The Unparalleled Doctor and Poison: the Black-bellied Little Miss
by You Xiaoxiao
About This Novel
(The text has been completed) She was so fed up with the combination of Holy Doctor and Ghost Hell in the organization of God, but the organization was so ruthless that it issued a "kill order" and caused her soul to travel to another world. This time, she was fine, but she had to start over again, but why did this masked man protect her again and again? When the mask was lifted, my little heart was shocked! She decided to take him into her pocket... (The new book has been opened, the title is "Feng Hua Shuang Jiao: Husband's Unbridled Favor", welcome to the pit.)
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Official(325)Scraped 25d ago
I feel that the heroine's character can be changed
The heroine was written too strongly at the beginning. I feel that if the heroine's character is to be more domineering, the current character could be changed to a colder one, which would stand out more. If she just praises Haikou like this, it would be a little weird. Although it's not that she can't do that, after all, the author Damn it, the beginning feels like a very arrogant homework, some people are disgusted, really... Just Diudiu, but overall it's still pretty good-looking, it's a lot of hard work, this is just my personal opinion, I probably read too many Kuai Chuan articles 233...(??Ω?? ?) If you write too domineeringly, you are a bit overestimating your abilities. Being low-key seems to attract more attention.
Dear author, will this book be paid for?
It's good to watch, but the process and details are a bit lacking, and the content is a bit lacking. The ending is good; in my opinion, the mystery surrounding the heroine's life experience was written too quickly, and it feels like something is missing, but overall it's very good.
The heroine's character should be more ruthless
personal opinion
The introduction is okay, but the article... The writing is too young and a bit illogical at the beginning. It needs more description, such as appearance, environment, side effects, etc. Don't always rely on words and what you think in your heart to write the article. Needs to be improved.
Sir, I have a question for you?
You said someone took care of their children during the Chinese New Year. Will you update after the Chinese New Year?
Nice! Come on, great author! I'm here to urge you to update!
I'm also drunk. I waited for so long and only updated one chapter. I'm speechless.
Can the author update faster?
The author can't finish reading one chapter a day, please update soon! ! !
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Community(0)
Official(325)Scraped 25d ago
I feel that the heroine's character can be changed
The heroine was written too strongly at the beginning. I feel that if the heroine's character is to be more domineering, the current character could be changed to a colder one, which would stand out more. If she just praises Haikou like this, it would be a little weird. Although it's not that she can't do that, after all, the author Damn it, the beginning feels like a very arrogant homework, some people are disgusted, really... Just Diudiu, but overall it's still pretty good-looking, it's a lot of hard work, this is just my personal opinion, I probably read too many Kuai Chuan articles 233...(??Ω?? ?) If you write too domineeringly, you are a bit overestimating your abilities. Being low-key seems to attract more attention.
Dear author, will this book be paid for?
It's good to watch, but the process and details are a bit lacking, and the content is a bit lacking. The ending is good; in my opinion, the mystery surrounding the heroine's life experience was written too quickly, and it feels like something is missing, but overall it's very good.
The heroine's character should be more ruthless
personal opinion
The introduction is okay, but the article... The writing is too young and a bit illogical at the beginning. It needs more description, such as appearance, environment, side effects, etc. Don't always rely on words and what you think in your heart to write the article. Needs to be improved.
Sir, I have a question for you?
You said someone took care of their children during the Chinese New Year. Will you update after the Chinese New Year?
Nice! Come on, great author! I'm here to urge you to update!
I'm also drunk. I waited for so long and only updated one chapter. I'm speechless.
Can the author update faster?
The author can't finish reading one chapter a day, please update soon! ! !
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