Feng Jing Jiu Que: the Beautiful Evil King Chases His Wife
by Jiang Ran
About This Novel
[Reader base 646527104, the stepping stone is any character name! This is a story about two arrogant people who were both willing to fall into each other's hands in the end. All the grudges and grudges in the current world were wiped out, and they traveled back to the third lady of the Bai family. So what if she had to live a new life as a loser, she had to go against this fate! But it's hard to repay favors, so she was also helpless. "Don't be so nice to me. I can't afford to repay the favor." "If you can't afford it, then don't pay it back." You must have evil intentions, but I am just up to no good. Some people are destined to fall into his hands with just one look. Spend the rest of your life with me.
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Official(31)Scraped 1d ago
The book review is here. I wonder if there are any updates?
When I first watched it, the most impressive thing was the innocent and unpretentious names of the male and female protagonists. They were simple, refreshing, clean and beautiful. The writing style is concise and pure, not delicate and artificial, nor does it moan in vain, which is considered beautiful. The plot is complete, although the development is slow, but fortunately, the heroine's character is reserved and reserved, not overt and exposed, more like an outsider. The hero's character is not full enough, the author can add some descriptions, not about appearance, but more about demeanor and psychology. Last point Add more
daily trick-or-treating
Ah, my shoulder hurts... I really want someone to squeeze my shoulder... Ladies? ? ?
I support Miss Ovo, because I also write on the website, so I understand it very well. It is not easy to find time to code the article in normal times. The article is very beautiful!
This candy is killing me! ! Be sure to be sweet, don't brake! ! Go on! (*/Ω＼*)
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After the two new chapters came out, bugs started to appear. Because I am looking for bugs while watching, it may be a bit messy. This kind of bug can cause a lot of trouble, so be careful. 1. It's still Bi Luo's character and persona. If you are friends with the heroine, you should explain it in the previous article. Otherwise, a maid should still have the character of a maid. If there is no explanation, some words will appear very abrupt. 2. A description, Chapter 4 "A slight smile on the face." ? ? ? ? ? 3. In Chapter 4, the heroine spit out blood and knew that all the toxins were forced out. Unexpected. It wouldn't hurt to add a little more description to make the transition. 4. Chapter 5 describes "Light Blue Dress"? ? ? ? Maybe what I want to express is the duffle clothes in ancient times, but when written like this, it is easy to be misunderstood and it is very dramatic. 5. "Bai Xi, good name, light and hope." Although there is nothing wrong with "light and hope" here, it makes people feel out of place when reading it. It suddenly jumps from ancient style to chicken soup... It is better to omit it directly, but it can enhance the character of the character. 6. The heroine's character should still be foreshadowed. Or there is a psychological description. Otherwise, it would be very abrupt to suddenly ask a strange man about his spiritual pulse.
It's very well written. I've read a lot. Keep updating, little sister.
. .
Come on, come on
OK
OK, great support [rose]
Come on come on
[bad laugh][bad laugh][bad laugh]
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Official(31)Scraped 1d ago
The book review is here. I wonder if there are any updates?
When I first watched it, the most impressive thing was the innocent and unpretentious names of the male and female protagonists. They were simple, refreshing, clean and beautiful. The writing style is concise and pure, not delicate and artificial, nor does it moan in vain, which is considered beautiful. The plot is complete, although the development is slow, but fortunately, the heroine's character is reserved and reserved, not overt and exposed, more like an outsider. The hero's character is not full enough, the author can add some descriptions, not about appearance, but more about demeanor and psychology. Last point Add more
daily trick-or-treating
Ah, my shoulder hurts... I really want someone to squeeze my shoulder... Ladies? ? ?
I support Miss Ovo, because I also write on the website, so I understand it very well. It is not easy to find time to code the article in normal times. The article is very beautiful!
This candy is killing me! ! Be sure to be sweet, don't brake! ! Go on! (*/Ω＼*)
Give a brief review
Like it! Come on more
Daily short comments
After the two new chapters came out, bugs started to appear. Because I am looking for bugs while watching, it may be a bit messy. This kind of bug can cause a lot of trouble, so be careful. 1. It's still Bi Luo's character and persona. If you are friends with the heroine, you should explain it in the previous article. Otherwise, a maid should still have the character of a maid. If there is no explanation, some words will appear very abrupt. 2. A description, Chapter 4 "A slight smile on the face." ? ? ? ? ? 3. In Chapter 4, the heroine spit out blood and knew that all the toxins were forced out. Unexpected. It wouldn't hurt to add a little more description to make the transition. 4. Chapter 5 describes "Light Blue Dress"? ? ? ? Maybe what I want to express is the duffle clothes in ancient times, but when written like this, it is easy to be misunderstood and it is very dramatic. 5. "Bai Xi, good name, light and hope." Although there is nothing wrong with "light and hope" here, it makes people feel out of place when reading it. It suddenly jumps from ancient style to chicken soup... It is better to omit it directly, but it can enhance the character of the character. 6. The heroine's character should still be foreshadowed. Or there is a psychological description. Otherwise, it would be very abrupt to suddenly ask a strange man about his spiritual pulse.
It's very well written. I've read a lot. Keep updating, little sister.
. .
Come on, come on
OK
OK, great support [rose]
Come on come on
[bad laugh][bad laugh][bad laugh]
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