Yukinoshita Wants Me to Confess

The characters are too complex, and it depends on the author's writing skills in the later stage. There are also some poisonous points in the early stage, and the stories between the various female protagonists are too abrupt and have a strong sense of separation. Moreover, another female protagonist appears out of nowhere, making it uncomfortable to watch. The male protagonist's character is not well developed and has no purpose. Let's see what the author writes next.

When will there be a plot about the wife regaining her memory?

I don't quite understand why the protagonist has to wear glasses after traveling through time. And it feels like the protagonist doesn't know the plot in some places. Isn't he a time traveler?

The chapters are a bit unsmooth. I don't know if it was written this way on purpose.

There are too many stitches, and the author is like a high school student who wants to sew the heroine in after watching these dramas. Then the heroine's character is also broken, and it is full of flaws.

I couldn't stand it anymore. I only read two chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Poison Kanglaman was poisoned.

There are many flaws. What I can't understand the most is that when you write SAO, you don't write Asuna, but use Nakiri Erina instead

Some of the content you wrote is quite attractive to me.

Poison, really poison. The front and back are severely separated. When I first woke up, I was not proficient in Japanese, but later it became normal inexplicably. If you wrote like this, why didn't you write that you were not proficient in Japanese at the beginning? Another character, Qin, rejected the male protagonist's previous confession. How could she kiss the male protagonist because she was jealous because she saw his older sister's book, and imagined that the male protagonist was trying to please his female classmate by bringing a cat back? How could she be called a childhood sweetheart at her age? According to the fact that she is currently working in a school, and she has just joined the job, she is at least 23 years old, and the male protagonist is only 17. She is a junior high school student in the first grade of the male protagonist. Most of the time, the two of them have nothing in common, and it is even impossible for the two of them to be in the same school. And what's going on in the male protagonist's head? You started out with a cold persona, but suddenly you can take secret photos. You only need to take one photo, but you have to take photos in front of others multiple times? Does the person know you well? You didn't even know your own situation, so you just joined some nonsense to help others fulfill their wishes, just because you think Yukino is upright? Or is it because of sex? Let's talk about the issue of female characters. There are only 6 supporting female characters in Chapter 30 and not a single male. I have low poison resistance and I really can't take it anymore.

I saw Chapter 140, the male protagonist is really rubbish, the wife forgot, wouldn't *** go find him? And I just glanced at the chapter titles and I knew why I kept adding more heroines. What's the use of adding so many heroines if they can't express the charm? Does it all rely on the addition of the original work? It's all over the place, and the logic is very confusing. I don't know what I'm writing. . What a pity it was written