
Double Pass Through the Door, and the Evil-proof Sword Manual is Replaced by the Rabbit Charm at the Beginning!
About This Novel
Li Yulong, who grew up in America's Chinatown in Los Angeles, is 18 years old. On his birthday, an orb that allowed him to travel to a martial arts world suddenly appeared in front of him...
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Official(9)Scraped 2d ago
After reading dozens of chapters, I still have some problems with the beginning. The protagonist travels through the world of mixed martial arts and practices martial arts without collecting any skills. He relies on golden fingers and works hard to make money. Later, when practicing martial arts, he does not take any medicinal diet and eats junk food.
The creativity is very interesting, but there are too many poisonous points.
A policeman is chasing two women. One woman thinks he is handsome because he was hurt by a heartless man before. On the way to escape, I threw a bunch of hidden weapons at him. The protagonist's special ability is the rabbit charm, which means that others will know at a glance that he doesn't know martial arts and it will cost him his life. Before the protagonist could take action, the policeman took the initiative to stop him. Then the protagonist hits one of the women with a throwing knife. As soon as the protagonist heard that the person facing him was a policeman, he thought that he was a court eagle dog and did not want to deal with him. (In ancient times, policemen would rather delay the pursuit of criminals than save an ordinary passerby who did not know martial arts. This moral level is high enough.) You still dislike the court eagle dog! Then the two women announced their names as coming from the Yihua Palace, the top demonic power (everyone should know the concept.) Then the protagonist watched the two women escape. Did not take action again. The protagonist can easily win it. It is said that even if the other party just took action, it did not really threaten him. Moreover, the woman gave him an angry look before leaving. It's really going to poison me to death.
The author should think more about the description of some storylines of pig's feet in modern society. If the superpowers obtained by traveling between two worlds cannot be used in modern society, wouldn't it be like walking in brocade at night? This is a problem that many online articles from both worlds have never solved.
Double penetration, you escape to the third world? To be honest, my personal feeling is average, whether it's the protagonist's operation or the exploration of mixed martial arts.
It started out as a masterpiece, but the more I wrote, the more I started to read. Especially the last few chapters, I didn't even want to click on it.
It's interesting, it's interesting, it's interesting
What are you writing about? Sometimes it's in the third person and sometimes it's in the first person.
It feels like the protagonist can step on everyone's feet, but the protagonist still finds reasons not to resist and does not dare to kill people. The more I watch, the more frustrated I am.
It's a very good subject matter, but there are so many poisonous points that I really can't stand it.
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Official(9)Scraped 2d ago
After reading dozens of chapters, I still have some problems with the beginning. The protagonist travels through the world of mixed martial arts and practices martial arts without collecting any skills. He relies on golden fingers and works hard to make money. Later, when practicing martial arts, he does not take any medicinal diet and eats junk food.
The creativity is very interesting, but there are too many poisonous points.
A policeman is chasing two women. One woman thinks he is handsome because he was hurt by a heartless man before. On the way to escape, I threw a bunch of hidden weapons at him. The protagonist's special ability is the rabbit charm, which means that others will know at a glance that he doesn't know martial arts and it will cost him his life. Before the protagonist could take action, the policeman took the initiative to stop him. Then the protagonist hits one of the women with a throwing knife. As soon as the protagonist heard that the person facing him was a policeman, he thought that he was a court eagle dog and did not want to deal with him. (In ancient times, policemen would rather delay the pursuit of criminals than save an ordinary passerby who did not know martial arts. This moral level is high enough.) You still dislike the court eagle dog! Then the two women announced their names as coming from the Yihua Palace, the top demonic power (everyone should know the concept.) Then the protagonist watched the two women escape. Did not take action again. The protagonist can easily win it. It is said that even if the other party just took action, it did not really threaten him. Moreover, the woman gave him an angry look before leaving. It's really going to poison me to death.
The author should think more about the description of some storylines of pig's feet in modern society. If the superpowers obtained by traveling between two worlds cannot be used in modern society, wouldn't it be like walking in brocade at night? This is a problem that many online articles from both worlds have never solved.
Double penetration, you escape to the third world? To be honest, my personal feeling is average, whether it's the protagonist's operation or the exploration of mixed martial arts.
It started out as a masterpiece, but the more I wrote, the more I started to read. Especially the last few chapters, I didn't even want to click on it.
It's interesting, it's interesting, it's interesting
What are you writing about? Sometimes it's in the third person and sometimes it's in the first person.
It feels like the protagonist can step on everyone's feet, but the protagonist still finds reasons not to resist and does not dare to kill people. The more I watch, the more frustrated I am.
It's a very good subject matter, but there are so many poisonous points that I really can't stand it.









