The Wonderful Thing Struck by Lightning
by Wutong Tree At The Entrance Of The Village
About This Novel
Ah Fei, I finally got off work. Let's go back quickly. Our computer arrived today. We finally don't have to go to the Internet cafe to play games and smell the smell of smelly feet mixed with instant noodles. We have to fight a family war today! Others traveled through time in the game, but Chu Yu was struck by lightning and had the game system attached to his body. From then on, he was exposed to a different world of cultivation...
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You can definitely change it to make it better. Come on, but be careful about typos.
The story description is pretty good, but the writing is a little lacking.
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I believe you will write better in the future and I look forward to your creations
I believe you will be better
It's been a long time since I read it. The author should write more.
very good
The writing is very good and the content is very vivid.
The writing is okay
The author works hard, the writing is good, and the protagonist is portrayed in detail, but the content is very fascinating.
good
The book is well-written and doesn't feel like it's unreadable. Some of the descriptions in the article are also very good
The writing is okay
It's just that the pace is a bit fast, and there are some details that need to be paid attention to.
Come on, the first time I wrote it is already good, but in the future, I need to pay attention to punctuation before revising it.
come on
It's good if it's the first time I've written it, come on
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 2d ago
effort
You can definitely change it to make it better. Come on, but be careful about typos.
The story description is pretty good, but the writing is a little lacking.
praise
I believe you will write better in the future and I look forward to your creations
I believe you will be better
It's been a long time since I read it. The author should write more.
very good
The writing is very good and the content is very vivid.
The writing is okay
The author works hard, the writing is good, and the protagonist is portrayed in detail, but the content is very fascinating.
good
The book is well-written and doesn't feel like it's unreadable. Some of the descriptions in the article are also very good
The writing is okay
It's just that the pace is a bit fast, and there are some details that need to be paid attention to.
Come on, the first time I wrote it is already good, but in the future, I need to pay attention to punctuation before revising it.
come on
It's good if it's the first time I've written it, come on
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