Supreme Third Miss

The heroine was so arrogant. When she was reborn, she realized that she was a useless person with no strength at all. She was still stubborn and refused to give in. She wanted to vent out the unwillingness and hatred she suffered in her previous life. It wasn't a big deal at first, but he just broke off the engagement and kept talking nonsense in the lobby. He had to make the head of the house and others angry to be happy. Is it necessary? If you don't have the strength, why are you so aggressive? If you show it to outsiders, they think the heroine is strong, unyielding, and very individual. To me, that's just too stupid. Break off the engagement, just break off the engagement, why do you have to anger others, but the owner of the house beat him half to death. Later, when he went out to the street and saw three talented people, he said "Hey" to each other and gave them the middle finger. They didn't offend you, they just looked down on you. Who would like a useless and weak person? But she turned out to be good, fun and provocative, and even said harshly that one day she would step on their heads! The character is too extreme and I don't know what the heroine is thinking. Not thinking about how to improve his strength or change his physique, he just looks for trouble every day. Unlike other heroines, she is a little self-aware. She is not good at anything. Her mouth and morals are very ugly. There is a bottom line for arrogance. Dignity is important, but in a different world where strength is respected, you can't improve your strength first! After reading the first two chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing was pretty good, but the description of the heroine was so useless.

It would be great if it could be made into a TV series! I'm watching even when I'm walking

I read this article last year. I was too young at that time and only focused on the plot and not on the writing style. Now that I think about it, I only read the first part, and I feel that there are still many problems in the first part. For example, in the first five or six chapters, there seemed to be only one adjective for the heroine's expression - cold, which would make her seem less flexible. On the contrary, when she met Golden Lotus, her expression quickly turned into playful, which was a bit of a contrast. She lacked that transitional stage, and the same goes for accepting the fact of time travel. The heroine was too arrogant at first. She clearly didn't have any strength yet, but she always vowed to say harsh words, thinking that she could surpass the "three great talents". They can be called the "three great talents". Of course, they have certain strength. The heroine should aim to surpass them and motivate herself, that is, She can work hard through force even if she doesn't have profound power, instead of only saying harsh words and provoking others even though she has no strength. It can only be said that the bad luck she talks about is caused by her own arrogance. Maybe the author didn't want to express this meaning, but after all, she still failed to portray the character well. The wording is also a bit stiff. For example, the heroine laughs at herself as the first "waste" is higher than the second "waste". She should not use words such as "laughing loudly" and "haha...", Which makes some words inappropriate for the situation. I think words like "sneer" and "ha!" Can be used. Swearing can be used, but I think it is better not to spit in other people's mouths. This will create a feeling that the heroine is rude. This is uncivilized behavior. Swearing is okay. I remember Shen Congwen also said that swearing does not mean they are rude. It is just a verbal habit that ordinary people have. In the previous chapters, the language does not fit the protagonist's mood changes. For example, in the original text there is a sentence "Oh, it turned out that Mo Caidi deducted my change. How much change does the second lady have every month?" I think it is better to change it to "Mo Caidi deducted it? How much does she have every month?" Because it is like "Original" "Here it is..." When this appears in angry sentences, some appear calm, as if there is no emotion, and they are just stating a sentence. When we are angry, we usually don't talk much and just mention the key points. The simpler the language, the easier it is to highlight the angry emotion. Of course, this is my personal opinion. The author's language description is sufficient, and the action description is also in place, but there is too little description of expression, and the same description of appearance makes it difficult for people to imagine the outline of the character. In fact, I also understand that writing novels is not easy. I am just a novice writer and I may not be able to write better than the author, so I just elaborated on my point of view here. I think I pay more attention to characterization and logic. Some of the supporting characters in the article sometimes have sudden views on the protagonist. I think there is still a lack of transition. The subsequent plot is quite unforgettable for me. I liked this article very much before, but it is a pity that I was still young and did not pay attention to details. I only cared about the plot and did not remember any details in the later part...

The ending for the two of them was too clumsy.

Been following this book!

There is another question that puzzles me, that is, the heroine lost her memory as soon as she was introduced to the world. Why didn't she first understand the world and provoke others? Is she too confident in herself or does she not take others seriously?

I would like to trouble the author to stop writing this kind of junk articles in the future. It will make us readers think that the articles written by QQ Reading software are all rubbish. Thank you.

Very pretty!

Can the ending be more perfect? ​​Why does it end like this?

It's great. I've read this book many times and I'm very moved.