
Turn, Leave, Leave
by Come On
About This Novel
Various twists and turns, short stories. The trilogy "Light, Short, Scattered", "Soft, Transformed, Object", and "Turn, Give Up, Leave". Half sci-fi, imaginative. A turning point, a choice, a strange one. My soul is still inside me, like a dark whirlpool. I want to escape but never dare to leave the safe nest in the center.
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Official(34)Scraped 20d ago
That's right, it looks good
Is there anything behind the hat? I seemed to have a story before, but it's gone now.
Sign in floor
Sign in, clock in, sign in, clock in
I've talked too much about the advantages, why don't I talk about the disadvantages?
The author tells the story very well, and his imagination is always very big, which is also the author's characteristic. However, at the end of the short essay, the author himself said that the new work should be changed. It would no longer simply tell stories, but should add some writing and description. However, after I read the first two articles, where was the writing? Although the story is well told, the writing, characterization, and various descriptions are non-existent. The long article written by the author only read the beginning, without commenting, and only talked about the short story. The author has to ensure the update speed when the content of the story is compact and imaginative. It is indeed not easy, and many things are easy to overlook. If the author just regards writing as a hobby, it doesn't matter whether the popularity is good or bad, then it doesn't matter. However, looking at the author's message and the questions he answered, it is obvious that the author is ambitious and hopes that the work will be seen by more people. Then the author will definitely change. The author's short stories give me the feeling that they are just telling stories. There is nothing except the story. The protagonists are basically the same except for the background setting. There is no difference. There are only a few names (I was brainwashed by the name Luqiao😂). I almost thought the author was called Luqiao. I only found out that Luqiao is a place name after joining the fan group 😂😂😂 After reading too many short and medium stories by the author, I feel that all the characters are the same, just tools for telling stories, without characteristics or soul. The protagonist is a little better after all, he has more roles, but the other male characters are ignored. As for the creation of female characters, it is even more terrible. They are nothing but cannon fodder, soy sauce, and villains. Also, a very, very important issue. There are too many things in the author's writing about checking the water meter. I will stop here and won't go into details.
Soften, change, things are updated daily, and will be updated within one week at the latest Light, short, scattered and updated every week, must be updated within one month at the latest Turn, give up, leave the month to update, it will be updated within one year at the latest How to write an introduction to your next book? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I have a book title but I can't send it out.
Author, I have a question
Almost all the reviews are five-star reviews. Why is the book's rating still so low? The author's book is really beautiful.
Where can I watch Sunshine's follow-up? Can you guys please reply to me?
Where can I watch Sunshine's follow-up? Can you guys please reply to me?
publishing publishing
Have any of the author's books been published? Want to see.
Come on
I have read one of your books and came here through the train. Keep it up. Let me know when the physical book will be released. It will be good to buy it and collect it.
bubble
Overall it's pretty good, but a dozen chapters for one story is a bit too much, but it's still very interesting and worth reading.
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Official(34)Scraped 20d ago
That's right, it looks good
Is there anything behind the hat? I seemed to have a story before, but it's gone now.
Sign in floor
Sign in, clock in, sign in, clock in
I've talked too much about the advantages, why don't I talk about the disadvantages?
The author tells the story very well, and his imagination is always very big, which is also the author's characteristic. However, at the end of the short essay, the author himself said that the new work should be changed. It would no longer simply tell stories, but should add some writing and description. However, after I read the first two articles, where was the writing? Although the story is well told, the writing, characterization, and various descriptions are non-existent. The long article written by the author only read the beginning, without commenting, and only talked about the short story. The author has to ensure the update speed when the content of the story is compact and imaginative. It is indeed not easy, and many things are easy to overlook. If the author just regards writing as a hobby, it doesn't matter whether the popularity is good or bad, then it doesn't matter. However, looking at the author's message and the questions he answered, it is obvious that the author is ambitious and hopes that the work will be seen by more people. Then the author will definitely change. The author's short stories give me the feeling that they are just telling stories. There is nothing except the story. The protagonists are basically the same except for the background setting. There is no difference. There are only a few names (I was brainwashed by the name Luqiao😂). I almost thought the author was called Luqiao. I only found out that Luqiao is a place name after joining the fan group 😂😂😂 After reading too many short and medium stories by the author, I feel that all the characters are the same, just tools for telling stories, without characteristics or soul. The protagonist is a little better after all, he has more roles, but the other male characters are ignored. As for the creation of female characters, it is even more terrible. They are nothing but cannon fodder, soy sauce, and villains. Also, a very, very important issue. There are too many things in the author's writing about checking the water meter. I will stop here and won't go into details.
Soften, change, things are updated daily, and will be updated within one week at the latest Light, short, scattered and updated every week, must be updated within one month at the latest Turn, give up, leave the month to update, it will be updated within one year at the latest How to write an introduction to your next book? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I have a book title but I can't send it out.
Author, I have a question
Almost all the reviews are five-star reviews. Why is the book's rating still so low? The author's book is really beautiful.
Where can I watch Sunshine's follow-up? Can you guys please reply to me?
Where can I watch Sunshine's follow-up? Can you guys please reply to me?
publishing publishing
Have any of the author's books been published? Want to see.
Come on
I have read one of your books and came here through the train. Keep it up. Let me know when the physical book will be released. It will be good to buy it and collect it.
bubble
Overall it's pretty good, but a dozen chapters for one story is a bit too much, but it's still very interesting and worth reading.
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[Recommended] A clear stream at the starting point, with many interesting and terrifying stories (.・`Ω´・)



[Short Peng + Turning] Master of short stories, come on, the last part of the three-character short story trilogy (Sea, Land, and Air Trilogy). The key points of this theme are turning, giving and taking, and bizarreness. It seems like I'm looking forward to hearing these three, right? My soul is still in my body, like that dark whirlpool. I want to escape but never dare to leave the stable cargo nest in the center.




A short prose writer, highly recommended. A very good book.




A great short story book, highly recommended.








