Comprehensive Comic: Starting from Jobless Reincarnation

Elf makes sword dance: if it's not interesting, just skip it The plot of Sword Points to the Holy Land: The duel with the old sword god is barely watchable, but it is just an experience. Why bring Alice and Rudy, and then directly travel through the wonderful world without any scenes of Luo Qixi and the others? Wonderful World: It's boring. If you write it like this, I might as well just read the original work. Then the kingdom is inexplicably overthrown. If you have this time, you might as well write more about how you interact with Luo Qixi and the others. What Elina wrote made me want to strangle him to death. What Ariel wrote is inexplicable. I can only watch the fierce battle between the male protagonists. Then there is the battle against the Dragon God. The fight is barely watchable. The seven stars can be used to make things fun. The result is a one-shot pass. So what are you setting the stage for? Summary: What are you writing about? Although Asuna's writing is a bit unrealistic, I can see it and I can still read it if I write it carefully. There are interesting things in the front. Why do you slowly let yourself go? The skills you set for yourself are a mess. There are no skills that can make me feel. I can't understand it at all. What on earth are you writing?

Can't your talent be more normal? The talent introduction uses a lot of rhetoric, but the only useful one is the last sentence. Don't you think it's superfluous?

Chapter 6 can't stand it. I don't want to read on about a gangster brother who might be thinking about his sister-in-law in the future.

After reading it for a while, I found it to be okay, but the main character has dirty hands and feet and likes to pimp his younger brother, which hurts the character's image a bit.

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What I personally feel is lacking is that except for the inclusion of a few female protagonists, the other plots have not changed much. At first, I thought the protagonist would change the plot of Paul and Lilia, and then Lilia was accepted, but then the plot was not changed. I can only say that the first impression is very important, and so is reading novels. When you haven't read many chapters of a novel, there are some plots that you don't like very much, and then the little plots that you don't like will be amplified by readers who don't like the novel. I was okay at first, but then I felt a little bored. The plot can be said to be copied from the original, so I was a little impatient. After all, if some plots are not changed, it is better to read the original. Then at first, I felt like I wanted to accept Lilia, but After that, I followed the original plot without including Lilia, and gradually I lost the desire to read it. In addition, I switched back and forth between the two worlds. I wrote a few chapters in the main world before writing to another world, and I switched directly to the sub-world without even writing a few chapters in the main world. , Just like when you go to a friend's house to watch Jobless Tensei together, and when you are fascinated by it, your friend suddenly cuts to Sword Art Online. Although you also like watching Sword Art Online, what you want to watch at this time is Jobless Tensei, not Sword Art Online. Do you feel comfortable with this? In short, when you feel uncomfortable reading a novel, but you still read a few more chapters, then the small poisonous points of the novel will be magnified by you. So I originally wanted to give it four stars, but now I think about it and give it three stars.

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Sorry, dear readers, go read them all in the next update. There are too many typos, which have seriously affected your reading ability. Sorry, my question is really busy recently. Because I haven't saved the manuscript and it's going to start this week, I'm really anxious.

The Jobless Reincarnation is okay, but the other worlds are not good to watch. It makes me sleepy.

Not much to say, I'll give myself five stars.