Since Ancient Times, Talented People Have Emerged from the Red Mansion

Unexpectedly, I grabbed a sofa and wrote a book review for the first time. But I am also a veteran in novels. I have read two works and they are really good. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, it is to my taste. Come on, author, I will look forward to you.

Wang Yang is a very funny character, and in such a grand scene, the storyline becomes more and more fascinating. Every morning when I turn on my phone, I want to save some time and save it for reading in the afternoon when I get off work, but I can't help but finish it in one sitting.

Qingda, I haven't read novels online for a long time. I have always liked the style of novels you write. Recently, I read online the novel you wrote: The Best Dandy in the Tang Dynasty. The novel is written in a gray and humorous way, relaxed and beautiful, and it is a harem type. The ones with the harem queen type and the royal sister type are even more interesting. It's a pity that you haven't finished it, and you have written more than a thousand chapters. It's really a pity. I really want to read it, so here is a suggestion for you, Qingda. Maybe there is some reason why Qingda couldn't write this novel and didn't write it down in Chuangshi, but I still hope that Qingda can continue writing this novel until it is completed. Therefore, brothers are also willing to support you in writing by paying for subscriptions in other ways. I would like to suggest that you set up a Q group, and at the end of the work and each chapter of the book Red Mansions, inform subsequent readers who are interested in reading the book The Great Tang. They can join the Q group, pay you a certain fee, and ask for subsequent chapters of The Great Tang to read. I believe there will be many readers who like this book who are willing to pay you to subscribe to this book again. For example: each subsequent chapter will be charged 1 yuan per person, and each time you pay for the number of chapters you can write in a month - such as: 30 yuan / 30 chapters, or 60 yuan / 60 chapters, etc., You can set up a paid file for each reader who has subscribed to Shengtang to track it. ', And Qingda, you can set some hidden marks that you only know in the chapters of each subscribing reader, so as to prevent subscribing readers from posting the chapters. Qingda, while you are motivated to write it down, readers who like this book can also finish reading it. In fact, if the book "The Golden Tang Dynasty" continues to develop according to the plot, I think there is still a lot that can be written. It is okay to write 4-5 million words. Of course, I also hope that the book "The Golden Tang Dynasty" can be written with 4-5 million words. For example: conquer the warlord Caoer map; Strategy map for the issue of the Queen's return to the throne and the struggles between various forces and courtiers; After the Queen ascends the throne, the protagonist and the Queen and her daughters will get married, and the struggle strategy map will be hindered by the courtiers and forces; After marrying the Queen, the protagonist's road to power - including the road to becoming a prince - is a struggle strategy map, mixed with some funny storylines about the protagonist's harem life with the Queen and the daughters, such as: the protagonist and After the queen got married, she had a mansion outside the palace where she lived with her daughters, but she and her daughters moved to the harem of the queen's palace from time to time and lived with the queen in the harem, causing the palace to be in a mess and causing various dissatisfaction among many courtiers. This is an interesting scene. The map of conquering Qihuhe Grassland; the map of conquering the countries in the Western Regions; the map of conquering Tubo; the map of conquering the Tuyuhun tribe; the map of conquering Dashi further west in the Western Regions; the map of conquering the Korean Peninsula and Japanese Dwarf Islands; the map of conquering the Lingnan and Nanshao Kingdoms; Navigation and maritime trade strategy map; South China Sea countries and South China Sea development strategy map; A strategy map for the struggle against the path of political and military reform and the various forces that hinder it - such as: the cabinet system and parliamentary system mentioned in the novel, plus the establishment of a military academy, military staff, intelligence department, national security department, public security police, independent Ministry of Justice, court, prosecutor's office, Ministry of Commerce and Trade, Ocean Shipping and Ocean Trade Department, specialized tax department, etc., Well, there are many things that can be written... A strategy map that promotes commercial development and resolves conflicts with various forces such as land annexation. Strategies for promoting innovation and invention reforms, such as copyright bureaus and incentives, etc. The main character's strategy map of the world: rectify the world, recruit many martial arts masters who like to use force to break the ban, and recruit people into the intelligence department and security bureau established by the court to work as various spies, etc. Writing the above map guides allows the protagonist to walk around and go out, which can bring out a lot of plots. Of course, while using the same elements of the previous gray humor technique to write the protagonist's guide to the above guide maps, adding some protagonists and picking up some new girls to intersperse the plot should make the novel more interesting and not monotonous with some political plots. For example: at the beginning of the book "The Prosperous Tang Dynasty", the beauty of the world who kidnapped the protagonist together with the shameless Taoist priest's wife has never been written. It is too wasteful. If the protagonist conquers the world, You can let the protagonist have various entanglements with her and then take her into the harem. Yes, it would be better to add one or two beauties from the Jianghu sect to give the protagonist an entanglement strategy. For another example, as mentioned above in the protagonist guide, the Western Regions, Tubo, Dashi, Tuyuhun, Qihu, the Korean Peninsula, and the Japanese Islands, When Lingnan was conquering the kingdoms, let the protagonist interact with various exotic blond and black-haired beauties. It would be better to arrange for some of these exotic beauties to be queen-like beauties with status, such as Empress Li and Grandma Xu. It would be more enjoyable for the protagonist to entangle and conquer, such as: exotic princesses, queens, powerful daughters of powerful ministers, etc., And a series of love-hate entanglements between happy enemies would occur. In this way, the novel would be quite interesting. Qingda, if you have anything you can reply, or leave a contact information, or send me a text message on the site to discuss it.

This novel starts with describing how the brothel is, but the most illogical one in it is the Wang Po's daughter. Countless dignitaries are unable to get married. It is also said that courtesans are easy to get, but Liu Yiyi is difficult. Then Liu Yiyi seduces the protagonist in various ways, which is really speechless. Moreover, the author is like a primary school student and treats ancient people as if they don't know anything. Hahaha, the various ways of ancient people, especially brothels, are only what you can't imagine without them.

But there is something wrong with the song selection. I don't believe that ancient people would like Jay Chou's songs. Even older people have no interest in Jay Chou's songs.

Too much nonsense, grammatical problems, and difficult to read! Can't stand it anymore

Wow, it's really good👍The storyline is very attractive. I came to remind you in the middle of the night. Come on, the author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

After reading a few chapters, I saw that Li Qingzhao was defeated, and it was a story of a hero saving a beauty for more than ten years. More importantly, when the protagonist arrived, he was being manipulated and why Yiyi rushed to criticize the protagonist. He was so brainless! Do you still want to be pure and innocent in an entertainment venue without a backstage? ? ?

This book is okay

Author, could you please write one less paragraph for the next two paragraphs? I am a novelist and this is very annoying.