She Got the Wrong Script for the First Place on the List, Right?
by Numb Hands
About This Novel
[Holographic online game + apocalypse] [Ding dong! The "Doomsday Survival" holographic game has been fully launched. This game uses the most advanced biological access technology and is 99%+ realistic. The game will officially launch at 02:00:00, players please be ready to log in! * [World Channel] System: Ding dong! Congratulations to players "****", "*****", and "*****" for completing the "Dock Contest" instance! For the first time since the Doomsday server was launched, I saw a dungeon clearance notification on the World Channel. All the players were shocked: Where did this big boss come from? ... However, not long after the main plot of the game started, the system clearance notification sounded again. This time twice, the players were still able to remain calm, but when they saw the clearance information that was constantly flooding the world channel, they all said that they had left the boss to the operation. Players: This is like taking the level-clearing achievement for fun! Gu Sheng, who had just cleared the dungeon, put away his knife, pinched his neck and raised the corners of his mouth: "Finish the fight and call it a day. Go back to the territory." * At first, the players who submitted the citizenship application to Gu Sheng never expected that the boss's territory could be so different. Citizens: "One in the sky and one on the earth" is not an adjective. This is really in the sky! The territorial citizens looked at the territorial mute floating in mid-air. * [Tips before reading: 1. No cp, unreasonable imagination growth article. 2. Some game settings refer to current online games. 3. Newbie, new article, the writing style may be a bit awkward, I hope you understand ~]
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Official(30)Scraped 4d ago
Now that I have roughly finished reading it, I would like to make some comments.
At some points the story is too bland and fails to attract attention, making it easy to get distracted. It's not satisfying when describing those difficult scenes. It seems that only the heroine understands it. It would be better if the details could be more detailed, the wrong things could be more obvious, and the heroine's thoughts could be written a little bit! This will give you a more immersive experience and allow you to think along the way, otherwise it would be easy not to read. Another thing is that the female protagonist's appearance rate is a bit low, and there are even fewer handsome female protagonists. When writing fighting scenes, describe how handsome the female protagonist is (after all, she is number one on the strength list, so it is natural that she is better than others!) This change will make the overall change more fascinating!
Looks good, I think...
When I update one chapter, I want the author to update two chapters. When I update two chapters, I want three chapters✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Abandoned the update? TTThank you so much😻
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Woohoo, I really like Dadada's books, but Dadada is so slow to update. Will Dadada give up?
a question
Hey, is there a fixed update time? The book is beautiful!
Good looking~
I came in when I saw no cp. Come on, come on, come on.
so?
So that leaf of unknown origin can become experience points for the vine?
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Community(0)
Official(30)Scraped 4d ago
Now that I have roughly finished reading it, I would like to make some comments.
At some points the story is too bland and fails to attract attention, making it easy to get distracted. It's not satisfying when describing those difficult scenes. It seems that only the heroine understands it. It would be better if the details could be more detailed, the wrong things could be more obvious, and the heroine's thoughts could be written a little bit! This will give you a more immersive experience and allow you to think along the way, otherwise it would be easy not to read. Another thing is that the female protagonist's appearance rate is a bit low, and there are even fewer handsome female protagonists. When writing fighting scenes, describe how handsome the female protagonist is (after all, she is number one on the strength list, so it is natural that she is better than others!) This change will make the overall change more fascinating!
Looks good, I think...
When I update one chapter, I want the author to update two chapters. When I update two chapters, I want three chapters✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Abandoned the update? TTThank you so much😻
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Woohoo, I really like Dadada's books, but Dadada is so slow to update. Will Dadada give up?
a question
Hey, is there a fixed update time? The book is beautiful!
Good looking~
I came in when I saw no cp. Come on, come on, come on.
so?
So that leaf of unknown origin can become experience points for the vine?
