Tokyo: Start by Ordering the Down-and-out Young Lady
by The Fish-catching Monster Does Not Touch The Fish
About This Novel
The new book "They all want to control me hard!" >>Has been posted~----Reincarnated in Tokyo and admitted to a prestigious school. Goto Masaru originally thought he could graduate safely, get admitted into a stable job, and live a stable, albeit not brilliant, life. However, the [Reversal System] suddenly comes. As long as you dig out the hidden hearts of the girls and completely reverse their personalities, you can get rewards. Break the system and let him do something that is disliked by girls. I will do it? Of course! The more painful it is, the happier Goto Masaru smiles. ......... "You said you are a down-and-out young lady?" "Yes. I was born in a wealthy family, like to play the piano, have a sister who is not good at words, and formed my own band... Later, because of some things, I was under heavy financial pressure."... "Can we continue to play in the band?" "I have betrayed."
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Official(16)Scraped 24d ago
I've been scammed
The title of the book is exactly the opposite of the content. The protagonist has a bit of m and the heroine is arrogant. Judging from the development, it is probably a harem. This setting is many versions behind. It feels like dreaming back to 2021. At that time, most Nigaru novels had this setting, for example, the retainers of Sister Uesugi during the Warring States Period and so on. (I don't really like reading this type of article. I gave it three stars because I was deceived by the title of the book.)
Is there a system or a FW after traveling through time? The title of the book is written like a doormat and the author calls himself?
Author, your writing is so bad and you don't update it quickly, what do I think? How can you still make a million a month like this? As long as the earth doesn't explode, you can't take a vacation. Can you just bear to have me waiting for you to update in front of your phone? Another question, is it pure love? Because I haven't had much contact with the second person yet, I hope it will end with pure love.
Overall it's very sweet. But there is also a problem, that is, the system is useless in the middle stage and does not appear at all. I personally don't like system articles, but since it appears, it means that I am looking forward to the content of this system and I will accept it, but it is a pity that the system is basically gone in the future. In addition, the female lead is too dominant, which is not a good thing in a harem novel. Especially the female lead who is so serious. It makes the other heroines feel inferior.
So-so, the protagonist has dog-licking attributes, the heroine is tsundere, and the system feels useless
Book club group: 716629920
Welcome to come in and play! Book club group for fishing: 716629920
The author must have underestimated the huge number
Sweet daily life can already reach perfection. But I still prefer Nikkei. The combination of the plot and rhythm of the online novel is not perfect, but just based on the sweet daily descriptions, it basically has a foundation.
Thoughts so far
The system's sense of presence is too low. It would be better to just give the protagonist a genius character. He can learn everything quickly, but he is mediocre in skills because he has no interest. (I've given you hard work and character design, but you can't give talent? Or improve the system's presence?) The protagonist has difficulty facing his own feelings, and is ignorant that he is not self-deceiving. He forcibly deceives love into a pitiful stray cat mentality, and this lasts for a long time. There's nothing wrong with the female protagonist being tsundere, but the male protagonist's M personality is too strong. It's better to be more aggressive towards women, otherwise it's just a dog-licking mentality.
In order to achieve the so-called label of a down-and-out young lady and to maintain the label of a young lady, a plot that is intellectually demoralizing and brainless is hard to watch. I can't stand it. It's too low-key.
There's just such a big pile in front of it, it's so irritating to see
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 24d ago
I've been scammed
The title of the book is exactly the opposite of the content. The protagonist has a bit of m and the heroine is arrogant. Judging from the development, it is probably a harem. This setting is many versions behind. It feels like dreaming back to 2021. At that time, most Nigaru novels had this setting, for example, the retainers of Sister Uesugi during the Warring States Period and so on. (I don't really like reading this type of article. I gave it three stars because I was deceived by the title of the book.)
Is there a system or a FW after traveling through time? The title of the book is written like a doormat and the author calls himself?
Author, your writing is so bad and you don't update it quickly, what do I think? How can you still make a million a month like this? As long as the earth doesn't explode, you can't take a vacation. Can you just bear to have me waiting for you to update in front of your phone? Another question, is it pure love? Because I haven't had much contact with the second person yet, I hope it will end with pure love.
Overall it's very sweet. But there is also a problem, that is, the system is useless in the middle stage and does not appear at all. I personally don't like system articles, but since it appears, it means that I am looking forward to the content of this system and I will accept it, but it is a pity that the system is basically gone in the future. In addition, the female lead is too dominant, which is not a good thing in a harem novel. Especially the female lead who is so serious. It makes the other heroines feel inferior.
So-so, the protagonist has dog-licking attributes, the heroine is tsundere, and the system feels useless
Book club group: 716629920
Welcome to come in and play! Book club group for fishing: 716629920
The author must have underestimated the huge number
Sweet daily life can already reach perfection. But I still prefer Nikkei. The combination of the plot and rhythm of the online novel is not perfect, but just based on the sweet daily descriptions, it basically has a foundation.
Thoughts so far
The system's sense of presence is too low. It would be better to just give the protagonist a genius character. He can learn everything quickly, but he is mediocre in skills because he has no interest. (I've given you hard work and character design, but you can't give talent? Or improve the system's presence?) The protagonist has difficulty facing his own feelings, and is ignorant that he is not self-deceiving. He forcibly deceives love into a pitiful stray cat mentality, and this lasts for a long time. There's nothing wrong with the female protagonist being tsundere, but the male protagonist's M personality is too strong. It's better to be more aggressive towards women, otherwise it's just a dog-licking mentality.
In order to achieve the so-called label of a down-and-out young lady and to maintain the label of a young lady, a plot that is intellectually demoralizing and brainless is hard to watch. I can't stand it. It's too low-key.
There's just such a big pile in front of it, it's so irritating to see
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