If You Don't Break Up, You Will Die

1. The problem of female protagonists, you are now a Teddy Man, you just accept women when you see them, there are eight female protagonists, now the route seems to be at least 11, Teddy Man 2. If there are many female protagonists, you have to write the characters, the emotional line of the female protagonist, etc. I will see how you write 11, let them recognize each other, Ukrainian sisters are no problem, the little lover is no problem, Feiyan and Xu Man, Shi, I will see how you write and how to round it up. Later, we will meet and compromise. Anyway, if everything is like this, I will sleep on the same bed. It feels like this The book is quite interesting at the beginning. When you are poisoned, the first thing you do is to poison, it is still a chronic poison, and the result is blood transfusion. That situation cannot be saved. Chemical poison? Poison changes life. It is an urban superpower novel. If you don't say anything, forget about the system. If it is not true, then just classify it as a superpower novel! The female protagonists are all beautiful, but too many of them will make readers tired of reading, both visually and emotionally. Reading novels by myself, Fei Yan writes well at the beginning. Then the follow-up is to see how they get back together and then wait, but it seems that this person's role is no longer there or it is getting less and less. Readers will slowly turn their thoughts to another female protagonist again, but when you have more female protagonists, they are all the same, beautiful, beautiful, stop it Beautiful, accept it, it's the same routine over and over again. The first part is good, but the second part is terrible. Now I feel like I accept all the pretty women I see. In harem novels, the protagonist is on the way to accept women or on the road of Teddy.

Ma Ziji learns from other people's authors

It is difficult to write about a harem in a modern setting. Love is a beautiful thing. In the setting of this book, breakup is doomed, but the protagonist can clearly tell the reason or find a bad woman. Why hurt good people, and writing multiple female protagonists at the same time is a very bad idea, is it a spare tire? Life is precious, but is love any worse than life? Single-mindedness in love is the most basic moral bottom line. Without a bottom line, what is the difference between a person's life and a pile of protein?

One look at the author and it seems like he is lazy every day

After reading dozens of chapters, I can understand some of the pitfalls and shortcomings, but more of them can empathize with it. The description is very good, and I can experience the life experiences of some people. It is indeed very good. No matter what the follow-up is, at least the beginning is like this. When I see it, I always have aftertaste of the past and cause bursts of regret and pain. Very good, very good, really good. I have been commenting like this for many years because I am a book-hungry person... All because I was too young and frivolous, and I can only regret it as I grow older.

I can't stand this kind of book. Although this book is well written, for me, what I want to see is that two people can have a good relationship when they fall in love. I can't stand things like breaking up. I think I'm a love brain, but I can see it. I don't understand this way of survival. Why do people have to bow to this system? Yes, in order to survive. Yes, but I just saw the breakup with Qin Feiyan, and I felt like my heart was twisting. If you can't give others what they want, don't bother them. My three views may not be particularly correct, but this kind of plot is very annoying. Is this way of love where you bring hope to others and then give them despair, any different from a psychopath?

I feel that the reaction of women who have been broken up with is too small. Take Feiyan as an example, I can say that there is no reaction at all for being a scumbag. If in reality, it is posted everywhere in the circle of friends and sprays scumbag men with paint.

I think this is one of the best novels I have ever read. It would be nice if it were like A Christmas Kiss, with different world lines and different endings. It's a pity that this is a complete plot. This book is already finished in my heart at chapter 55. Just like Sword Art Online, Sword Art Online is already finished. There is no Sword Art Online Season 2. I cried to death. The codeword girl came out and was beaten

People in the book have lost their souls, just like the 3D area has lost Tifa, there is nothing to see.

The other female protagonists have very abrupt feelings for the male protagonist and are dull and unremarkable. If there are no surprises between the two scheming bitches, the subsequent plot will be cleared up. But the early portrayal of these two people is really unlikable. The big star is just a puppet who listens to her sister with a heart of gratitude. The protagonist has no emotional basis and is just a simple buddies. The two female protagonists are their first love and have nothing to say about each other. It was originally written that after the breakup, it felt like the two could warm up their relationship through this incident, but I didn't expect that there would be no plot in the short term. Originally, the relationship between the two was very weak, how could the relationship be heated up after being separated for a long time? As the heroine, Luo Xuan, I can only say no, just give up. The age difference between the two is too big. If they force their income to be together with other heroines who are 17 or 18 years old, I can only say that adults take care of children. The plot of Yun Mei is also pushed and pulled, and the talk in the morning and evening is also about the male protagonist who has no intention and is full of complaints. Just talk to Yun Mei and develop her low self-esteem.