
The Turbulent Era of Siheyuan
About This Novel
Lu Junpeng returned to that exciting era and was transferred to a steel rolling mill in the capital. He discovered that the house he had just been assigned was actually located in a courtyard full of friendship. Lu Junpeng, who had doubts, "carefully" integrated into the life of the courtyard, and then discovered that: all the residents in the courtyard were talented and well-spoken. Living in the same courtyard with them was so happy!
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Official(28)Scraped 18d ago
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Let's talk about your word count. You are introducing characters and various aspects. You may say you talk a lot, but your set of small words to describe all kinds of characters is quite normal.
Damn it, the Purchasing Department of College Students, you can imagine that the state trains talents to find those three melons and two dates for the leaders of the steel rolling mill.
I have never read the original novel of Siheyuan, only the battery drama. I feel that the writing of Siheyuan is a bit cruel. If it is a time-travel TV series, all the authors have written Qin Huairu's first master Jia Zhangshi as a bit too dark. All the authors are fighting against Yuzhu, and I feel that there is nothing wrong with it. With the eldest son Qin Huairu, He Yuzhu was able to get married early, have children, and live a happy life. However, if you analyze carefully, He Yuzhu's inability to get married was actually due to many factors. First of all, he had no parents to help him arrange marriages. At that time, marriages were arranged by his parents' matchmakers, and free love was rare. Moreover, he also had a He had a sister to support, and it was easy to offend others by speaking on his own. His job was good at that time, but what was much better than his job in Beijing was that he didn't have the opportunity to meet girls, etc. There were many aspects that made it difficult for him to get married. As for Qin Huairu ruining his blind date, it was actually not true. It's not that serious. I feel that the people in the courtyard are ordinary people. Ordinary people are not saints. Qin Huairu has his own little ideas. Is there anything wrong with the old man wanting to find someone to support him in his old age? It's wrong to steal things from a child, but there is no need to injure him or make him disabled.
After reading the author's acceptance speech, I couldn't help but feel a little chilled. If the protagonist doesn't end up (fighting birds with birds) and there are no characters in the plot, where does the sense of immersion come from? The protagonist is so handsome and lives next door to Brother Hat. Why not poke fun at Lou Zi?
The name should be changed [A tool man who helps Silly Zhu live a good life through the Siheyuan]
The protagonist is one (a tool for the Silly Pillar Brainless Gang, who changes his destiny). The whole book is basically written around the people in the Siheyuan. The protagonist has little sense of existence and basically does not have one. He will not use the golden finger even if he gets it. He is satisfied as a buyer. The next step is to participate in the affairs of the Siheyuan if he can. It doesn't matter if he can't participate. Anyway, the Siheyuan is still running. This is a very bad review. You know the plot well, have a strong time-travel relationship, and don't even do anything with Goldfinger? So what are you doing after traveling to the courtyard? So she became Silly Pillar's nanny? Change the fate of Silly Zhu so that he can live a normal life? Madonna type tool person. In fact, it doesn't matter whether you are male or female. The appearance is so good for nothing. Anyway, there is no emotional scene. It is the same if it is written as a eunuch. Maybe such a eunuch protagonist has more gimmicks.
The writing is okay, and there is basically no emotional line.
It feels like it was written with care. The length of Pig's Feet is a bit short, and the troubles in the Siheyuan are too much.
There is no need for the protagonist to exist anymore
The protagonist will show up in more than ten chapters later, and the protagonist will show up in more than ten chapters, so why write a special protagonist? It's all a trivial matter.
Very poisonous
The protagonist is born to be scolded, so it's great to be scolded by the Jia family every time he comes in or out.
Revolution, what is G life? I really don't understand.
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Official(28)Scraped 18d ago
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Let's talk about your word count. You are introducing characters and various aspects. You may say you talk a lot, but your set of small words to describe all kinds of characters is quite normal.
Damn it, the Purchasing Department of College Students, you can imagine that the state trains talents to find those three melons and two dates for the leaders of the steel rolling mill.
I have never read the original novel of Siheyuan, only the battery drama. I feel that the writing of Siheyuan is a bit cruel. If it is a time-travel TV series, all the authors have written Qin Huairu's first master Jia Zhangshi as a bit too dark. All the authors are fighting against Yuzhu, and I feel that there is nothing wrong with it. With the eldest son Qin Huairu, He Yuzhu was able to get married early, have children, and live a happy life. However, if you analyze carefully, He Yuzhu's inability to get married was actually due to many factors. First of all, he had no parents to help him arrange marriages. At that time, marriages were arranged by his parents' matchmakers, and free love was rare. Moreover, he also had a He had a sister to support, and it was easy to offend others by speaking on his own. His job was good at that time, but what was much better than his job in Beijing was that he didn't have the opportunity to meet girls, etc. There were many aspects that made it difficult for him to get married. As for Qin Huairu ruining his blind date, it was actually not true. It's not that serious. I feel that the people in the courtyard are ordinary people. Ordinary people are not saints. Qin Huairu has his own little ideas. Is there anything wrong with the old man wanting to find someone to support him in his old age? It's wrong to steal things from a child, but there is no need to injure him or make him disabled.
After reading the author's acceptance speech, I couldn't help but feel a little chilled. If the protagonist doesn't end up (fighting birds with birds) and there are no characters in the plot, where does the sense of immersion come from? The protagonist is so handsome and lives next door to Brother Hat. Why not poke fun at Lou Zi?
The name should be changed [A tool man who helps Silly Zhu live a good life through the Siheyuan]
The protagonist is one (a tool for the Silly Pillar Brainless Gang, who changes his destiny). The whole book is basically written around the people in the Siheyuan. The protagonist has little sense of existence and basically does not have one. He will not use the golden finger even if he gets it. He is satisfied as a buyer. The next step is to participate in the affairs of the Siheyuan if he can. It doesn't matter if he can't participate. Anyway, the Siheyuan is still running. This is a very bad review. You know the plot well, have a strong time-travel relationship, and don't even do anything with Goldfinger? So what are you doing after traveling to the courtyard? So she became Silly Pillar's nanny? Change the fate of Silly Zhu so that he can live a normal life? Madonna type tool person. In fact, it doesn't matter whether you are male or female. The appearance is so good for nothing. Anyway, there is no emotional scene. It is the same if it is written as a eunuch. Maybe such a eunuch protagonist has more gimmicks.
The writing is okay, and there is basically no emotional line.
It feels like it was written with care. The length of Pig's Feet is a bit short, and the troubles in the Siheyuan are too much.
There is no need for the protagonist to exist anymore
The protagonist will show up in more than ten chapters later, and the protagonist will show up in more than ten chapters, so why write a special protagonist? It's all a trivial matter.
Very poisonous
The protagonist is born to be scolded, so it's great to be scolded by the Jia family every time he comes in or out.
Revolution, what is G life? I really don't understand.











