Minghaifengyun

I will try my best to tell you why I write like this, and also ask you to help me correct my mistakes and find out the bugs and the like.

I just don't know whether the protagonist will become an emperor in the end or something else.

I always say that my grades are poor. I hope the author will read it. This book is a bit poisonous. It has traveled through decades and history has not changed at all. Second, he claims that his army training is so good, but he is often beaten to death by miscellaneous troops. Don't you know that for untrained people like this, the casualty rate usually reaches 5% and collapses, and the Eight Banners is only 15% at most. Third, in the hands of Zheng Zhilong and Zheng Chenggong, the entire sea area can earn at least five million, so they can arm one or two hundred thousand retired troops, especially after the Qing army occupied Jiangnan in the later period, they still had so much money. With one million in the hands of the protagonist, and so many new industries, doesn't the protagonist know about the ancient trade in raw silk, tea, and sugar, let alone sea salt? . Fourth, going out to raid the indigenous people can kill more than 80% of the young and middle-aged indigenous people. Oh my God, do you still have common sense? . . Also, the author has no concept of data, and there are too many messy things. All I can say is that this book is not as exciting as it is a pig traveling through time. . .

I just read the beginning of the second volume and I really can't stand it. I hate the kind of organization that travels through ancient times and uses modern organizations. Even company commanders and platoon commanders change their names and use the current organization to become the current army? The difference in war methods determined by hot and cold weapons also represents the difference in the size and organization of the army. It is not just a matter of changing the name. The second ridiculous thing is that even if the Navy is a pirate, it still uses a land organization. Have you never read Marshal Qi's new book? I don't know how the navy organization is written in the book? How many sailors per ship, how many damage control, how many boarding battles, and how many land battles to seize the ship? Just based on the current military establishment on land? Don't worry about it, so you abandon the trap.

Come on, popularity needs to be accumulated, write it down very carefully!

Also, don't be so arrogant when fighting. Your army has been trained for so long and has such good benefits. When fighting, it seems that the Japanese are fighting against the People's Liberation Army. You have to fight until the mortality rate is 890% to win. Just like in the book, Zheng Zhilong killed one-third of your army just one year after unification. Do you know what this means? Your army's casualty rate is at least 150%, haha. . For thousands of years, there have been very few armies like this. If you take a closer look at how the war was fought in the late Ming Dynasty, more than 90% of the troops were fighting for their own good. . Not to mention those pirates and bandits

Why didn't this idiot save his mother first and then take care of the old woman's indiscriminate things? Live in vain

It's so toxic, I don't know how to complain about it.

As a man, the protagonist has power and money, how could there be only one woman, and this is in ancient times, even in modern times, there must be at least several! It's so unreal!

Resolutely abandon the book. Pirates are not like pirates or merchants, and there are hundreds of people trying to assimilate thousands of people. Do you want to write the protagonist into a badass like you?