Quickly Go Through Time and I Was Caught by the Yandere Male Protagonist Again
About This Novel
After Jian Xiaoxiao dumped the male protagonist thirteen times in a row, her world collapsed. System: Please complete the task again. ... Later, the yandere prince stared at her neck and chuckled: "Why did Xiaoxiao run away?" The manic school sweetheart held her in his arms and said grimly: "It would be a pity not to lock up such a fair and tender person." The gentle prince caressed her face: "It turns out that Xiaoxiao doesn't like gentleness, and he made me pretend to be gentle for so long." ... Jian Xiaoxiao burst into tears: "If you love me again, I can dump the hero one more time." After finally completing the task, Jian Xiaoxiao twisted her waist to express that she could do it again. The system mistress cried: "Little girl, the Lord God is looking for us." Jian Xiaoxiao thought thoughtfully: "Are we going to give out year-end bonuses?" Xiaosan shed tears of sadness: "... I heard that the people you dumped thirteen times were all gods." ... Ding. High energy ahead. A large Shura field and a small black room are waiting for you to sign. (I have a story and you have wine, just have fun and that's it.)
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Official(342)Scraped 8d ago
Isn't this book very nice?
Why is no one watching? I quite like the female protagonist. It's not like the female protagonists in other novels who fall in love with the male protagonist all of a sudden. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist very much. The sickly male protagonist is my favorite, hehehe.
It's just... Quite interesting
Gone, gone
This time I really have to prepare for the exam~ I am relatively lazy, and my original goal is to get into the top fifteen, no more, no less. And the whole school is pretty good, But I found that I still overestimated myself, My brain is a little bit bad. The school is a bit tight, too, and the pressure is quite high. This semester is on and off, and I plan to study while writing a novel. Then I realized that I really couldn't do it anymore. I'm still young and my face is covered with acne. I'm no longer beautiful! ! ! For the sake of my beauty, I can only reluctantly give up my love, I'll probably update it in mid-June next year. Don't wait any longer, Sometimes I'm online on QQ. If you really miss me, just chat privately and praise my beauty. I'll definitely give you a big red envelope~~~ (The author is actually quite young, probably about the same as you, or even younger than some of you, so don't scold me~~~who is not a cutie~~~)
This wave of analysis is very clear
Some suggestions(/≧▽≦/)
① Language description accounts for the majority. You can add some description of scenery to render the environment ^ω^ ② The portrayal of the heroine's emotions is a bit lacking. The feelings are not very delicate, more like general writing, and it is not clear whether the heroine really has no feelings for the hero or has weak feelings; the hero's paranoia towards the heroine is a bit abrupt, and it can be explained appropriately (⊙ꇴ⊙) ③The plot fluctuates a bit and the speed is a bit fast. It can be adjusted appropriately. Overall, it's pretty good, but can it be better? (⌒▽⌒) Come on
come on
It's a very nice book. I haven't seen this type of book in a long time. Come on! However, I still need to practice my writing, it always feels a bit weird, so come on!
Build a skirt
Build a little skirt here, come in if you want, there are beautiful, charming and generous authors waiting for you here. Buttoned skirt size. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. Nine. Six. Eight. Eight. Zero
It's still my brother Du who's cool
Damn, can the second male lead become the second personality of the main god in the future? I feel so sorry for the second male lead
What the hell? Why can't I understand? ╯▂╰
Why does the heroine have to do this and that again? I feel it's a mess and I don't understand it anyway. Weird
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Community(0)
Official(342)Scraped 8d ago
Isn't this book very nice?
Why is no one watching? I quite like the female protagonist. It's not like the female protagonists in other novels who fall in love with the male protagonist all of a sudden. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist very much. The sickly male protagonist is my favorite, hehehe.
It's just... Quite interesting
Gone, gone
This time I really have to prepare for the exam~ I am relatively lazy, and my original goal is to get into the top fifteen, no more, no less. And the whole school is pretty good, But I found that I still overestimated myself, My brain is a little bit bad. The school is a bit tight, too, and the pressure is quite high. This semester is on and off, and I plan to study while writing a novel. Then I realized that I really couldn't do it anymore. I'm still young and my face is covered with acne. I'm no longer beautiful! ! ! For the sake of my beauty, I can only reluctantly give up my love, I'll probably update it in mid-June next year. Don't wait any longer, Sometimes I'm online on QQ. If you really miss me, just chat privately and praise my beauty. I'll definitely give you a big red envelope~~~ (The author is actually quite young, probably about the same as you, or even younger than some of you, so don't scold me~~~who is not a cutie~~~)
This wave of analysis is very clear
Some suggestions(/≧▽≦/)
① Language description accounts for the majority. You can add some description of scenery to render the environment ^ω^ ② The portrayal of the heroine's emotions is a bit lacking. The feelings are not very delicate, more like general writing, and it is not clear whether the heroine really has no feelings for the hero or has weak feelings; the hero's paranoia towards the heroine is a bit abrupt, and it can be explained appropriately (⊙ꇴ⊙) ③The plot fluctuates a bit and the speed is a bit fast. It can be adjusted appropriately. Overall, it's pretty good, but can it be better? (⌒▽⌒) Come on
come on
It's a very nice book. I haven't seen this type of book in a long time. Come on! However, I still need to practice my writing, it always feels a bit weird, so come on!
Build a skirt
Build a little skirt here, come in if you want, there are beautiful, charming and generous authors waiting for you here. Buttoned skirt size. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. Nine. Six. Eight. Eight. Zero
It's still my brother Du who's cool
Damn, can the second male lead become the second personality of the main god in the future? I feel so sorry for the second male lead
What the hell? Why can't I understand? ╯▂╰
Why does the heroine have to do this and that again? I feel it's a mess and I don't understand it anyway. Weird
