With Space in Another World

The same goes for the male protagonist. He hates girls so much. He can't walk when he meets the female protagonist. There is no logic at all. The female protagonist revealed all his trump cards within two days of meeting her. It feels so brainless. I can't stand it any longer. I abandon the article.

Personal opinion: Since the heroine has experienced the apocalypse, she definitely knows how to be on guard. How could her supernatural powers be exposed just because of an assassination? The heroine knows that she is different from others and should not go with others. She confessed all her trump cards to others after only knowing each other for a few days. The heroine He and his younger brother can also reach the capital safely. After all, the heroine has special powers and space. The most important thing is that the heroine has no strong sense of defense as if she has never experienced the apocalypse. I feel that the heroine is very naive, naive, a bit like a silly Baitian. She has experienced the apocalypse and should not be so quick to trust others.

I really can't stand it anymore. It's so easy for people who have experienced the apocalypse to believe that the human dimension has been exposed. It feels so senseless.

1. I saw that the image of the heroine changed later (after meeting the male protagonist). She was not vigilant enough when facing strangers, which is not in line with the image of the heroine at all, especially since the heroine has been in the apocalypse and is still the boss (leader). I think that in addition to having a golden finger and a loyal subordinate, the heroine also has something to do with herself. It is obvious that the current heroine is not satisfied with the image of a smart leader in the apocalypse, because she loses her horse after one assassination and takes the initiative to show the golden finger to others. 2. During the reading process, I found many typos. I hope the author can correct them and be more careful. Some readers will point out the typos. I hope the author will correct them after seeing them. I don't want the typos to affect reading. (The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) Come on, author! ! !

The beginning of each chapter is repeated, and the further the chapters go, the more it is repeated. This is too clumsy! And isn't it possible for the heroine's space to enter and plant people? After working for so many years, I still can't find a way to plant more space. I use it as a mobile warehouse every time. No wonder the heroine is so stupid and died so quickly in her previous life.

Let me go, this beginning is exactly the same as Sanzao's Nongmen eldest sister has space. 😅😂 I just finished the article and instantly lost my desire to read it. I hope that the rest of it won't be copied from it. Goodbye!

It's long-winded, with a lot of nonsense, insufficient character description, vague images, and many logical flaws in the story. The heroine is in her thirties and has the same personality as a middle school student. Irrational, impolite, and very childish in psychology, he describes the male protagonist as if he were his male classmate. I can write wherever I want to write about the storyline today, without any common sense in life. The author is still young, and your age limits your imagination. Please write articles after graduation!

The heroine was transported to the end of the world, and what she can do is like being mentally retarded...

Since the heroine has been in the apocalypse for five years and is still the leader, she should be very wary. When the author wrote the storyline, it felt a bit taken for granted. The character the author gave the heroine did not match what the heroine did. When reading the novel, it was quite speechless.

This novel was already bad when I exposed my space and foolishly shared it with a group of unfamiliar people. It was so stupid and mindless. You can also read the first few chapters of escaping and it started to suck when I met the prince. Bad review.