
The Ancient Soldiers of Chaos in the Heavens
About This Novel
Eight hundred disciples and eight hundred soldiers! In the battle of Boundary Sea, we fought against the army of darkness. Even if we die a hundred times, we will not regret it. The Emperor is in front, how can we retreat! "What I am most proud of in my life is following Emperor Huang Tian, stepping through the immortal realm, traveling through foreign lands, slaughtering real immortals, killing immortals, drinking the king's blood, fighting to cross the sea of boundaries, and fighting against the darkness!" The years have passed, everything has changed, and the world has forgotten who fought against the darkness and who saved the world. The glory of the Emperor of Heaven cannot be forgotten by any living being. It is up to me, a fading veteran, to spread the great achievements of the Emperor of Heaven to all the worlds! (Li Xiaoman has given up)
What Readers Think
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Official(19)Scraped 19d ago
. The theme is okay
It's just that the author is a bit stubborn. I dare say that few people who have seriously watched Zhe Tian like Li Xiaoman. Even if you abandon her later on, most people will be persuaded to leave in the first few dozen chapters. If you choose Li Xiaoman again, it will make others feel that the failure of choosing so many ancient emperors is due to the protagonist's vision. No matter what the reason is for the ruthless person to choose Ye Fan, his vision is better than that of the protagonist.
I feel a little confused and I don't understand what's urgent.
I have no idea what to write about. I always like to write about cause and effect. You might as well just write about prehistoric times.
Nothing to say
This book is about to jump, a lot of things are forced to twist, and it feels far-fetched! The transformation makes people feel like Monk Zhang Er is confused! If the author thinks what I say makes sense, he can take the time to read his own book from beginning to end! Of course, if the author feels that there is something wrong with what I said, don't ignore it!
very good
It would be better if you could tell me what the next one is called.
Yes, you can water, water, water, water, water, crystal. . . . . . . . . . . .
abandoned
I'm so dizzy, I don't know what I'm writing...
The first one looks good, but the others are not good-looking
I think your book is good, I didn't read the book you read.
If you want to write this book, write it well, make your settings better, and prepare the plot for traveling across the world better. In this case, your book is definitely acceptable.
Everything else is fine, except that you have to change the characters in this book to those in the previous book. Originally, you were writing a fanfic using other novels. Re-set the setting of the original novel and change it to the character I wrote in the previous book
Rating
Community(0)
Official(19)Scraped 19d ago
. The theme is okay
It's just that the author is a bit stubborn. I dare say that few people who have seriously watched Zhe Tian like Li Xiaoman. Even if you abandon her later on, most people will be persuaded to leave in the first few dozen chapters. If you choose Li Xiaoman again, it will make others feel that the failure of choosing so many ancient emperors is due to the protagonist's vision. No matter what the reason is for the ruthless person to choose Ye Fan, his vision is better than that of the protagonist.
I feel a little confused and I don't understand what's urgent.
I have no idea what to write about. I always like to write about cause and effect. You might as well just write about prehistoric times.
Nothing to say
This book is about to jump, a lot of things are forced to twist, and it feels far-fetched! The transformation makes people feel like Monk Zhang Er is confused! If the author thinks what I say makes sense, he can take the time to read his own book from beginning to end! Of course, if the author feels that there is something wrong with what I said, don't ignore it!
very good
It would be better if you could tell me what the next one is called.
Yes, you can water, water, water, water, water, crystal. . . . . . . . . . . .
abandoned
I'm so dizzy, I don't know what I'm writing...
The first one looks good, but the others are not good-looking
I think your book is good, I didn't read the book you read.
If you want to write this book, write it well, make your settings better, and prepare the plot for traveling across the world better. In this case, your book is definitely acceptable.
Everything else is fine, except that you have to change the characters in this book to those in the previous book. Originally, you were writing a fanfic using other novels. Re-set the setting of the original novel and change it to the character I wrote in the previous book









