
Desert Island Exchange System
by Mo Yanjue
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Living on a desert island, activate the system, there will be bread, milk, everything!
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Official(5)Scraped 4d ago
Why is he also a dog licker?
Can you please stop licking too much? Licking a dog usually has no good end in the end. Also, isn't the pig's trotter a bit unreasonable? Although I know there is a system, but how could you be on a desert island with electricity? Isn't this a desert island novel? How can it be like pastoral life? It's also a bit like a casual article. (Author) didn't you find something wrong with what you wrote?
This number of words is not even enough to fit between my teeth!
Will you die if you don't lick?
You want to lick it all the way to the end! My head hurts if I don't look at it
I hope you don't spoil the heroine too much.
The basic desert island novels I found before had a female protagonist who basically kneeled down and licked her. If the heroine said anything, she would do it immediately, which looked very unpleasant. Hope this one isn't like those. It's not that he's too straight, he just wants some unreasonable conditions and doesn't agree to anything. You write about a desert island rather than an urban love story.
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Official(5)Scraped 4d ago
Why is he also a dog licker?
Can you please stop licking too much? Licking a dog usually has no good end in the end. Also, isn't the pig's trotter a bit unreasonable? Although I know there is a system, but how could you be on a desert island with electricity? Isn't this a desert island novel? How can it be like pastoral life? It's also a bit like a casual article. (Author) didn't you find something wrong with what you wrote?
This number of words is not even enough to fit between my teeth!
Will you die if you don't lick?
You want to lick it all the way to the end! My head hurts if I don't look at it
I hope you don't spoil the heroine too much.
The basic desert island novels I found before had a female protagonist who basically kneeled down and licked her. If the heroine said anything, she would do it immediately, which looked very unpleasant. Hope this one isn't like those. It's not that he's too straight, he just wants some unreasonable conditions and doesn't agree to anything. You write about a desert island rather than an urban love story.









