck. After draining the blood, it still pounces for a while. For such a big living person, you can kill him with one knife from a distance and not even make a sound. Isn't that ridiculous? It doesn't even have a bit of common sense. If you kill people with a knife without making a sound, you have to cover your mouth. The protagonist designed by the author lacks a three-dimensional image and is unworthy of the title of devil. He is no different from an ordinary latent agent. He just borrowed the title of devil, which does not live up to the name. The light body technique is similar to ordinary parkour skills. You have to use a rope to go downstairs. You have to use a knife and a gun to kill people. It is just like being a thief. The plot is bland and has no ups and downs. How can you attract readers? The idea of ​​the devil that the author came up with was in vain.

Adding in the obstacles,,,,,, it will be troublesome to do anything

If you want to have fun, it's actually better to go solo. No one is in charge, you can mess with whoever you want, and you don't have to be so cunning. Entering the army was a failure.

The protagonist is too restricted by Goldfinger. How can it be fun to read a novel with so many restrictions? It was 37 to 45 years without the protagonist. Now that there is a protagonist, will it still be eight years? It is best to drive them out in three years and destroy the country in five years.

Apart from disguise and poison, there are no monk methods at all, such as searching for souls, walking through walls, or transporting five ghosts. Since you wrote about blood cultivation, you don't have any means to control blood?

I said that the subject matter is good and the idea is also very good, but it is a pity that the author is not good at writing and does not perfectly express the protagonist's demon image. The writing is not refined enough, and the golden finger is too weak and useless. In addition, the novel has many unreasonable loopholes, such as the space ring itself. He entered a safe house and did not send a message, but he still took out the transmitter and put it in the house. It was like placing weapons in the safe house. In Shanghai, there were countless incidents of leaking secrets due to thieves breaking in. In short, the author really thought hard about the novel and wanted to be innovative, but after all, his level was limited. The novel did not have enough tension.

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Can the corpse of an ordinary person step into the first level of Qi refining? Isn't it too casual and simple? It's not that easy for magic cultivators to improve their strength, right? Can the corpse of an ordinary Japanese be cultivated to the first level of Qi refining? Is *** insulting the Chinese people? Can a beast be extraordinary?

Add the same red latent fruit and wait for another day,