Ye Luoli's Fairy Dream

This article you wrote is generally good. What's wrong is that it's like you had dinner today, took a nap and it's morning. You need to write about the process, do you know what you had for dinner today, and then add some tone of voice, instead of writing his name directly. Do you know that you need to add a little expression or something like that? Articles written by you. It's the kind of thing where I say something and you tell me clearly what you said, and it's not rich at all. As if talking to normal people. This article doesn't work. It feels like Wang Mo is a little silly. Therefore, when you write an article, you must divide the line and be specific about the time, place, and content. The content must be expanded. It does not mean that you are done eating after eating today.

There is too little written, I still want to read

I also want to see Author, you wrote a little too little

Wasn't Wang Mo very careless before? And this book says that Wang Mo is very smart, which is so strange. Besides, where did Pang Zun get his sister? There is actually a pavilion master in Lingxi Pavilion? And in the end, Prince Shui said that he would never give up on her after giving up Wang Mo, and it was impossible for Wang Mo to like Ye Chen.

Is the author a boy? He writes so overbearingly and has so many house rules. The heroine is beaten so many times when she makes a mistake. She is always restricted from freedom. The heroine is so stupid to resist even if she doesn't know when the resistance is over. She just escapes and still doesn't dare (personal opinion)

Write more, write more, write more

Wang Mo clearly refuses to admit defeat. Is it appropriate for you to write it like this?

Bad reviews are not good at all.

Why is there no content in this book? Every chapter is a comma.

Why did you just write it and end it like this? Write more! Write more!