The Wonderful Thing Struck by Lightning

The Wonderful Thing Struck by Lightning

by Wutong Tree At The Entrance Of The Village

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31Kwords
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Updated 5y agoScraped 1mo ago
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About This Novel

Ah Fei, I finally got off work. Let's go back quickly. Our computer arrived today. We finally don't have to go to the Internet cafe to play games and smell the smell of smelly feet mixed with instant noodles. We have to fight a family war today! Others traveled through time in the game, but Chu Yu was struck by lightning and had the game system attached to his body. From then on, he was exposed to a different world of cultivation...

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Official(10)Scraped 1mo ago

惋惜
惋惜天使翅膀71mo ago

effort

You can definitely change it to make it better. Come on, but be careful about typos.

惋惜
惋惜天使翅膀71mo ago

The story description is pretty good, but the writing is a little lacking.

꧁༺
꧁༺佳༻꧂71mo ago

praise

I believe you will write better in the future and I look forward to your creations

IC
Ichibansei71mo ago

I believe you will be better

It's been a long time since I read it. The author should write more.

꧁༺
꧁༺佳༻꧂71mo ago

very good

The writing is very good and the content is very vivid.

IC
Ichibansei71mo ago

The writing is okay

The author works hard, the writing is good, and the protagonist is portrayed in detail, but the content is very fascinating.

TI
Tianshu71mo ago

good

The book is well-written and doesn't feel like it's unreadable. Some of the descriptions in the article are also very good

九歌
九歌71mo ago

The writing is okay

It's just that the pace is a bit fast, and there are some details that need to be paid attention to.

惋惜
惋惜天使翅膀71mo ago

Come on, the first time I wrote it is already good, but in the future, I need to pay attention to punctuation before revising it.

CO
coffee_aB71mo ago

come on

It's good if it's the first time I've written it, come on

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