To Our Sweet and Happy Little Happiness
by The Lin Family Has An Immortal Named Qinglong
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Youthful campus romance and modern urban life. . . . . .
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Official(1)Scraped 16d ago
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The content is good, but I have a few comments: It means that the layout can be more concise. One long paragraph will make people feel tired. Multiple paragraphs will not only increase the number of pages perceptually, but also the same number of words will appear to have more words. Regarding the characters, there is no need to indicate the identity in parentheses, just mention it in the content, because it will feel awkward to indicate it specifically. In terms of language, it can be more descriptive and more vivid. The above are some of my opinions, I hope the author can adopt them.
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Official(1)Scraped 16d ago
About this novel
The content is good, but I have a few comments: It means that the layout can be more concise. One long paragraph will make people feel tired. Multiple paragraphs will not only increase the number of pages perceptually, but also the same number of words will appear to have more words. Regarding the characters, there is no need to indicate the identity in parentheses, just mention it in the content, because it will feel awkward to indicate it specifically. In terms of language, it can be more descriptive and more vivid. The above are some of my opinions, I hope the author can adopt them.
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