
The Book Has Its Own Villain
by Do You Have A Name Change Card?
About This Novel
Inexplicably becoming a rich, handsome man with the same name, Wang Minghao felt happy, now he could enjoy the luxury of being a rich man. What, someone named Li Tian is looking for me? Isn't this the domineering and handsome male protagonist in the urban novel he read? Wait, Wang Minghao lowered his head and thought for a moment, it seems that the villain in the book has the same name as him. It's okay, don't panic, pour the wine, play the BGM, you are the protagonist, I have nothing to be afraid of. (Urban novice, invincible and refreshing article.)
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Official(235)Scraped 6d ago
Come and read with me, never be a licker. (Top it up, brothers!)
Come and read after me, jue, jue, bu, no, dang, when, tian, lick, go, dog. The protagonist does not have a harem. I will let the author make a fortune by selling blades. The four-hundred-meter sword will let you run ten meters first.
Thoughts after reading
I originally came to see the villain of the urban cool novel, but why didn't I see any trace of the villain? It doesn't mean that someone who opposes the protagonist is a villain. The meaning of a villain's existence is to cause trouble. What is a villain if he doesn't cause trouble? A character like Wang Minghao in the book cannot be called a villain at all. On the contrary, Li Tian's character is more like Wang Minghao, who is just a rich second generation with nothing to do. There are girls who don't dare to face each other, but only dare to hold their little hands; there are enemies who don't dare to face each other, but only dare to stab them in the back, which is considered a hammer villain and a cool novel. Of course, everyone has different ideas. I simply think that Li Tian's character is more suitable for a villain, while Wang Minghao just wears the title of villain and doesn't do what a villain should do at all. It doesn't have the pleasure of being a villain. The "villain craze" has arisen during this time. Has the author ever thought about why people like to watch villains, or is he just following the trend and wanting to write about it? A villain should be as strong as a villain, not always coy.
suggestion
In fact, you can write more about daily things, such as things that increase feelings, and don't always face off against the protagonist. After all, the more lanes you have, the progress in this world will be faster. If you change the world, you will face him again, and everything will cycle. You can write more about the theme and characteristics of your world.
I am the common villain in the novel and I am better at handling female characters than you are.
First of all, from the beginning of his book, it is clear that the female villain is the main character. In this way, there will be no ambiguity between the female character and the male protagonist in the original plot, and you can feel free to love them. On the contrary, the original novel by Su Ye that you collected contained a toy on the male protagonist's crotch, but you used it to dote on you... It's disgusting. Second, the heroine in his book is not like you who throws away the chapters as soon as they are over and never writes about them again. You said you didn't love Lin Siyao and then abandoned her and became a passerby? What's the point of writing so many chapters like that? Look at the heroines in his books, but the heroines in his books have been developed into useful characters one by one, and can continue to appear in future chapters as female characters who become a major fighting force. His books are not like yours, the heroines are as worthless as cabbage. His books say that he is not loved, but the heroine still plays a key role later. Your book says that he is not loved, and then the heroine Lin Siyao is like a passer-by and never needs to appear again? No use anymore? ? ? This is the difference between your book and his. I hope, author, you can treat the heroine well so that you can look like a villain. It doesn't mean that you have to love the heroine. It means that you have to give the heroine her future value, instead of having the heroine be useless once the plot is over and there will be no chapters.
Some advice, don't spray.
To be honest, I like Su Ye in it, but I'm not interested in the stallion story either. In Chapter 41, the person named Lin (forgot her name, I don't really like her) came to the protagonist and had a conflict with Su Ye. The protagonist's words seemed a bit extreme (I don't know why, but Su Ye was not mentioned at all) and the protagonist saved people in front of her. He should be trying to attack her. If so, I think it is a bit poisonous (since you don't like her, why bother with a warm face but a cold butt). These are some suggestions. The sentences are not connected very smoothly. I hope the author can see them.
The author's writing style is great, and it's not embarrassing to read. This is what I like most about novels. As long as the writing style is okay and not so retarded, it feels good, but now many novels are quite embarrassing to read╯▂╰I hope the author will continue to do so, come on😄
When will there be another world? Everyone's stance will be different. Everyone can become a villain and stand in my way. I will clean up those who are being cleaned up. I think this person is a villain and then rise up to clean up the people who cleaned him up before. So is this now? It can also be said to be a villain. It is just a wolf in sheep's clothing. Dutemeow is a villain. If it succeeds, the protagonist fails. It is a villain.
Isn't this just the villain becoming the protagonist? It's not the same thing.
Just like the common villain in that novel, so average! But this one is not as well written as that one. The protagonist of this one, like the villain, has become brainless, and he even pretends to be cool.
