Someone Moved the Video in Luofu, and Jing Yuanyuan Died at the Beginning
About This Novel
Shen Yuan traveled to the world of Starry Railway and became an ordinary Immortal species resident on the Immortal Boat. However, as a time traveler, he has awakened the most powerful transport system. As long as he keeps transporting videos about the Star Dome Railway from a well-known dating website, he can continuously increase his power until he surpasses the Star God! Once the video was released, it immediately aroused a strong response. Jingyuan: "Sure enough, no matter what I raise, it will become super big?" Xing: "Do I really love digging through trash cans that much?" Clara: "All Clara can think about right now is 'Help me, Mr. Swallow.'" March 7: "So I am a JO creature??"
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Official(121)Scraped 19d ago
If you write this kind of article and make the protagonist a mere decoration, then don't write the protagonist. You have written a protagonist, but if you don't have a role for the protagonist, it's very... Especially if you have written a protagonist, and you post a video where the female character calls someone else's husband, and the male character calls someone else's wife, hahaha....
The protagonist's role in this novel accounts for 0.9% of the entire novel.
If the protagonist hadn't occasionally come out to make a bubble, I almost forgot about the main character This novel. The only flaw is the presence of the main character. Too low. It accounts for about 0.9%
Different from traditional video text
It's just mediocre. The video and then the barrage are all text, and the promotion is the protagonist. There is no reward after the video, so bland. The barrage is very noisy. In fact, the more I watch it, the more I get tired of it.
So-so
To be honest, I was confused when I watched it. I really didn't know what was funny or exciting. There were too many second creations. Maybe I didn't understand second creations! But if you keep writing about second creations like this, you will lose a lot of readers. After all, not everyone reads second creations.
The head is starting to look good. But suddenly a bunch of English appeared. It looks awkward.
You've only released more than 20 chapters? So anxious to make money?
All I do is watch videos and chat all day long, there is no routine at all, and there is no drama about the collapse of the iron.
There is no movement except for the protagonist coming out from time to time. The content is all about video content and chatting. He has no idea what the main plot is. He just watches videos and chats all day long. There is no other daily life. There is no storyline about the collapse of iron. The protagonist is even more outrageous. He is not online all day long.
It was okay at the beginning, but now it's getting more and more uncomfortable to write. I feel like I write every day just to complete the task. I no longer have the same passion as at the beginning.
Your English is a bit too much, so it's best to add your own comments. Ordinary people may not be able to understand it🐶
Thanks to the author for letting me know more Bengtie fan UP masters
I mainly watch Bilibili😶. The author's descriptions of some videos are very good, reaching a level of proficiency. In addition, I also like to watch some fans. 😯 In short! Tech nerd, save the world! ...
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Community(0)
Official(121)Scraped 19d ago
If you write this kind of article and make the protagonist a mere decoration, then don't write the protagonist. You have written a protagonist, but if you don't have a role for the protagonist, it's very... Especially if you have written a protagonist, and you post a video where the female character calls someone else's husband, and the male character calls someone else's wife, hahaha....
The protagonist's role in this novel accounts for 0.9% of the entire novel.
If the protagonist hadn't occasionally come out to make a bubble, I almost forgot about the main character This novel. The only flaw is the presence of the main character. Too low. It accounts for about 0.9%
Different from traditional video text
It's just mediocre. The video and then the barrage are all text, and the promotion is the protagonist. There is no reward after the video, so bland. The barrage is very noisy. In fact, the more I watch it, the more I get tired of it.
So-so
To be honest, I was confused when I watched it. I really didn't know what was funny or exciting. There were too many second creations. Maybe I didn't understand second creations! But if you keep writing about second creations like this, you will lose a lot of readers. After all, not everyone reads second creations.
The head is starting to look good. But suddenly a bunch of English appeared. It looks awkward.
You've only released more than 20 chapters? So anxious to make money?
All I do is watch videos and chat all day long, there is no routine at all, and there is no drama about the collapse of the iron.
There is no movement except for the protagonist coming out from time to time. The content is all about video content and chatting. He has no idea what the main plot is. He just watches videos and chats all day long. There is no other daily life. There is no storyline about the collapse of iron. The protagonist is even more outrageous. He is not online all day long.
It was okay at the beginning, but now it's getting more and more uncomfortable to write. I feel like I write every day just to complete the task. I no longer have the same passion as at the beginning.
Your English is a bit too much, so it's best to add your own comments. Ordinary people may not be able to understand it🐶
Thanks to the author for letting me know more Bengtie fan UP masters
I mainly watch Bilibili😶. The author's descriptions of some videos are very good, reaching a level of proficiency. In addition, I also like to watch some fans. 😯 In short! Tech nerd, save the world! ...
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