Not Allowed to Ascend
About This Novel
This time, practicing Taoism is not for immortality. Hai Qijue, a new practitioner who has just entered the world of spiritual practice, has his parents killed by his senior brother. When I was bent on revenge on my senior brother, I discovered the life trajectory of my deceased senior brother. A conversation between two people traveling through time. Let him discover the secrets hidden in the entire spiritual world. The world of demons is about to collapse, the founder is imprisoned in the sect, two completely different brothers, one living and one dead, the entangled Buddhist sect, and the beautiful figure waiting quietly in the underworld. Let's see if he can break free from the shackles of reincarnation and take control of his own life. (This story is purely fictitious, any similarity is purely coincidental)
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Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
Gotta work harder
After reading a few chapters, the biggest problem is probably that the author doesn't segment it into sections. It's really uncomfortable to read. Everything else takes a back seat. Let's give an example: Back in the office, I saw Master Yu sitting leisurely on the golden nan wood chair, looking at his mobile phone with a smile. Hai Qijue rolled up the corners of his lips and smiled at Master Yu: "Master, the painting has been taken care of. How long will it take you to complete the painting?" Master Yu withdrew his attention and shook his folding fan, "It can be completed today." Hai Qijue thought about the process of financial reimbursement. Although he had the boss's reimbursement guarantee, for the sake of safety, he still smiled awkwardly and asked softly: "Master, please... Can you issue an invoice..." This is after I helped you divide it into paragraphs. It really feels much more comfortable this way. The author's writing style is still sufficient for writing online articles. The biggest problem is that it is not divided into paragraphs. This is the first time I have read an article like this. It is not divided into paragraphs and it really makes the reader feel uncomfortable. Also, try not to use uncommon words in your names. How can I put it, it looks quite uncomfortable.
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
Gotta work harder
After reading a few chapters, the biggest problem is probably that the author doesn't segment it into sections. It's really uncomfortable to read. Everything else takes a back seat. Let's give an example: Back in the office, I saw Master Yu sitting leisurely on the golden nan wood chair, looking at his mobile phone with a smile. Hai Qijue rolled up the corners of his lips and smiled at Master Yu: "Master, the painting has been taken care of. How long will it take you to complete the painting?" Master Yu withdrew his attention and shook his folding fan, "It can be completed today." Hai Qijue thought about the process of financial reimbursement. Although he had the boss's reimbursement guarantee, for the sake of safety, he still smiled awkwardly and asked softly: "Master, please... Can you issue an invoice..." This is after I helped you divide it into paragraphs. It really feels much more comfortable this way. The author's writing style is still sufficient for writing online articles. The biggest problem is that it is not divided into paragraphs. This is the first time I have read an article like this. It is not divided into paragraphs and it really makes the reader feel uncomfortable. Also, try not to use uncommon words in your names. How can I put it, it looks quite uncomfortable.
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