Halo Warrior Starting from Bright Sword
About This Novel
My name is Li Yan, inflammation of inflammation. After time travel, he is still called Li Yan, the flame of the spark! My father's name is Li Wenying. He has taken me with him since I was a child, leading me to climb snow-capped mountains and cross meadows. It can be said that he is both a father and a mother. By the way, I still have two uncles. One is named Li Yunlong, nicknamed Li Datou, and he is my uncle. One is named Li Chishui, nicknamed Li Dabenshi, and he is my uncle. It is said that they are all good brothers of my father. I also have a godfather named Kong Jie, nicknamed Kong Er Lengzi. Finally, I have an unmarried little daughter-in-law, her name is Yu Sanwan. She has a pair of beautiful big eyes and looks very good-looking. The key is, she still has eight fathers...
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Official(14)Scraped 1mo ago
There's nothing wrong with the book in general, but it's a little off topic. It's clearly about legions, but dozens of chapters are all about pig's feet's personal heroism. Pig's Foot's teammates are all noobs, and then the enemy becomes a little more powerful. Finally, Pig's Foot leads his rookie teammates to a desperate counterattack. This happens every time, very deliberately.
Aiming at the halo, why separate guns? Isn't this nonsense? It was originally a semi-disabled system with all kinds of suppression. . . Totally unhappy.
It's a lot of babbling, it's really useless, it's useless
In that desperate era, there are always people desperately looking for a glimmer of hope.
The overall writing is very good, and the stories such as Liangjian, No., And Guanzhong Bandit are connected in a very smooth, natural and logical manner. It does not tend to borrow from these stories, but has its own story line. In many military novels about the Anti-Japanese War, which especially borrowed from Liangjian, it has its own ideas and story ideas. Cheating is more reasonable, there is no randomness, and it is reasonable until it is updated to chapter 199. Highly recommended!
The number of enemies was very chaotic. One moment there were more than 300, and the next there were more than 400 people.
Come up and kiss me. Without saying anything else, come first with someone who has never seen a woman before.
If you don't write about women, you will die, right? I really can't change it**
From the beginning of World War I, the fight was based on industrial strength.
Too wordy
If you don't study the system and settings carefully, there won't be any major problems. But looking at the content of the novel, the author is like an angry youth. This is not to say that angry youth are bad. The key is that you have to understand that you are writing a novel, and the most important thing is to present a complete story to the readers. Instead of venting your thoughts all at once. Instead of focusing on how the protagonist uses the system to improve himself, basically every chapter of the team development chapter will have a paragraph describing how cruel the enemy is, how angry the protagonist is, and so on. I don't know if it's because the author is too cool or for other reasons.
The writing is quite good, but not enough to read.
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Official(14)Scraped 1mo ago
There's nothing wrong with the book in general, but it's a little off topic. It's clearly about legions, but dozens of chapters are all about pig's feet's personal heroism. Pig's Foot's teammates are all noobs, and then the enemy becomes a little more powerful. Finally, Pig's Foot leads his rookie teammates to a desperate counterattack. This happens every time, very deliberately.
Aiming at the halo, why separate guns? Isn't this nonsense? It was originally a semi-disabled system with all kinds of suppression. . . Totally unhappy.
It's a lot of babbling, it's really useless, it's useless
In that desperate era, there are always people desperately looking for a glimmer of hope.
The overall writing is very good, and the stories such as Liangjian, No., And Guanzhong Bandit are connected in a very smooth, natural and logical manner. It does not tend to borrow from these stories, but has its own story line. In many military novels about the Anti-Japanese War, which especially borrowed from Liangjian, it has its own ideas and story ideas. Cheating is more reasonable, there is no randomness, and it is reasonable until it is updated to chapter 199. Highly recommended!
The number of enemies was very chaotic. One moment there were more than 300, and the next there were more than 400 people.
Come up and kiss me. Without saying anything else, come first with someone who has never seen a woman before.
If you don't write about women, you will die, right? I really can't change it**
From the beginning of World War I, the fight was based on industrial strength.
Too wordy
If you don't study the system and settings carefully, there won't be any major problems. But looking at the content of the novel, the author is like an angry youth. This is not to say that angry youth are bad. The key is that you have to understand that you are writing a novel, and the most important thing is to present a complete story to the readers. Instead of venting your thoughts all at once. Instead of focusing on how the protagonist uses the system to improve himself, basically every chapter of the team development chapter will have a paragraph describing how cruel the enemy is, how angry the protagonist is, and so on. I don't know if it's because the author is too cool or for other reasons.
The writing is quite good, but not enough to read.
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