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Hey, what can you say? I thought it was a sudden reversal, but it was really a big reversal. The author suddenly entered the palace, which I didn't expect
I saw a very similar original novel
Born to be a King, the protagonist is named Xiao Yang, the setting is: the abandoned son-in-law, the wife is named Ye Shuyun, there is a plot of giving a bronze tripod to a birthday, and there is also a plot of a Western restaurant. I accidentally saw a short paragraph, searched it, and found that it was very similar. 😘😘😘
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Official(235)Scraped 6d ago
Come and read with me, never be a licker. (Top it up, brothers!)
Come and read after me, jue, jue, bu, no, dang, when, tian, lick, go, dog. The protagonist does not have a harem. I will let the author make a fortune by selling blades. The four-hundred-meter sword will let you run ten meters first.
Thoughts after reading
I originally came to see the villain of the urban cool novel, but why didn't I see any trace of the villain? It doesn't mean that someone who opposes the protagonist is a villain. The meaning of a villain's existence is to cause trouble. What is a villain if he doesn't cause trouble? A character like Wang Minghao in the book cannot be called a villain at all. On the contrary, Li Tian's character is more like Wang Minghao, who is just a rich second generation with nothing to do. There are girls who don't dare to face each other, but only dare to hold their little hands; there are enemies who don't dare to face each other, but only dare to stab them in the back, which is considered a hammer villain and a cool novel. Of course, everyone has different ideas. I simply think that Li Tian's character is more suitable for a villain, while Wang Minghao just wears the title of villain and doesn't do what a villain should do at all. It doesn't have the pleasure of being a villain. The "villain craze" has arisen during this time. Has the author ever thought about why people like to watch villains, or is he just following the trend and wanting to write about it? A villain should be as strong as a villain, not always coy.
suggestion
In fact, you can write more about daily things, such as things that increase feelings, and don't always face off against the protagonist. After all, the more lanes you have, the progress in this world will be faster. If you change the world, you will face him again, and everything will cycle. You can write more about the theme and characteristics of your world.
I am the common villain in the novel and I am better at handling female characters than you are.
First of all, from the beginning of his book, it is clear that the female villain is the main character. In this way, there will be no ambiguity between the female character and the male protagonist in the original plot, and you can feel free to love them. On the contrary, the original novel by Su Ye that you collected contained a toy on the male protagonist's crotch, but you used it to dote on you... It's disgusting. Second, the heroine in his book is not like you who throws away the chapters as soon as they are over and never writes about them again. You said you didn't love Lin Siyao and then abandoned her and became a passerby? What's the point of writing so many chapters like that? Look at the heroines in his books, but the heroines in his books have been developed into useful characters one by one, and can continue to appear in future chapters as female characters who become a major fighting force. His books are not like yours, the heroines are as worthless as cabbage. His books say that he is not loved, but the heroine still plays a key role later. Your book says that he is not loved, and then the heroine Lin Siyao is like a passer-by and never needs to appear again? No use anymore? ? ? This is the difference between your book and his. I hope, author, you can treat the heroine well so that you can look like a villain. It doesn't mean that you have to love the heroine. It means that you have to give the heroine her future value, instead of having the heroine be useless once the plot is over and there will be no chapters.
Some advice, don't spray.
To be honest, I like Su Ye in it, but I'm not interested in the stallion story either. In Chapter 41, the person named Lin (forgot her name, I don't really like her) came to the protagonist and had a conflict with Su Ye. The protagonist's words seemed a bit extreme (I don't know why, but Su Ye was not mentioned at all) and the protagonist saved people in front of her. He should be trying to attack her. If so, I think it is a bit poisonous (since you don't like her, why bother with a warm face but a cold butt). These are some suggestions. The sentences are not connected very smoothly. I hope the author can see them.
The author's writing style is great, and it's not embarrassing to read. This is what I like most about novels. As long as the writing style is okay and not so retarded, it feels good, but now many novels are quite embarrassing to read╯▂╰I hope the author will continue to do so, come on😄
When will there be another world? Everyone's stance will be different. Everyone can become a villain and stand in my way. I will clean up those who are being cleaned up. I think this person is a villain and then rise up to clean up the people who cleaned him up before. So is this now? It can also be said to be a villain. It is just a wolf in sheep's clothing. Dutemeow is a villain. If it succeeds, the protagonist fails. It is a villain.
Isn't this just the villain becoming the protagonist? It's not the same thing.
Just like the common villain in that novel, so average! But this one is not as well written as that one. The protagonist of this one, like the villain, has become brainless, and he even pretends to be cool.
. .
Hey, what can you say? I thought it was a sudden reversal, but it was really a big reversal. The author suddenly entered the palace, which I didn't expect
I saw a very similar original novel
Born to be a King, the protagonist is named Xiao Yang, the setting is: the abandoned son-in-law, the wife is named Ye Shuyun, there is a plot of giving a bronze tripod to a birthday, and there is also a plot of a Western restaurant. I accidentally saw a short paragraph, searched it, and found that it was very similar. 😘😘😘
















